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What I would like to see in Matrix 4 (and how I would rewrite Matrix 3)

 

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WELCOME BACK I MISSED YOU.... NOW YOUR WORLD IS MY WORLD, YOU ARE MINE, AND YOU WONT BE FREE....

The code falls and suddenly the monitor explodes....

We see the Architectīs room....

We see the monitors with the image of Neo and the other Ones dressed exaclty like him....

The camera shows the architectīs chair and Neo is sitting on it.... we see that neo has a black blindfold covering his eyes,the camera goes down and we see the architect dead on the floor....

The camera shows Neoīs hands and they are with blood....

Suddenly we hear a voice as we see Neo sitting smiling on the chair.

Itīs the Oracleīs voice....

Oracle:- My child, you went mad, you wished more that you could ever had, you wanted everything, now that you have it, the worldīs faith is in your hands....

We see a flashback of Neoīs body beign carried to the Machine city....

The camera zooms inside one of the machines and we see it starts to melt from the inside....

Suddenly Neo awakes and all the machines start to melt....

Machine god:- What?, You are dead human!

Neo:- AArrrrrgGHH..!

We see a lot of squids coming Neoīs way....

Neo flyies thru them and rips their arms of, he grabs one of them and starts to swing it in the air.

Suddenly he stops and looks at his hands, and he starts to laugh insanely.... and he makes the remaining squids explode....

He goes towards the machine city....

We see robots walking and looking at the sky...


Neo flyies over the crops and smashes thru the pods laughin, he is destroying everything....


We see a big explotion.... when the smoke clears we see Neo sitting on a pile of metal and he is jacked in the matrix mentally....

We see him meditating and suddenly a golden light comes out of his eyes....


AAHHHRR!

Trinity:- Shit!

We see Trinity in an apartment.

A cellphone rings.

Voice:-Are you ready?

Itīs the voice of Morpheus....

Trinity:- Yes.

We see the camera showing a sign : Oī the city HOTEL.

We see Trinity going up a stairs with a laptop....

She starts to read....

In the screen we see a message.

CONNECTION FAILED.

Trinity:- What?

Suddenly a cop kicks the door.

Cop:- Freeze!

Cop2:- Put your hands in the air!

She puts it and she kicks the cop in the face...

Suddenly the other cop turns into an agent..

Trinity:- Shit!

She shoots at him and starts to run towards the door....

Th agent dodges the bullets and starts to run behind her....

She goes to the rooftop and starts to run towards the window.

She jumps, and goes thru the window.... she pulls out her guns...


Trinity:- Just get up! Get up!

When she gets up an agent kicks her in the head and everything goes black....

In Neoīs apartment.

The guy knocks on the door and the door opens.... he goes inside.

Guy:- Anybody home?

No one is there.

Djour:- Wow, someone needs to get out.

The camera shows outside of the hotel....

Smith:- Well, that was fast....

We see the building of M1 where Morpheus was kidnapped....


We see Trinity on the Chair....

Smith:- Where is he?.... You are looking for him dont youu?.... You think he is going to save you?

Smith grabs her by the neck and starts to choke her....

Suddenly the other agents enter the room.

Agent:- What are you doing?

Agent2:- He doesnīt know.... we need her alive.

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another matrix 4?

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well i thought it was over but hey its a story.

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Well the start is good. keep it going lets see what u end up with. Cool

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First I though of doing Matrix 5, but after MATRIX 4: The end of the Matrix, there wasnīt much to write about, so I did another Matrix 4 after Revolutions, but in this one, The One goes insane.... And in the 7th Matrix, will appear the new one, that will have to fight Neo at the end.... Anyone can win....

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i c ur reasoning but plz continue.

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Agent2:- He doesnīt know.... we need her alive.

Agent:- HE will come to her.

Smith smiles.

Meanwhile in Zion....

We see Morpheus going to the ship, carrying wires and a backpack....

The kid goes running towards him....

Kid:- Let me help you !, Here, I got it!

Morpheus:- You are still too young to be a part of the crew.

Kid:- I know, I know.... but Itīs just... I want to help.

Morpheus smiles:- You are brave, but young and impatient, people die in The Matrix, and you feel pain...

The Kid:- I know but----

Morpheus:- Listen, you are not ready....

Morpheus walks away and we see The Kid following him....

Suddenly we see a group of mechanics talking and they look at the kid and they laugh at him, and one of them goes towards him and stops him....

