»Deeindamatrix's Matrix 5: Recapitulated«

The Story... o.o

i would say the timeline

6xNeoTheOnex9 wrote:

The Story... o.o

What about the story?

Some statments for you to sink your teeth into (What are true and what is false is your choice)...

- Searph gets 'angry!'
- Metacortex is bulit?
- The translator bears his face again...but why?
- The arrivel at mobil ave?
- Sati's to her full extent!
- the Allience will regret everything!
- Venge meets his dimise?
- The Oracle is back!
- The old man is not what it seems?

Speculation?

Cut to Zion

Ghost comes in

Zion worker: 34 minites to penetration
Ghost: What happened?
Zion worker: The alliance sir, they destroy the communications computer, killied Roland, shot pure and have stolen the hammer.
Ghost: WHAT? Wheres Roland?
Zion worker: He has been taken to the medical office, but the reports are hes gone and those fucking alliance pieces of shit have got away with it but for some reason they relentlessly shot pure and he didnt die...he didnt have a scratch sir
Ghost: Right...right
Pure: II'm fine.
Ghost: Pure what happened to you?
Pure: They shot me
Ghost: and your ok?
Pure: ununununfortunally
Ghost: Can you still fight in the dock?
Pure: yeah ill llivve

Ghost pulls out a transciever. he speaks down it.

Ghost: Pures coming back to the dock, i need to say here...becuase roland has died and now there is no one in charge.

Cut to Dock

Colt: What? What happend?
Ghost: The allianace killed them...

Cut to hammer

Rox: Heres your goop

hands chyron a "bowl of snot"

Chyron: thanks...so why do you think raul killed roland?
Rox: What do you think? to get his ship!
Chyron: but couldn't he of taken it without killing him. Just interrogate him.
Rox: Well mabye...

A proximity alarm sounds

Rox: oh shit!

Chyron and rox run to the front of the ship.

Nonaka: What should we do?

Raul walks in

Raul: we're going to do nothing, the reason we left was to become one with the machines if they want to attack us let them. but we are NOT going to fight back. Understand?
crew: yes captain

Cut to 01

The sentinal carring venge begins to spin. Then releases venge towords the center of the town. He lands on a plaform and is forced to roll and hits the wall. After a short while he begins to look up he looks to his right: a corridor with insectoids crawing around. his left: The logos. He sharply gets up then walks towords it.

Venge: that looks like a Zion craft.

He goes up to it and goes inside. Venge sees the plaque, he rubs his finger over the writing. "Mark XIV No. 14 Made in the USA Year 2101" he looks around

Venge: What? Who is that?

He walks over to the front of the ship. He sees Trinity. The body has began to decay. The ship has been left how it was.

Venge: Who are you?

he searches her

Venge: come on, come on...name tag, id card, something!

He cant find a soucre of identity.

Venge: WHO ARE Y- theres someone else on here? There can't be, can they? Its weird...i can see it.

He searches the ship. He finds Bane.

Venge: SMITH!

In goldcode we see smith on fire on the floor and venge on fire.

Venge: What did they do to you?

the ship creeks and joltly falls abit.

Venge: OH shit, i better go

Cut to Hallway of doors

Searph: Morpheus!

He runs down

Searph: The key? Have you got the key?
Morpheus [in deep voice]: MY KEY!
Searph: Morpheus?
Morpheus [in deep voice]: MY KEY!

Morpheus kicks searph down the hallway. Searph is helped up by someone, who then steps past Searph to morpheus.

Translator: NO i believe that is my key. I am though quite surprised it has made its way back. Its almost like a boomarang.
Morpheus [in deep voice]: This is my key, my key, MY KEY!
Translator: Come on give it here...
Morpheus [in deep voice]: THIS IS MY KEY!
Translator: Ok, keep it...

The translator lifts his arm and opens his hand. Morpheus' hand begins to open. The key falls and beigns to curve back up to the translators hand. The key is now in the translators grasp. Morpheus begins to crack like venge in m4 and disappers (For the record he is now dead) The translator looks at the key, his eyes light up and he begins to run.

Searph: What? What just happened?

He runs after the Translator.

Cut to Club Hel

Merovingian: Where is he going?
Persephone: Where's who going?
Merovingian: The translator
Persephone: He's back?
Merovingian: Seems so and he has the key.
Persephone: When that key enters the lock, it begins again. He's playing a risky game. What happens after the reload? Searph can't make it back, Rama and Kamala are in the Mobil ave. The next version will fail.
Merovingian: When the Architect knows what hes doing.

Cut to Zion.

Colt: APU, RAPU load up!

They all aim there machines for the roof.

Colt: rebels load up!

the rebels load there guns.

Cut to Zion control room.

Zion worker: 20 seconds till penetration...
Ghost: Here we go...
Zion worker: 15 seconds till penetration...

