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there was a man born inside the matrix...MY STORY  

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this is my story of the man born inside the matrix..

on sunday the 5th of october 1980 in a small city on the eastern coast of australia, there was a child born.
this caucasian baby boy was his parents 3rd child, and would always be the youngest of his immediate family.
this healthy child was born 1 week early, and at 12.45pm on the above date.
this child was named matthew.
matthews's mother instantly knew that he was special, and matthew grew up having the notion that he wasnt a normal kid.
it wasnt a bad normal, as matthew was healthy, pure, gifted and a handsome boy.
matt was also born with a mark on his left hand. this mark had a big mark at the top, and a small part at the bottom.
matthew also believed he was special because of this marking
matthews childhood went very fast and very happily.

his life through his teenage years was very hard. matthew developed a lot of insecurities, seemingly for no reason at all.

it wasnt until one day on a holiday trip to a country town in queensland, that matthew had his first taste of just how special he was.
matthews mother had bought him a toy windtube, as matthews mother always succumbed to his demands.
not long after he got home with his new toy. he went outside and started to twirl the windpipe around wildly in the air. it was a sunny day, and matt believed that he could make it rain with his windpipe.
matt returned inside the house, and not much time had pasted before it began to rain. matthew was astonished.
he then preceded back outside. he got his windtube and flung it around in the air, believeing that he could make it sunny again. sure enough, the sun reapeared.
and matt went back inside to tell his mum about it.
his mum dismissed it and matt forgot all about it.

matt went a while without thinking anything of it.
and soon after girls started taking an interest in matt.
matt never took a girl, as he wanted to stay a virgin for as long as possible. matt seemingly had a great effect on the people around him.

then one day a man called christopher came into matthews life. CHRISTopher was 8 years older and seemed to have everything in common with matt.
matt fell into christophers trap.

for no reason at all chris became nasty to matt, and started to give him death threats. matt was bewildered.
christopher always seemed to know what was on matts mind. but matt never thought about this until christophers voice started to talk to him in his mind.

matt got tortured by this voice for more than 3 years, physicaly and mentally.

until one day this voice started to make funny things happen aound matt. matthew instantly came to the conclusion that the world he lived in wasnt real.
after 1 month matt came to the conclusion that he was living in the matrix. after alot of wrestling with this voice.

matt had seen the first matrix movie twice for free, 5 years earlier

matt assumed that he was the man born inside the matrix, and he tryed changing things.
sure enough, what he wanted to happen happened, and things were changing at his command.

after this long stint, matt came to the conclusion that he had to select people to be freed.
matt picked the healthiest, smartest, purest children that he could muster.
shortly after that, matt freed the children from the matrix. by believing that he could.

when matt woke up. he found that people were on racks, not in pods.
matt gathered the children and led them to zion, from an imprint he had in his mind.
the oracle must of programed this into him.

matt got the children to zion, where he clothed them and fed them, and told them to get some rest.

the next day matt layed the law to the kids.
he told them the truth of what happened, and told them who he was.
matthew preached his word for 15 years. he died mysteriously at the age of 40.

only the good die young

THE END

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That was nice!
Thanks I enjoyed it and read it with interest a second time too.
Meanwhile, going back to the movie and "there was a man born inside the matrix...", here are my thoughts:

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The function of the ONE is to select 23 humans (16 females, 7 males) and rebuild Zion...

Now, for every new version of the Matrix, these 23 could be said to be the "first few free people"... right?

And so, to the 23 freed people (for every version of the Matrix), the person freeing them could seem to be "the man born inside Matrix who could change things and who freed the first few"... right?

The human who is selected to carry the ONE code (and rebuild Zion with 23 humans) in Matrix Version Number X is "seen" as the MAN BORN INSIDE THE MATRIX in Matrix Version Number X+1---makes a lot of sense don't it ;--)

This person is already old and eventually dies.

And then, according to the prophecy in each version, this person is supposed to be reborn----YES! All that is done is that a new human is identified from the CROPS to carry the ONE code---and he's labeled the new ONE---or the reborn ONE!

Aaah, is there anything better than to post here and to drink something

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hi deep

you will find that the man born inside the matrix is a free spirit. he is not controlled by the parameters of the matrix.
he has choice. you will find that no one else does.
the man born inside is a special man.

he remade the matrix as he saw fit. which means that he had a choice in who he freed.
he was born a child in the matrix. hence the born part.
he was under no instruction from the machine.

the one is the creation of the oracle. the oracle sees this man as god.
the machine is the devil, always trying to persuade the good to see badly.

if he had to free 16 females and 7 males, excuse my french.
you will find that there would eventually be incest.
zion is a place of god. you will find that the architect is mocking that.

have you ever heard of midian?

midian in folklore is a city underground, it is a city of monsters. while the normal people are on the surface.

the architect is saying that we are freaks. and if he had his way, we most certainly wouldnt be far off it.

the machine is sick.
the oracle is pure.

there is only 1 chosen man.

if you can make a human, then you will certainly have no problems in making a virtual world for him.
the notion of there being 5 previous ones is a lie.

dont believe the line that states there was 2 failed matrix's.
the machine is warped, it wants man to suffer.

at the end of revolutions when the movie states that the architect knows more than the oracle. this is wrong
i believe that the oracle can hear the whole machine world, including the boss machine.
the bad machine doesnt know the oracle. hence the hidden number on her apartment.

thanks for reading

Deep

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I am not sure what you are saying.