Guy:- Listen kid, you really think Morpheus is going to let you be a part of his crew?

Kid:- Im too young its only that....

Guy:- Wake up , its not going to happen, Morpheus doesnīt know how to tell you.

Kid:- Thatīs a lie!

Guy:- Oh yeah? Hey guys remember Mouse?

Kid:-Who?

Guy:- Never mind that, the thing is.... he was your age.

The kid is surprised....

Guy:- They filled him with led.... but hey you can carry my bags....hahaaHAHAHA!

The kid goes running to the cave....

He goes to a dark corner and sits with his face down....

The camera zooms his face and we see his eyes are with tears....

He suddenly goes running outside the cave and goes towards the guy.... and starts to punch him.

Guy:- Wow, wow, get off me!

The guy throws him to the ground....

We see that the guy has blood on his mouth.

Guy:- Im not even going to hit you, you are pathetic....

In the Oracleīs apartment....

We see that she is in the kitchen making cookies....

And suddenly throws the bowl with the doe to the trash....

Spoon kid:- Whatīs wrong?

Oracle:- Nothing, dont worry, come, help me make more cookies....


The kid starts to make the doe mentally....

Oracle:- A-a-aa, no, no....

Spoon kid:- Why?

Here let me show you....

The oracle grabs his hands and shows him how to make the doe.

Spoon kid:- But its slower this way.

Oracle:- Yes, but you see, you need to make them yourself.

Spoon kid:- Why?

Oracle:- Cookies need love.

Spoon kid:- But why?

Oracle:- Because love makes everything better, if you put your happy thoughts into them, youll see they taste better.

The spoon kid smiles....

Someone rings the doorbell.

Sati:- Iīll get it!

Sati opens the door....

Itīs Morpheus....

Oracle:- Morpheus, you are early.... please come, listen you keep making the cookies, but remember dont do them with this (she points to his head) do them with this (she points to his heart).

Spoon kid:- Ok !

Oracle:- You still havenīt found him....

Morpheus:- No, but there is a problem they----

Oracle:- They have her....

Morpheus:- I donīt know what to do.

Oracle:- Take him with you....

Morpheus:- Who?

Oracle:- You know who....

The Oracle looks at the sign.... "Know thy self"

Morpheus looks at it....

Oracle:- You too were impatient once....

Morpheus:- Him?

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yes, i love it.

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Morpheus:- Him?

In Zion....

We see the kid eating....

a guy goes towards him....

Guy:- Morpheus is looking for you, he says its important.

The Kid goes running off....

We see Morpheus talking to him....

The kid:- Whats going on?

Morpheus:- Are you ready to be part of the Nebuchanezzar?

The Kid:W-what?

Morpheus:- Im asking you to join us.

The Kid:- Yes!, Iīm ready!

The kid hugs Morpheus.

Morpheus seems surprised....


Morpheus:- Letīs go there is no time, ill explain to you on the way over.

In the Nebuchanezzar....

Morpheus:- This is the problem....

Morpheus points to Trinity and there is blood coming of her mouth.

Operator:- She is dying!

Morpheus:- Ok jack us in!

Operator:- US?

Morpheus:- Attention everyone, as from this moment on we have a new crew member....

Morpheus turns and looks at the kid....

Morpheus:- Welocome to the Nebuchanezzar.

Kid:- I wont let you down sir.

Operator:- Ok, here we go.

The operator presses enter.


In the Matrix....

We see the kid dressed in black and we see that he has a backpack.

Morpheus:- Whatīs that for?

The kid opens it and he takes out a skateboard....

Kid:- I hope I still have it.

Morpheus:- Letīs go.

Operator:- Hold on Trinity....

In the building....


Agent:- He is coming....

Smith:- He is so predictible....

Agent:- He is not alone....

Smith:- What?

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o yeah im liking this.

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Smith:- What?

In the street....

We see the kid going at full speed towards the building and we see that there is some kind of time bomb attached to his skateboard.... PLI !, PLI !, PLI ! (sound of the ticking bomb).

The guards see him and stand up....


Suddenly the kid gets off the skateboard and lets it go....

The skateboard goes flying thru the metal detector and the camera changes into slow-motion.

We see the red light of the metal detector going off ....

PLII ! (sound of the bomb)

Guard:- Noo!


BOOMMM !

The building shakes.

In a room....

We see Agent smith pointing a gun to Trinity....

Smith:- Ok, your job has finished....