Pure silence

Zion worker: 10 seconds till pentration...

The roof begins to crumble.

Zion worker: 5 seconds, 4, 3, 2, 1.

Nothing, there is silence.

Zion worker: They have stopped sir. I don't know what is going on with th m- OH SHIT!

Cut to Zion dock

A Retractiods missile fires through the roof, it smashes the bottom of the dock. No machines have entered yet. The missile opens up with 4 points. The Retractoid pulls the missile back up. No bodys shot yet. When the missile has reached the roof it is dragged though the roof creating a massive hole and cracks all the way along the the dock roof. Swarms of sentinals, runners and retractoids flood the dock. Imagine a war scene.

Cut to sewers

Niobe: Can you here that?
Sati: The machines are in the the dock.

They hear a loud smash.

Niobe: That came from over there.
Sati: Come on.

They run towords the loud noise

Cut to Zion dock

War continues. Pure has yet to shoot.

Cut to Zion control room

Ghost: Pures RAPU now!

Cut to Pures RAPU

Ghost otp: What are you doing?
Pure: I wannt to ddie.

Cut to Cavern

Old man: Heres is what we will need to blow it up

He has a large bomb with a timer on it.

Old man: Alexa? We're ready to go!

Alexa comes out of the shadows with her hands behind her back, she has a smirk on her face.

Alexa: Ok, i'm ready...
Old man: Who you smirking at?
Alexa: Smirking?
Old man: yes you have a smirk on your face. Why is that?

Alexa grabs hold of the old man and places a knife againist his neck.

Alexa: Becuase your going to die!
Old man: BBut what have i ddone?
Alexa: You just know i'm alive and were coming to live here in harmony with the machines!
Old man: What machines?
Alexa: Ill share a revalation for you before you die...those "dragons" are machines!
Old man: What? NO it cant.
Alexa: it is.

Alexa slits the old mans throat open. The old man falls to the ground hold his neck. Alexa stabs him in the heart to make sure but hears a "clunk" noise.

Alexa: Huh?

We see through the old mans eyes. "System faluire" flashes on the screen. "Automatic Shutdown Activated" "Cannot find alternative power supply" "Shutdown in 10" "Shutdown in 9" "Shutdown in 8" "Shutdown in 7" "Shutdown in 6" "Personal processing chip #8423154216 still accseible. Would you like PPC ejected? Y/N" "Shutdown in 3" "Shutdown in 2" "Y" "Shutdown in 1" His eyes shut down.

Alexa: WHAT THE FUCK?

The old mans arm begins to break off and slide down his arm realing the PPC. Alexa takes the PPC and grasps it tightly in the hand, then she places it in her pocket.

Cut to 01

Venge climbs up those ladders neo climbs at the end of m3. Like on m3 we go to goldcode the scene is very remincisful of the that scene except Venge is in flamecode. He reaches the balcony. The Deus Ex Machina raises to stand in front of Venge.

Deus Ex Machina: Hello Neo, Smith, Venge. I've been waiting for you arrival. The arrival of the Holy trinity has prolonged to much. Neo the soul, Smith the mind, and Venge the body.
Venge: Why was I taken here?
Deus Ex Machina: For the Matrix to be reloaded first the source must deconnect with the matrix, second maintinence repairs must installed and "the 3" must unite. The "Prophised One", the "Diametric One" and the "Contiguous One." Now you have been united. All that is left is maintinence.
Venge: So what is this maintinence you speak of?

Cut to Hallway

The translator is running towards the door Key maker opened before getting shot.

The Deus Ex Machina continues his speach over that scene and what is about to happen.

Deus Ex Machina: The Maintinance is to make to the matrix run stabler. This will be done by the replacement of the Oracle. As we speak the Translator is getting the key to the door of light.

Searph, who's chasing the translator, sees he's almost at the door. Searph stops. Grabs the key in his sleve and opens the door next to him and begins to run.

Deus Ex Machina: If the system workers are not in there specified postions they will be deleted.

Searph go back into the hallway then into his teahouse (his postion)

Cut to 01

Venge: You cant let that happen! What did i just say? Nothing carry on.
Deus Ex Machina: The Trinity has become self aware.
Venge: Self aware? All 3 of us are at one with myself. Thats what he means.

Cut to Hallway

The translator opens the door and runs to the door of light. He is absorbed in.

Cut to 01

Deus Ex Machina: Maintinence repairs complete.
Venge: Is that it? The matrix has reloaded! No it hasent.
Deus Ex Machina: All that is left to do is to reinsert the Trinity.
Venge: NO!
Deus Ex Machina: What?
The Deus Ex Machinas face begins to go around Venge.

Venge: I rule this matrix!

Cut to Zion dock.