You appear to be saying almost everything is a lie! I think you should see the movies again... really, no offence meant Smile

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i do understand where you are coming from.
but dont you understand the part about the first one changing anything he wanted.
this means that he was a free spirit in the matrix

you dont actually believe that if the architect couldnt look past choice, that he would change his mind in the end.

its like taking a religious fanatic and making him follow the devil. or vice versa.

someone is lying.
and i believe the architect is the liar.
but the movie makes out that the oracle is the liar.
the last 2 movies dont make sense im afraid.
both of them cant be lying.
and in m1 what the oracle says comes true.
so make sense of that.

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That was a great Story ... do u think that he is The NEXT one ? 3Tooth 3Tooth

I Believe it's True , It Wasn't A Dream !!
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Cool

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what do you think?  

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what do you guys think of this story?

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Okay, I have read several posts of yours and have replied to a few of them. I seriously think you are crazy. You REALLY believe that there is a Matrix and that you are The One. Your story is mostly a true story about your life, and you talk of being abused, possibly sexually abused. I am sorry if that happened to you. If I lived in your area I would seriously consider contacting the authorities and have them look into mysterious disappearances/murders of young children. It disturbs me greatly that you speak of freeing "pure" little children and taking them into the real world and building Zion. After reading your other posts, I really do believe you need some serious professional help. If you are offended by this, maybe you need to be offended. Seriously, dude, get a grip....

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think whatever you want to believe sentinal.
you are the one with a sick mind thinking about such a thing.
morpheus states in the movie that you donot free a mind once its past a certain age.
my interpretation of it is that adults are too old to be freed.
SO GO FIGURE

what brought you to such a conclusion anyway.
is it the fact that you cant see past your own head space?
or that you come to conclusions too easily.

its people like you that sit on juries and say he is guilty without evidence.

i said the purest healthiest smartest kids, because
i thought that he would free children to give them a new start.it would be easier for them to handle..

you obviously have a problem whenever the k word is used.
i think you are the one with the problem, and you just want to believe what you want to believe.

why do you have a problem with me on this website anyway?
are you too narrow minded to acept new view points on this website.

and by the way i object to you coming to such conclusions about abuse.
nowhere in the story was sexual abuse mentioned.

i think you need to get a grip..

thankyou very much

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You know, my post was inexcusable, and I apologize. It was entirely out-of-character for me to say such things, and I truly apologize for offending you. That is all I will say on the matter, and I look forward to seeing more of your posts on this site.

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THE_FIRST_ONE wrote:

why do you have a problem with me on this website anyway?
are you too narrow minded to acept new view points on this website.


The_first_one, there is a difference in putting your point of views across and then there is pure madness.

I believe in things as well, somethimes i believe that i am crazy. but the things that i say on this website, or the questions that i ask make scence there rational. but your posts, your thoughts, opinions, etc are mad, there insanse, and i think sentinal is right you may need some help.

"Too know the truth, you must first look past the lie."
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So I'm Not The Only One....  

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Thanks, Neo1. I kinda felt bad, but there is just something not right here. And most of the post make no sense at all, literally and figuratively. Partial or run-on sentences, spouting the same nonsensical arguments over and over, and then I read this story and....GEEZ!

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Sentinel_3.0 wrote:

Thanks, Neo1. I kinda felt bad, but there is just something not right here. And most of the post make no sense at all, literally and figuratively. Partial or run-on sentences, spouting the same nonsensical arguments over and over, and then I read this story and....GEEZ!


I dont know, i think the best thing to do is let him post, but the rest of us dont pay much attention to him.

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I counter argued his spoon-theory on a very hard way and is it a coincidence that he is not replying so fast as he normally does? Because now all of a sudden he hasn't replied for days.

It doesn't have to mean he is crazy. I have seen more guys shooting of theories that made no sense at all and they still kept believing in them.

It's merely a combination of fantasy combined with a huge unhealthy ego. I think that he doesn't understand M2 and M3, so his 'dream' of the One from M1 has been broken and that's why his psyche tries to outnumber M2 and M3 in order to keep his dream from M1 (which he did understand) in tact.

But that's just a guess. Don't try to judge someone's psyche, because appearances can always be deceiving.

He might appear arrogant, but he gives others credit for being smart too. Just respect him, his theories have fallen already.

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Mobil_Ave_Neo wrote:

He might appear arrogant, but he gives others credit for being smart too. Just respect him, his theories have fallen already.
Saying you respect someone and actually showing respect are two very different things.

Same with him calling me and others smart persons ... it just doesn't sound well/genuine to me, like he uses it out of the blue : how do you interpret it ?

