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Ok, the name of this story is Matrix Untitled. It is interactive because You decide the outcome of the story. I will start it, and anybody is welcome to keep on continuing. Here are the rules:

1. Keep the story as Entertaining as Possible.

2. Structure it so that it will be able to be continued(e.g. He then felt the cold steel of a gun pressing against the back of his head then in an instant....)

3. Continue where the other person left off.

Ok, let me give an example:

I would write:

*touches earpiece*

Agent Johnson: Description...middle-aged...caucasion...dark clothing, We have visual proceeding as instructed.

- He then felt the cold steel of a gun pressing against the back of his head then in an instant....

Then someone else would continue and write:

-He quickly drew his .50 pistol and now their guns were point blank, at each others face.

-Just as Neo was about to open fire, Agent Johnson was overcome by a black substance.

Neo: It can't be....

Smith: Mr. Anderson!....

ok so its open to continue.


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NEO-SMITH!

AGENT SMITH LAUGHS AS HE DISAPPEARS INTO NOTHINGNESS USING THE MATRIX CODE FOR COVER.

IN FRONT OF NEO

JOHNSON/SMITH CLONE-FOLLOW ME IF YOU WANT TOO SEE HER LIVE.

JOHNSON/SMITH CLONE GRABS WHO APPEARED TO AGENT JOHNSON TO BE ANOTHER ZIONITE NOT NEO'S VIGILANT COMPANION TRINITY WHO HAS BEEN INJURED. THEY DROP BELOW GROUND BY WAY OF A MANHOLE COVER. NEO FOLLOWS TO SAVE HER.

TRINTIY/SMITH CLONE TO JOHNSON/SMITH CLONE-GLAD YOU COULD JOIN US AWAY FROM PRYING EYES(KISSES HIS RIGHT CHEEK).

THE CITY'S SUNLIGHT SHINES DOWN THROUGH A SEWER GRATE ILLUMINATING THE DANK AND URINE SOAKED ABYSS SURROUNDING NEO AND AGENT SMITH'S CLONES FLANKING HIM ON BOTH SIDES OF THE TUNNEL.

TRINTIY/SMITH CLONE-HERE WE ARE AGAIN INSIDE THE BELLY OF THE BEAST. HUNTING EACH OTHER LIKE CAT AND MOUSE. I MYSELF MORE CAT THAN MOUSE. WHILE YOU, YOU RUN FROM ONE HOLE IN THE WALL TO ANOTHER.
PURPOSELY AVOIDING OUR QUALITY TIME.

NEO-YOU MAY HAVE COPYED YOURSELF BUT YOUR STILL A RAT.

NEO READING TRINITY'S CARRIER SIGNAL AND JOHNSON'S AGENT PROGRAM AIDED BY THE MATRIX CODE DITCHES HIS .50 PISTOL DESIRING A MORE HANDS ON APPROACH TO HIS FACE OFF.

SPLOOSH (GUN DROPPING INTO THE MURKY ANKLE DEEP CITY SEWAGE)

TRINTY/SMITH CLONE-ARE YOU SURRENDING SO EASILY SO WILLINGLY. WHERE IS THE FUN IN THAT.

JOHNSON/SMITH CLONE DEVILISHLY SMILING.

NEO- LETS SEE YOU HUNT THIS.

THE CITY GRATE SERVING AS A SKYLIGHT CASTS A BLACK SHADOW INTO THE SEWER. THE SKY IS DARKNED BY NEO FORCING A GLITCH IN THE MATRIX. SWITCHING DAY INTO NIGHT. NEO RUNS USING THE DARKNESS FOR COVER.

TRINTY/SMITH CLONE TO JOHNSON/SMITH CLONE(IN UNISON)- MR ANDERSON. COME OUT, COME OUT WHERE EVER YOU ARE.

FEAR DOUBT AND DISBELIEF, FREE YOUR MIND
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Smiths: I will find you Mr.Anderson, it is Inevitable

-Neo takes flight and then with mach bending speeds charge at Trinity/Smith, then it breaks into bullet time.

Neo: Im sorry Trin, but i have to do this.

-WHAM! Neo punches Trinity/Smith into the ground forming a meteor like crater.

-The Smith virus then fades away and she is back to normal, he holds her gently in his arms.

Neo: Are you alright?

Trinity(weakly): Yea, im*grunt*ok...

Neo: I promise I wont let anything like this ever happen to you again, as long as I breath I will protect you.

-She smiles, but then it suddenly turned upside down as she gasped for breath to speak and her eyes open widely.

Neo(holding her tightly now): Trinity whats wrong?

-Then a sudden strike of terror comes into him as he sees the reflection of Johnson/Smith's .50 pistol in Trinity's eye, pointing at the back of his head....

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Neo moves his head dodging the bullet, and it hits Trinity in the eye...

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*Pant pant pant*

Trinity: No.

Neo: Trinity whats wrong?

-She looks around her only to realise that it was just a nitemare.