Smith pulls the trigger but he misses because of the explotion....

Trinity kicks his gun off....

We see Morpheus on a rooftop across the building and he jumps and breaks the glass...


Smith:- You!

Smith goes running towards Morpheus and morpheus takes out his Katana and goes running towards Smith, and as he runs, the Katana makes sparks in the floor....

Smith kicks Morpheus in the chest and throws him against the edge of the window....

The kid enters the room and unties Trinity... but she is still to weak to fight....

Kid:- Its ok I got you....

Trinity tryies to say something, but she has blood on her mouth....

Kid:- What?

Trinity:- M-mm.... Morpheus!

She points to Smith.

The kid runs towards Smith with a flying kick....

But Smith dodges it and the kid crashes against the office building across the street.... he land in an office.

Smith:- Ha hahah ha, face it, this is the end for you!

Smith starts to step on to Morpheuīs fingers....

Morpheus:- AAArrrrghgh!

Morpheus lets go off one hand....

Suddenly we see a Katana going thru Smithīs chest.

Smith:- AAARRRgghghg!

We see Trinity behind him....

She kicks him and wee see him falling....

Smith :- AAAArrrghghgh!

In the street we see the people looking at Smith falling, and he crashes into a car....

We see the three of them driving off....

In the car....

Trinity:- You?

Morpheus:- He still needs to learn a few things...

Lesson number One:- Never, go towards an agent at full speed, or you will end crushed against a wall.

Kid:- I know....

He pulls a piece of glass of his arm....

Trinity:- Ok, letīs make the call....

Trinity grabs the cellphone, and Morpheus stops her...

Trinity:- What?

Morpheus:- Let him do it its his first call.

Trinity throws the phone to the kid.

There you go kid....

Kid:- I got the machine....

Trinity:- What?

Morpheus looks at the kid.

Kid:- Kidding, lighten up guys!

In the street....

We see an ambulance in front of the building....

Paramedic:- 60 year old woman, with a chest injury, made by a.... sword?

We see a black car passing thru the scene....

Agent:- This is a problem.

Smith:- Yes it is....

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SOB Agents.

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Smith:- Yes it is....

In the Nebuchanezzar....

We see them being unplugged....

Operator:- You did it!

Morpheus:- You did well....

Kid:- Thanks, wow, itīs so real....

Operator:- But is not.... An the more you stay away from it, the better, take a look at her, THATīS real.

Trinity:- Ha, ha very funny, someone get me some ice.

Morpheus:- He is right, but for you to be trully ready you need to train yourself in the art of combat, you need to learn to survive.

Operator:- Morpheus, you are not saying what I think you did.

Morpheus:- Give me the old training program.

Trinity:- Morpheus can i talk to you in private.

Trinity and Morpheus go to another room.

Morpheus:- What is it?

Trinity:- You canīt put him in that program, its too much.

Morpheus:- Iīll be there with him.

Trinity:- That thing almost killed me, remember.

Morpheus:- You are right, it is very dangerous but after what I saw, I know he can do it.

Trinity:- Do what?

Morpheus:- Save us....

Trinity and Morpheus come out of the room....

Morpheus:- Are you ready to begin your training?

Kid:- Yes!

Operator:- Are you sure?

Kid:- I bet you I can jump the building in the first try!

Operator:- Oh, this is no ordinary program.

The operator grabs a cd with dust, he cleans it.

Operator:- This is a reproduction of 14th century Japan, it was made by a former crew member, he loved that Samurai shit.

Morpheus:-Are you ready?

Kid:- Always.

Operator:- Remember I wont be able to take you out unless you reach the golden box in the castle.

Morpheus:- I know the drill.

Operator:- Ok, systems on-line, see you in a couple of days.

Kid:- Days?

AARRGGGHHaaAaaaaa PI PI PII ! ....

WELCOME TO THE MARTIAL ARTS TRAINING PROGRAM

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wish i could be plugged into a training program.

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WELCOME TO THE MARTIAL ARTS TRAINING PROGRAM


We see a forest in the middle of the night....

And suddenly a withe flash.... and the birds fly away.

Kid:- Wow!

Morpheus:- Here we are, welocome to the martial arts training program.

We see that they are dressed with old japanese clothes....

Kid:- This is.... wow.

Morpheus:- Come, tomorrow we begin the training.

Kid:- Morpheus.... What did he meant by "see you in a few days" ?

