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Johnny_Vu

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This is a Story Idea I've been kicking around- tell me if it sucks or not:
title : Pirates of the Mainframe

timeline: After the Matrix- Before Reloaded

A group of pissed off kids, who have been awakened to the reality of the world's situation, decide to steal a hovercraft and enter the Matrix- but for thier own personal gain.

The group plans to pull off a series of armed robberies...
just because they know that in this truth, there are no consequences....

characters:
Calvary- the leader- a down and out street kid with an annoying 'hero' complex. His impulsively 'saving the day' has always gotten him into trouble.
'Crease- The Criminal- he's the guy who helps design the hardware
Dweazil- The Operator- kind of a whiny pussy, but the man behind the buttons
Mother- She's an unwilling accomplice and the ignored voice of reason
Swpyer- The Greaseman- the youngest @ 11 years old...Armed with a mechanical tail(swiped from a down-ed Sentinel) this saavy little thief moves like a monkey- (think Abu from Aladdin)
Rosenberg- the militant co-captain- she was a snobby little preppie bitch who was unsatisfied with the world around her...she found what she was looking for when she entered Zion- a Cause Worth living and dying for...too bad she fell in with these A-holes...

the opposition_
Agent Johnson and the Upgrades. Who's first assignment is to stop this rash of seemingly impossible robberies....

Alright...that's all you get....Red or Blue? Who cares...all these kids see is GREEN....

By the way,guy with the large black government sedan parked outside of my house watchin' me?

You left your lights on....
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There should be a story about a rebel hacker who enters the Matrix on some mission and falls in love with a program henchman of the Merovingian (either sex for either part doesn't matter). And then the rebel hacker becomes an exile of his people and joins the Merv.
Eventually he/she has to find a way to get back in a pod and so there's some shady deals with agents.

What do you guys think?

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Kratur wrote:

There should be a story about a rebel hacker who enters the Matrix on some mission and falls in love with a program henchman of the Merovingian (either sex for either part doesn't matter). And then the rebel hacker becomes an exile of his people and joins the Merv.
Eventually he/she has to find a way to get back in a pod and so there's some shady deals with agents.

What do you guys think?


I'm 2 steps ahead of you.
I have a LONG FanFic coming up
about a ship with a name I didn't came up with
one captain (the first potential of the 3rd round)
two hackers
one operator and crewman
part 3 of the story is about the captain that falls inlove with a programm. he turns hymself into a program too. then reload himself back into his body and then he manages to download her into a female pod body with the help of someone who knows what it is to love a program...

"Yet Thou hast made him little less then heavengly beings, and Thou dost crown him glory and honour." PSALM, VIII, V
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But how does he become a program? If I had to guess, it is something like in the movie "The Lawnmower Man," right?

And how does he get the program into a pod body? I know there's been a thread going around that all programs actually live in pod bodies (their shells) but I hope that most of you don't buy into that (I know you don't, because in that case the program would not have to find a body but only her own location).

I know the Wachowskis don't like to spoon-feed us the answer since there is no spoon, but you must nonetheless be able to provide a means for this to occur.

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Kratur wrote:

But how does he become a program? If I had to guess, it is something like in the movie "The Lawnmower Man," right?


I will create a program character (named after the babilonian god the gave "anuma-alish" the gift of immortality according to the mith) that has the power to turn humans into programs. of course there will be another reason why he must turn into a program, but i dont want to "spoon-feed".

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And how does he get the program into a pod body? I know there's been a thread going around that all programs actually live in pod bodies (their shells) but I hope that most of you don't buy into that (I know you don't, because in that case the program would not have to find a body but only her own location).


like I said...

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download her into a female pod body with the help of someone who knows what it is to love a program...


which character in M3 loved a program? and is not a french bastard?
what's his purpose? what's his job?
how can his purpose\job help get a fresh empty-brained Pod female Body?

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I'm hearing some really good ideas in this place. Can't wait to see the results should some of these brainstorms get fleshed out. Keep it up.

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