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Your own short stories & Your own fan fiction

 

Patrick

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This is a alternate matrix story. The storyline is sligthly different. It doe'snt really change until the matrix online story. It's about the Oracle taking care of not only Sati but five other exile children as well. Their parents help Rama and Kamala in the powerplants. Like Sati they were created without a purpose so they are smuggled into the matrix with Sati. This is their profiles. Their shell appearance is black like the oracle.If you read this please make a reply. I want to know everyone's opinions.


Patrick
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can manipulate the weather in the matrix and fly by manipulating wind.

Xavier
13
can create and manipulate fire in the matrix.He can fly by launching in the air like a rocket.

Antione
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can manipulate and create water in the matrix. He can change water temperature and can fly by using us like a rocket.


Samantha
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Taylor
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They are two female programs who have telikinesis in the matrix.
Chapter 1 : At mobile avenue.
In the machine city sevaral programs created children of their own. Their were proud of their children and what the children could do. But Patrick , Xavier , Antione , Samantha , Sati and Taylor were created without a purpose so they were scheduled for deletion. Rama made a deal with the Mervingian to smuggle the children into the matrix. The Merovingian's associate the Trainman put them into mobile ave until he could get them. The exiles waited in the trainstation getting border by the minute until a man wearing a black trenchcoat appeared out of nowhere. He was on the ground uconscious. The children crowed around him. Who is he? whispered Samantha. He's the one. said Patrick. Neo! said Sati loudly. Shh! said Xavier. Can't you see he's sleeping. Neo opened his eyes. He's awake. said Antione. Good morning. sais Sati nicely. Who are all of you you? asked Neo. My name is Sati. This is Patrick , Xavier , Antione , Samantha and Taylor. She said pointing to each one. Your name is Neo. My papa says you're not suppose to be here he says you must be lost. Are you lost Neo? Sati asked. Neo sat up. Where am I? He asked. This is the trainstation. said Sati. This is'nt the matrix? Neo asked. No, this construct is separate from the matrix. said Antione. It's some sort of limbo. said Xavier. That's where the train goes that's where were going but you cannot go with us. said Sati. Why not? asked Neo. Be cause you have to give him something in return. said Samantha. Otherwise, he won't let you .said Sati. Who won't? asked Neo. The trainman. said Sati. We don't like him but my papa said we have to do what the trainman says or else he will keep us here forever and ever. To Be Continued.

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