Morpheus:- He meant exactly that, you see this is a very old program, but far more dangerous that the actual ones, so this is also a survival simulation.

Kid:- So, two days inside here right?

Morpheus:- Thatīs up to you....

We see them walking thru the forest....

They arrive to a little hut....

Morpheus:- Sleep, youīll need your strenght for tomorrow.

We see the moon going down and the sun going up....

Morpheus:- Good morning....

Kid:-What time is it?

Morpheus:- Late, come on.

The kid steps out of the hut....

Kid:- Itīs cold!, Couldnīt made the program in a tropical weather?"?

Morpheus:- Yes, but this program is made to test you....

Kid:- Ok, so what now?

Morpheus:- First we begin hand to hand combat.

The kid does a pose....

Kid:- Ok, Im ready!

Morpheus:- Not here, in the Dojo.

Morpheus points to a Dojo in a hill.

Kid:- Lucky we have sandals.

In the Nebuchanezzar....

Operator:- Ok, now I take a little nap.

We see the operator putting his feet in the air trying to sleep.

Suddenly the Nebuchanezzarīs alarm goes off....

Operator:- Shit!

The operator kicks the keyboard accidentally.

We see the trainig program monitor.

DIFFICULTY LEVEL: DEADLY.

Operator:- Shit, shit, shit, shit!

In the trainig program....

We see Morpheus and the Kid walking up the hill far away, and suddenly three Ninjas appear....

One of them points at them, but they canīt see them....

We see that the Ninjas starts to run slowly towards them...

In the Nebuchanezzar....

Dee:- What was that?

Operator:- The sensors went off, lets see....

Dee:- What is is?

We see thru the Nebuchanezzarīs camera....

Its Neo!, We see him walking towards the ship.

Operator:- Its a guy....

Dee:- What is he doing there?

The operator turns a big light and points it to Neo.

Neo stops walking and looks directly at them.

Dee:- He canīt be looking at us.... Itīs that a blindfold?

Suddenly Neo puts his hand up and the light explodes....

Dee:- Shit!

Operator:- What is going on?, the controls doesnīt respond!

We see that the lights in the ship start to go off and on....

Dee:- Turn off the power!

Operator:- I canīt they are in the training program!

The operator points at Morpheus and the kid in the chairs.

As Neo walks towards the ship, the training program starts to fail....

In the training program....

Kid:- Finally!

We see that they arrive to the Dojo....

But something ents wrong, and the program starts to spawn Ninjas....

We see that they come running from the forest....

Suddenly Morpheus stops....

Kid:- Whatīs wrong?

Morpheus:- I donīt know stay here....

We see that he goes outside....

Morpheus:- We have company....

The kid goes outside too.

Kid:- Company? Who--- Wow....

We see the Ninjas standing in front of the Dojo.

Kid:- Is this part of the training?

Morpheus:- No, usually they are three, and believe me if you can beat two of them you are lucky.

Kid:- Trinity told me she did this training.

Morpheus:- Yes, but she barely made it.

Kid:- But she made it thru didnīt she?

Morpheus:- Yes, with a broken leg, arm and two ribs.

Kid:- We canīt take them can we?

Morpheus:- No.

Kid:- What do you mean, we can take them!

Morpheus:- Didnīt you heard me? They usually are threee, we are facing 25!

Kid:-Why?

Morpheus:- I donīt know..

We see that one of the Ninjas steps fowards.

Ninja:- kore wa nihongo no tekisuto desu!

Morpheus:- desu yomemasu ka!

Kid:-What did he sayed?

He said: " Are you ready to die ? "

Kid:- What did you sayed?

Morpheus:- I said "fuck off".

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i love it!

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Morpheus:- I said "fuck off".

Kid:- Emmm.. I donīt think he is going to take that too well.

Ninja:- Aaarrrrghh!

The Ninja jumps in the air with his sword and he is going towards Morpheus....

Morpheus dodges the sword and punches him in his ribs with his open fist and the Ninja goes flying to a tree.

The other Ninjas look surprised at the other one, because he seems to be the leader.

The Ninja leader gets up....

Ninja Leader:- Kono iriguchi wa juugyouin senyou ?

(Subtitles- You think you are going to get out alive?)

Morpheus:- Enough talk, show me what you can do.

The Ninja leader goes running towards Morpheus....

The Ninja throws a punch but Morpheus spins and dodges it, and takes out a Kata (Small sword, like a knife) and stabs him on the back.

