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Enjoy bitches its a celebration.

As promised Neo and Smith

The Matrix: Destruction


This is what would happen if neo and smith joined together. Neo finds out trinity and ghost are having an affair. Everything happens as it does in the movie except this.


As neo and trinity flew toward the machine city, niobi back on the hammond asks
"where is ghost"
"im not sure" says morpheus
"well look for him" niobi says

They begin to check around the ship, morpheus finds him in the cargo hold, he is laid out on the ground, his face cut into pieces. They come to the conclusion that it was that psycho bane that did it. Then they head to Zion.

Back to the logos. as trinity crashes the ship into the piller.

"trinity" neo says blindly
"im here"
"what happened"
"neo listen to me...."
"before you say anything trin, let me tell you something."
"what is it neo"
"i knew about you and ghost"
"you did, im so sorry"
as neo feels around he noticed the cables in trinity he reaches for a knife that is laying on the floor

"you broke my heart and now zion will fall"

With that said he jams the knife into the side of trinitys throat. she cries out but her cry is muffled by neo cuvering her mouth.

"you are a heartless bitch trinity"

Trinity dies, Neo stands up and feels his way out of the ship and walks toward the machine god.
He sees everything in gold code.
"its so beautiful"
He walks to the end of the hall and looks out to the city, he sees a giant spikey headed creature raise in front of him.

Neo speaks " I only ask to say what I've come to say, after that, do what you want and I won't try to stop you.
" Speak" says the machine
"The program 'Smith' has grown beyond your control. Soon he will spread through this city as he spread through the Matrix. You cannot stop him, but I can."
" We don't need you. We need nothing."
i"f that's true, then I've made a mistake and you should kill me now."
" What do you want?"
"Peace."
" And if you fail?"
" I won't".

As neo says that the machines plug him inito the matrix. He sees around him smith, everywhere there is smith. than in the middle of smiths one lone smith steps forward.

Smith says "welcome back Mr. Anderson, we missed you"
neo says "it ends tonight"
"i know i have seen it"
"How did you see it, was it you and me in a hole, did you copy me, cause i saw it too, and i didnt like that ending."
"well then what should we do about it Mr. Anderson?" asks smith with that smart ass smirk
"tonight we change both our fates tonight we make a choice, Zion will fall and so will the matrix"
"i like it, but how will we do this, you are plugged into the source it knows everything"
"it doesnt know this, i made a choice, i finished the job you couldnt start with trinity"
"Shes dead?"
"yes"
"good i always hated that bitch"
"i know"
"well what should we do first"
"go to the source"
"sounds like a plan Mr Anderson or shall i call you Neo"
"call me what you want, it will all be over soon"
And with that said neo bends his knees clenches his fists and flies off, with smith following.

"where are we going Neo" asks smith
"to see the architect"
"i could not get into his place how do you expect to get in there"
"fly through the building into the middle of his room"
"will that work?"
"we will see"

Neo and Agent Smith reach the building that hosts the architect. Neo clenches his teeth and flies faster than ever before and shatters through the middle of the building. the building warps and wiggles like the force of a nutron bomb has just been dropped. Neo and smith reach the white door and and blow through it. as they both land on there feet,they are looking sraight into the eyes of the architect.

"how the hell did you get in here?" yells the architect
"does it really matter" says smith
"i dont think it does" says neo
Neo then walks over to the architect who is now standing
"rememeber what i said, we better not meet again."
"yes"
"i meant it"
Neo then punches the architect so hard he flies back into the moniters, as moniters spray sparks smith looks on with an evil grin, neo walks to the architect who is laying on the ground with blood coming out his mouth.
"you bastard, do you know what your doing" yells the architect
"i dont care" says neo
Neo pulls the architect to his feet and throws him against the monitors again, he holds him up by his shirt
"you and zion are dead, your prescious machine city will fall"
"no" screams the architect
As neo grabs the architect smith walks over with a smile and says "my my my, hello dad, how are you, you know what they say, like father like son" and with that said smith punches the architect and replicates himself. as neo and smith step back they see a new smith. he is in a white suit. he speaks
"it looks as though zion and our city will fall, lets do it."

As Neo looks on, the new smith shakes and dissapears. As he does they hear a low rumbling, neo and smith fly out of the room. they then fly to the top of another building they look on as in the distance a white flame comes toward them faster and faster, as it hits them they are ingulfed in painless burning, as neo looks up a single tear rolls down his face. he then is burnt to nothing.

Meanwhile outside the matrix neos body fills with white light as it transfer slight into the source of the machines, as it does, like a chain reaction all the city explodes into a white fireball that travels all the way to zion, as alll the sentanels and diggers erupt into white flame, the city of zion burns, all the people scream but its too late too run. There bodies are set on fire, they burn into nothing. Then Silence.


What did you guys think, this was not a well thought story and it took me an hour to write so dont treat me too bad. i liekd the ending it was sweet. anyways i hope you enjoyed.

"Dreams awaken more than our self awareness, they awaken our self-indulgence"-Me
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HA, do you even sleep anymore Agent Zero? I thought it was alright. "like father like son", very Smithious of you. Wasn't great, as in making a book series. But good as in, an interesting hypothetical situation.

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ghost and trinity are a brother and a sister man...

In this hall of mirrors, built by liars, we are but a pale reflection of ourselves...
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Hypothetical. Maybe Agent Zero should've added that Ghost and Trinity aren't spiritual siblings in this hypothetical story.

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This whole thing spawned from the ghost trinity affair post.

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HA, do you even sleep anymore Agent Zero?


Sleep whats that?

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it was as we would say in iceland'' Naaa...svona allt í lagi''....cant say i would have liked it if the movie would have been like that....

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"where is ghost"
"im not sure" says morpheus
"well look for him" niobi says


Whats that about?.... you turned Morpheus into some Gimp? Whitelaugh

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like a chain reaction all the city explodes into a white fireball


So the machine city explodes?...aha...okey. is all good....and Deus ex machine explodes with it?...aha...okey. But if the machine city would explode would not Neo die?...

....first of all his Body would also burn and he would be unplugged by force....

...and i sorry if this story is just a joke with flaws but....you can never be sure. Might also be good if you want to change these bits that i have pointed out. Thumbup

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well pawnatron my freind it is a joke. neo did die in the story the single tear he shed was him being sad that he had to do it. he dies and so does everyone in the world. MUHAHA Evilredeyes

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Smith says "welcome back Mr. Anderson, we missed you"
neo says "it ends tonight"
"i know i have seen it"
"How did you see it, was it you and me in a hole, did you copy me, cause i saw it too, and i didnt like that ending."


HA HA HA HA HA HA HA...
I just LOVE your story....absolutely brilliant

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Meanwhile outside the matrix neos body fills with white light as it transfer slight into the source of the machines, as it does, like a chain reaction all the city explodes into a white fireball that travels all the way to zion, as alll the sentanels and diggers erupt into white flame, the city of zion burns, all the people scream but its too late too run. There bodies are set on fire, they burn into nothing. Then Silence


EXCELLENT... Cool

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thank you! 600 posts yah!

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Time for a cup of tea and a cookie Aaah, is there anything better than to post here and to drink something

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YES! i love tea and cookies.

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