When he says it, does it mean he agrees that the persons interpretation (which might differ from his) is/might be (as) good?, I yet have to see him acknowledge that his pov is not THE pov.

or is it in a rather sarcastic/ironic sense ?

To me, it just has no meaning if you say something like that out of the blue.


But I still give him the benefit of the doubt ... with the motto 'treat other like you want to be treated', I will always try to show respect to other people (posters)

Equality and freedom are not luxuries to lightly cast aside.
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Yes you have a point there!

I respect him, but not his theories Smile

To my opinion 90% of them is full of crap.

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You say that he has choice. But unfortunetly he does not. Why?
-there is the "path of the one". The Oracle knows everything about it not becouse she forsees the future, but becouse there is so called faith. Faith meens that everyone (even the One) is controled by the system, and even if one is aware of the choice, one always choses what the Matrix wants him to chose. That meens one (no mater if it's the one or anyone else) has no choice.
-The first moment when Neo has the choice is the sast few seconds of the Final Fight against Smith:
S: "Why mr. Anderson why? Why do you do that, why, why get up? Why keep fighting? (...) Why mr. Anderson, why, why, why do you presist?"
N: "Becouse I choose to..."
- What The Oracle says to Niobe:
tO: "I KNEW (this conversation takes place after Neo gets to Architect. So she doesn't say know...) everything from the begining of this path to the END"
N: "I don't understand..."
tO: "Noone can see beeond the end"

You said "the one is the creation of the oracle", but I don't think so. That is true but only in one meening. The One is a result of creating the Oracle (source: The conversation with the Arcitect). The One is a mistake of the system, however his existance can't be eliminated, so he is used to be the former of Zion - the Matrix's trash can.

"the notion of there being 5 previous ones is a lie.

dont believe the line that states there was 2 failed matrix's.
the machine is warped, it wants man to suffer. " That's a lie. The Machines ware 100% rational when they created the Matrix. They didn't want people to suffer. Sisten to what Smith said in the first movie. They treat us more like food (smith calls us crops) than something what they would like to see suffering... The only thing they want is to keep us sleping to get energy from our bodies, and that's why there was the first matrix that was designed to be the perfect human world where non suffer, when everyone could be happy. becouse they thought that puting us in a world like this would be the best way to keep us sleeping.

"at the end of revolutions when the movie states that the architect knows more than the oracle. this is wrong" no it's not. The Oracle knows nothing becouse the path has ended.
the evidence of that fact is almost everything what the oracle says in the 2 and 3. for example, what she says to ghost: "If somehow we do survive, if the path does continue I HOPE it's made by others like you." Oracle knows nothing about the part of thepath of Neo after he goes into the Architect's room. And that's becouse this is where the path of the One end, and the path of Neo begines.

However the greatness of Matrix is that everyone can see in it whatever they want.

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i am sorry for the way that i sound, and i really dont mean any offence to anybody.
but what i am trying to get across is, is that.

when you figure out the first movie, it destroys all the theories surrounding m2 and m3. this might sound funny, but.

there are clues in the first movie which cancel out what the architect says in reloaded and revolutions.

examples...
1.i have seen neos reflection in all of the spoons, this happens in the last shot of when the orphan picks up the spoon. in the first spoon you see a figure of a man. in the rest of the spoons i see neo with glasses on. the spoons are bent in a funny way, which i think means that the previous ones had failed.
ah but get this.
the orphan says that there is no spoon. so i gather that there are no previous ones. there are 6 spoons and 6 reflections. so i gather that this means previous anomalies.

2.in the oracles apartment just as the oracle sits down, you will see the camera follow her to the sitting position.
behind her are some coffee mugs.the camera swings towards them and back only revealing 3 when there is likely to be more.
i relate this to the camera showing that there is only the trinity.. neo being the trinity.
the man born inside is the first part of the trinity, and neo is the 2nd.. the holy trinity consists of the father, the son, and the holy spirit.
trinity is called trinity because neo is meant to be with her.

3. and now to the biscuits..
this is a funny one.
if neo was the sixth one. wouldnt he be taking the 6th biscuit. there are 6 biscuits. but wouldnt the man born inside have taken one to,?if there were 6 anomalies.

and why would there still be 5 left on the tray?
i believe that this shows that there have not been five other anomalies that have taken a biscuit< as there is still 5 left.

4.the first one had a choice right?
so how would he free 23 people without handing them a red pill. you have to be given a choice to know what the matrix is.
so i believe that the first one wouldnt free them with his power. after all.. that is impossible when people are in pods.

i might seem a bit extreme at times, but i am trying to get you guys to see something.
and i do accept your apology sentinel.
parts of my story may have seemed bad, but i really didnt have the intention to offend anybody.

i believe that the matrix movies are more than just a movie..
i believe that they are a game. and people are getting sucked into it.
i dont want to discourage anybody from being on this site.
and i do accept everybodies ideas.
but there are 2 ways to go on this forum.
there is a thing called choice.
you either believe me, or you dont..
its up to you..

thankyou for reading

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