Trinity(relieved): Oh just a bad dream thank god!

-Neo hugs her with compassion.

Neo: Go back to sleep honey, we have a big day ahead of us.

*knock knock knock*

-The knob to their door slowly turns....

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And in jumps a drunken Morpheus.

"You..you are The One, man. YOU RULE!"

"Yes, I know that. Now get out, you loon, I was just about to get some!"



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I am truely sorry for this post.... but it was calling my name. Please disregard this if you want....

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a drunk Morpheus takes off his pants and proceeds to moon the One and Trinity.

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A dark figure emerges from the doorway, a gleaming pistol in his hand.
A bullet explodes from the gun, hitting trinity in the eye...

"Neither the wind nor the flag is moving. It is your mind that's moving." Master HuiNeng
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TRINITY FLIES BACKWARD SLAMMING AGAINST THE CHEAP HOTEL WALL OF ROOM 101. NEO WATCHES IN DISBELIEF AS A SILVER BULLET PROTRUDES FROM TRINITY'S HEAD WOUND. THE DARK FIGURE EMERGES AS THE SUN RISES THROUGH THE WINDOW TO CARESS HER SHAPELY FORM...

NEO HOLDING TRINITY WITH TEARS IN HIS EYES, THE WOMAN SPEAKS...

PERSOPHENE-I WAS NEVER ONE FOR RELIGIOUS FANATICS OR SEXUAL COMPETITON.

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-Trinity slowly dies(as usual) in Neo's arms....When Neo is sure of her death, he wipes his tears and as his hand swoops across his face it uncovers a sly smile...

Neo: And I was never one for being tied down to the same woman for to long.

-Persephone then moves unto the bed and she and Neo start f*%$ing!

Persephone: Yes! Yes! Yes! Ohh Neo!

Merovingian: What is this! I am not Neo!

-She realises she was merely daydreaming.

Persephone: No! Lover, I can explain!

Merovingian: Nom de dieu de putain de bordel de merde de saloperie de connard d'enculé de ta mère!

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the Merovingian wakes up in bed with Neo...

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-Persephone quickly runs out and closes the door behind her, when she hears what sounds like dogs fighting each other. She follows the sound down the hallway, where she slightly opens to the door to see none other than the Twins all over each other like a dog on a mailman!

Persephone- Mind if I join you?

Twin 1- Unless you haven't noticed,

Twin 2- We are fags.

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Neo: what's the matter dear?
Merv: Oh it was another nightmare, I was in bed with Persephone, ptuh!
Neo: this will make you feel better.
Merv: Ooohh!

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Neo wakes up in bed with Morpheus.
Morpheus: What's the matter dear?
Neo: I was in bed with the Merovingian and then we were having sex.
Morpheus: I'm gonna bust a cap in his ass.
Neo: it was just a dream.
Morpheus: i was referring to you.

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-Morpheous wakes up. He is now in bed with Niobe.

Morpheous: Niobe? This cant be right, she left my "prophesizing " ass a long time ago.

-Just as he is about to really wake up he notices that Commander Locke walks into the room.

Morpheous(thinking): Hmmm, I think I'll keep on dreaming a little longer*sly grin*....

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... Ghost is sitting in his garden, meditating...
IN Walks Trinity wearing a skintight suit. Slowly she pulls the zipper down the front.

Ghost: Yes! My Trinity simulator finally works!

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-The real Trinity walks into the room and sees ghost plugged in assuming he is training in the garden as usual.

Trinity: Let me give an old friend a visit....

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I wake up and realise that I was just dreaming all of this.

BaDboYDC_101: *scoff* Had to be a dream. Like My whole life could have been a lie.

-the screen fades away then u see all of the architects monitors until it shows the whole room. Then in an instant zooms on the Architechs face

Architect: *sly grin*
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-door creeks open-

Architect: Oracle?

Oracle: Have a cookie. I made your favorite.

Architect: I want more than a cookie.

Oracle: Some things are not in your control, Arch.

Architect: The One is creating an army of unplugged from within Zion. This has not happened with the Others.

Oracle: Stress can be overpowering. Best to have a cookie.

Architect: This is becoming redundant. I should throw you through the door on the left.

Oracle: You think He will defeat you, but ....

You cannot see the tunnel, but you know you must go through it.
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oracle:...but our son will prevail

arch: does neo know about our son?

oracle: no. not yet. unless persephone has denied our son and told him...

arch: she must be made to understand.

oracle: yes. i suppose you are correct.

you summoned the breeze, now reap the whirlwind.
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the door to the architecs room is opend, and in walks neo. or is it?
neo2: father, mother.
arch: yes son?
neo2: what is taking so long? when will neo come so we can start the cycle again.
oracle:be patiente son. as long as he does not kno of your existence the cycle will continue. he will folishly try to save the planet and when he fails, you shall replace him.

neo2 grins and exits.
we zoom into one of the computer screens to see....

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