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What I would like to see in Matrix 4 (and how I would rewrite Matrix 3)

 

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Combine Reloaded and Revolutions to make one movie  

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I think a lot of things could have been cut out of both Reloaded and Revolutions. I think they could have turned them both into a 2 1/2 hour movie, allowing for a third movie in the trilogy to be released around 2006. Then you can explain all the stuff they didnt' explain in Revolutions.

Here's my version of Matrix Reloaded:

Okay, I think it should have started off with Bane running from Agents.

Then before the Agents get to him, Smith shows up and copies himself onto the Agents.

Bane will be confused as to why Smith helped him, then Smith copies onto Bane, then he answers the phone and goes into the Real World.

Cut to Neo waking up. They tell him the Council wants to talk to him.

Introduce Zion here, while the audience is still wide awake.

NOW do all the dialogue (not like Reloaded, which did it in the middle).

Then they all leave for the Matrix to find the Oracle.

Niobe and Ghost are part of Morpheus' crew in my version.

Neo, Morpheus, Trinity, Niobe, and Ghost find the Oracle.

She talks to each one of them, then finally Neo.

After the talk, all the Agent Smiths show up and Neo fights with them.

As Neo and the Smiths fight, Seraph leads Morpheus, Trinity, Niobe, and Ghost to the Merovingian's castle, where they can find the Keymaker.

Neo says he will catch up.

NOW you can have a cool battle (Neo versus Smiths simultaneously with Morpheus, Trinity, Niobe, and Ghost in an all-out gun battle with Merovingian exiles)

Seraph, Morpheus, Trinity, Niobe, and Ghost arrive at the castle and have to fight their way to the elevator, which leads them down into the Merovingian's Matrix.

Hence, much cooler.

Neo arrives late, but the Merovingian waits for him.

Here, the Merovingian tries to tempt Neo.

Meanwhile, the rest of the gang are fighting their way to find the Keymaker.

Merovingian says he will kill Neo's friends if Neo does not join the side of Merovingian against the Machines.

Neo refuses, and goes to save his friends.

Meanwhile, they manage to free the Keymaker.

Morpheus, Trinity, Niobe, and Ghost escort the Keymaker away from the Merovingian's minions.

Seraph stays behind to help Neo fight the Merovingian's minions in Hell Matrix.

Seraph tells Neo to go help his friends on the highway.

Neo saves them.

Agent Smith arrives in Hell Matrix.

There is a three-way battle between Seraph, Merovingian's guys, and the Smith Clones.

Smith defeats all of them, inserting himself into everyone, including Seraph and the Merovingian.

Meanwhile, in Zion, Bane has sabotaged their defenses, and the Machines are already attacking the city.

At the same time, the Smith Clones are taking over the Matrix.

Morpheus, Niobe, Ghost, and Trinity fight Agents while Neo reaches the Source.

Neo reaches the Source and talks to the Architect.

Meanwhile, Zion is at war with the Machines, with the Machines winning.

Morpheus, Niobe, Ghost, and Trinity defeat some Agents, but they keep fighting.

Neo is told to choose to reload the Matrix or save his friends.

Neo chooses to save Trinity.

Neo arrives to save them.

Meanwhile, Smith Clones take over the Oracle.

Neo, Morpheus, Trinity, Niobe, and Ghost go back to the Real World.

They want to bring their ship back to Zion to save Zion, but Neo says he knows what he must do, and they must bring him to the Machine City.

They find another ship that can be used, but there is no one inside.

Neo says he will fly the ship alone to the Machine City.

When Neo arrives at the Machine City, Bane comes out and they fight.

Neo realizes Bane is Smith, and tells the Dues Ex Machina to attach Bane to the Source.

Neo goes into the Matrix to fight the Smith Clones.

The super-smith that was cloned from the Oracle fights Neo.

They have a massive battle with energy blasts and Smith throwing cars at Neo.

The other Smith clones fight Neo, but Neo easily decimates them with a gigantic blast that wipes out the whole city.

Neo and Super-Smith go at it, with either one not getting tired or winning.

Neo allows Smith to insert himself into Neo.

Bane (Smith) was already attached to the Source, so all the Smiths are destroyed.

Neo is killed and the Matrix reloads.

Neo's code is dispersed throughout the Matrix.

Scene cuts to Merovingian, who has a Smith chained against the wall.

Merovingian says he preserved just ONE Smith Program, since the Merovingian could save programs from deletion.

They agree to a pact and ally themselves to destroy the Architect's Matrix.

The End.

And that, my friends, can be a 2 1/2 hour Matrix Reloaded.

Think of the possibilities of a third movie after that.

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Nah....too much stuff wrong with it.

Revolutions explained everything it intended to.

You can't just destroy the Matrix.

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double post, and your movie just has everyone running around fighting for 2 1/2 hours.

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It's a nice attempt, I guess, but like the other said... you can't fix the Matrix. It ain't broke. Sure... maybe the Brothers didn't do such a good job with the third one cinematography wise. Maybe, when watching the third one, people didn't get as excited, or like the dialogue so much. But... it did exactly what had to be done for the story.

Face it, there is no "alternative" ending. You could have "alternative dialogue" and "alternative fight sequences," but you can't really change the message or the story, or the order it goes in.

And, your third Matrix movie in 2006 should be entitled:
The Matrix: We're Resting from Nearly 2 1/2 hours of Non-stop Fighting, Running, an Body Take Overs.
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