The other Ninjas take out their Katanas and scream AARRRRrhgghhh! And start running towards Morpheus....

Morpheus takes out the Kata off the Ninjaīs back and throws it to the Ninjas, but the ninja blockīs it with his Katana.

Kid:- Morpheus!

The kid throws a Katana at him....

Morpheus starts to run towards the 24 Ninjas....

The kid doesnīt know how to help.... and suddenly he sees the Dojo an has an idea....

Kid:- Stop! take them into the Dojo!

Morpheus runs inside the Dojo....

Now we see a flashback of the Kid watching the show Kung Fu when he whas plugged into the Matrix....

Tv:- Always mind your surroundings, donīt give space to your enemy....

We are back to the action....

Inside the Dojo Morpheus is surrounded by Ninjas and has no exit.

Everything goes silent for a moment....

We see a tree outside the Dojo with his last outum leafs....

We see a leaf falling.... when it hits the ground, suddenly we hear music....

Suddenly The kid goes thru the Dojoīs ceiling and the Ninjas go at him!

They all try to stab him, and we only see black and blood coming from somewhere....

Suddenly everything stops again.... We see the kidīs face covered with some blood....

All the Ninjas fall to the ground.

We see the a circle of Ninjas arround them....

Morpheus is beyond shocked....

Kid:- That worked out as planned....

In the Matrix....

Inside a black car....

We see the agents, and suddenly Smith recieves information from his earpiece....

Smith:- Got them!

Outside Zion....

We see Neo standing there and we see that he is talking but we canīt hear him, we only see him mouth moving....

Dee:- What is he doing now?

Operator:- I donīt know but iīll send Morpheus a message.

The operator opens a program, types something, and presses enter....

Inside the trainig program....

Suddenly an arrow flyes to a wall of the Dojo.

Kid:- Whatīs that?

Morpheus:- Something is wrong....

Morpheus grabs a scroll attached to the arrow....

Morpheus:- Get back now, we are in danger.

Kid:- What does it say?

Morpheus:- We need to get to the castle....

We see the both of them runnig out of the Dojo....

Suddenly the camera shows the floor of the Dojo covered with blood and the Ninjas....ansd someone steps in....

The camera follows the steps and slowly goes up and reveals.... Smith!

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nice very detailed.

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The camera follows the steps and slowly goes up and reveals.... Smith!

In the forest....

We see Morpheus and the Kid running....

Kid:- Where are we going?

Morpheus:- To the castle, we need to get to the golden crate.

Suddenly the Kid looks up and sees a shadow that passes thru the trees....

Kid:- More Ninjas!

Morpheus:- Keep running!

We see the castle, the camera goes thru a window on the last floor, enters a room and we see a golden crate in the middle, and we see that it has something written in Matrix code.

We see that they arrive to the castle.

Morpheus:- Quickly, on the last floor....

Both start to run up the stairs....

Morpheus goes thru a paper door and he is surprised..

The kid enters the room.

Morpheus:- The crate... itīs not here....

Kid:- Look a note!

We see a piece of paper on the floor....

Morpheus grabs it and we see its written in red....

Morpheus:- Go to the Butan forest. S.

Morpheus:- S.... hat does it--- Smith....

Kid:- It canīt be, he is dead I saw him fall.

Morpheus:- He isnīt dead.

We see that Morpheus touches the letter and smells the red ink....

Morpheus:- Blood?

Kid:- Itīs written in blood?

Morpheus:- Yes.

Kid:- Ok, he is a pshyco, nothing new there.

Morpheus:- You donīt understand, itīs impossible.

Kid:- What?

Morpheus:- Agents donīt bleed.

We see a Bambu forest....

The camera shows someone meditating.... itīs Smith.

The camera shows his left hand, and he has a cut on the palm.

Smith starts to look at it amazed... he touches it....

We see on his side the crate....

In the Ship....

Operator:- Ok, we are going to see what that guy wants....

We see the both going towards Neo....

Dee:- Hey you!

Neo:- Puts lifts his head.

Operator:- Are you ok?, whatīs the blindfold for?

Neo:- To see.

Dee:- Listen, what ship are you from?

Operator:- Wait, look at his hand.

Dee:- Were did you get that from?

The camera shows Neoīs hand bleeding, and he is holding a tube used to feed the humans that are plugged into the Matrix.

Neo:- There are a lot of them, if you wanīt go get your own tube.

Dee:- This guy is crazy!

Neo:- Crazy ? Crazy? AAAARRrrggg

Neo grabs Dee by the neck....

The operator tryes to punch him, but Neo throws him away.

Neo smells Dee....

Neo:- Your flesh.... Are you afraid? Are you afraid of what could happen? Mmmm? Iīll sho you what its going to happen....

Neo takes his blindfold but the camera shows the back of his head.

We see a white light lighting Deeīs face.

Neo suddenly snaps his neck....

Operator:- Dee!

Neo goes towards the operator....

Neo:- Where is he?

Operator:- Wh-w-who?

Neo:-Morpheus.

Operator:- He is in the ship, b-but---

Neo goes inside the ship....

He enters and sees Morpheus an the kid on the chairs....

Neo:- Training program....fun.

Neo sits on the ground and jacks into the Matrix mentally.

In the Bamboo forest....

Smith:- Morpheus, you came.... and you are with your student, im touched.

Morpheus:- Lets get it over Smith, it ends now.

Smith:- Im really scared.

Morpheus:- You will be.

Smith:- Kid, you better go, you donīt want to see how i kill him.

Kid:- Im goin to kill you Aaaa!


Morpheus:- No!, This is between me and him! GO back to the castle and wait for me.

Smith:- You heard him, run along.

Morpheus:- I see you had an accident.

Smith:- Itīs nothing, Itīs new to me, this feeling.... pain.... I must say is overrated, you humans are so weak.

Morpheus:- Believe me you are about to feel some more.

Morpheus does his classic pose.

Smith throws the golden crate....

Smith:- Are you ready?

Both start to run towards each other....

We see the both approachig more and more....

Suddenly the wind increases.... And e see the green code in the middle of the two of them....

When they are about to punch each other....

Neo appears in the middle of them and blocks the punches....

We hear opera music....

Smith:- Who are you?

Neo:- Im death!

Neo punches Smith and he goes flying away....

Neo lets go of Morpheus and starts to go towards Smith...

Smith gets up and spits a teeth....

Neo pushes him into the ground with his foot....

He starts to press on his head until we hear a crack....

The camera shows a puddle of blood....

Morpheus:- Who are you?

Neo:- You donīt seem to understand.... Im here to kill you.

Morpheus:- Why?

Neo:- Why not?

Neo starts running towards Morpheus and we see that he grabs the crate....

Neo:- What ? Noooo?

Morpheus opens it and suddenly e see his eye opening... he is back in the ship.

Morpheus takes of the plug and sees Neo sitting there meditating....

He looks to his side, and remembers that the Kid is still inside....


In the Bamboo forest....

Kid:- What did you do with him?

Neo:- He escaped as the coward he is....

The kid goes runnig to grab the crate, but Neo grabs it mentally...

Neo:- Is not that easy....

Neo brakes the crate with his fist....

Neo:- Dead end kid....

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Neo:- Dead end kid....

Kid:- What do you want?

Neo:- To end it all....

Neo suddenly punches the air and the kid is thrown to a bamboo tree...

Kid:- How is that possible?

Neo:- You see, when you realize there is no oponent you dont need to hit anything.

Kid:- Why are you doing this.

Neo:- Iīd love to talks but its time to go.

Neo steps into the ground and the tree shakes and the Kid falls to the ground....

Neo goes walking towards the kid and grabs him by the neck....

Neo:- You all smell the same....

Suddenly Neo drops the Kid and turns around....

We hear Trinityīs voice....

Trinity:- Let him go!

Neo:- Where are you?

Suddenly Trinity falls from the sky and lands behind Neo.

Trinity throws a kick....

Neo blocks it....

Neo turns around....

Neo:- What is it with you humans, are you so desperate to die.

Trinity:- Let him go....

Neo:- I kno why you want to save him, you belive he is the One dont you?

Trinity:- How did you-----

Neo kicks Trinity in the chest and thros her far away....

Kid:- Come here, fight with me!

Neo:- As you wish....

Neo goes running towards the Kid....

Suddenly the kid drops his guard and lets Neo kick him in the face....

Neo:- Why dont you fight?

The Kid gets up and we see that the blood on his nose is going back inside....

Kid:- Because when there is no oponent you dont have to....

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DAMN thats the best matrix 4 ever like iv read some other bunch of stuff where neo returns but this ....like...."popcorn; its so dense"-lawrence fishburn "making of matrix reloaded' DMAN KEEEP AT IT Shocked Shocked

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