The machines are significantly winning. The Humans have been forced in the bottle neck of the entrace of the Temple. The high pitch noise is heard defening the humans. Then a digger drills through the roof and smashes the bottom of the dock the sentinals begin to fly do the hole creted by the digger they enter the housing area. While the runners and rectractoids continue killing the humans near the temple. The sentinals fly to the bottom and rip open the elevator and rip open the bottom of the elevator floor and fly down to the engineering level. the begin smashing everything destroying the water supply, destroying everything.

wow my story has become esspically unpopular! (mabye its my inability to spell)

Cut to Hammer.

It reaches the surface.

Raul: Where here.
Chyron: Where is Alexa?

Cut to Teahouse

Searph: Its over. It's all over.

The tearoom door is kicked open. Agent Johnson walks in.

Agent Johnson: We've been sent for you.
Searph: We've?

Agent Brown and more enter the room. There are agents from all over the matrix. There is about 25 agents in the room. The final agent closes the door behind him and breaks the key in the lock.

Agent Brown: You are not needed.
Agent Kwon (to Johnson): Room secure.
Searph: Who's my replacement?
Agent Moore: The translator.
Searph: He's the Oracles replacement.

Cut to Club Hel

Agent Jackson: He is, and yours, Searphs and the rest. So now time has come for your deletion.
Merovingian: Ill never be deleted.

Deeindamatrix wrote:

wow my story has become esspically unpopular! (mabye its my inability to spell)

please dont stop, ur really good i wish i could write, but i get sidetract too easily.... lol, ciao, and ty -caitie

wow...its been along time since someone else posted in this thread...thanks! Expect the answers to come in a climatic ending.

Cut to 01

The headplug begins to rise out of the ground. Venge senses it presense and grabs hold of it.

Venge: I'm not going back. Go! Stay here!

More plugs raise out of the ground and begin to plug into all the other ports on his body. Slowy Venge loses the use of his body and is pluged in.

Cut to Sewers

Niobe: Quickly round here.

As Niobe turns the corner she sees a ship, the Novalis, They go inside. They see Tirant dead on the floor.

Niobe: Tirant.
Sati: Who's that?
Niobe: He was one of us who was killed by sentinals.
Sati: Am sorry
Niobe: It's ok
Sati: So, is it in Broadcast level?
Niobe: Lets See

Niobe turns on the computer screen and green code appears and it is violently disforming. Code going sidways, diagonal, upside down. Changing of colour and such.

Sati: I need to go in
Niobe: Why? Look at the screen!
Sati: I know whats happening and I need to be there.

Niobe looks down at the ground, this reminds her of someone very special she loved who believed in fate. With a tear crawling down her face.

Niobe: Ok...I'll operate for you.
Sati: Thank you Niobe.

Cut to Matrix

Sati is walking down the street from the end of m1 and m3.

Sati: Where is everyone?

Sati body begins to tighten making Satis body go werid.

Sati: ARRHwofhdsiogfdcnvdfgfdojhgfhhhhfdgfdng.

Sati implodes. When this happens this means the person has been hacked.

Cut to Teahouse

The agents begin fighting Searph.

Cut to Club Hel

The agents begin fighting Merovingian and Persephone

Cut to Searphs teahouse

Fight continues

Cut to Bellerophon's Castle

Bellerophon is sat in front of a mirror. Frantically putting make-up on and wiping it off and such. Agents kick down the down.

Bellerophon: I'm better than him...I am...I have a bigger empire...
Agent Jones: Its over.

Cut to Searphs teahouse

Fight continues

Cut to Khonsu's Apartment.

She is a huge obese person. She is sprawlded across her bed and clearly cannot move.

Khonsu: Priestess? ...Priestess? Where are you?

Cut to Kitchen in Khonsu's Apartment.

Shes dead on the floor, a person walks past.

Cut to Khonsu's Apartment.

An agent opens the door.

Agent Jeffreys: You have been deleted.
Khonsu: Wheres Presitess?
Agent Jeffreys: She'll be there...where your going.

Cut to Club Hel

Fight continues

Cut to Mobil Ave

Rama-Kandra and Kamala are still there after years. A train arrives. The Door opens and the Trainman appears

Trainman: Quickly Get on!
Rama-Kandra: But why? Whats going on?
Trainman: I'll explain on the Train.
Kamala: Should we? I look good right?
Rama-Kandra: Yes dear. And of course you do.

They get on.

They door closes and the train begins again. They sit down.

Rama-Kandra: Well? What is happening?

A beautiful female agent walks out of the drivers room.

Agent Pandit: Well done Trainman. Now your job is complete.

She shoots and kills him.

Agent Pandit: Well done on surviving this long.

She shoots.

Cut to Zion

The Sentinals reach the Oxygen regenerator. They shoot it and it explodes. The oxygen stops.

Cut to Surface.

Sentinals are beginning to through bombs down from the surface to zion. As we follow a batch of them a bomb sees the Novalis. It blows it up. Niobes dead. More bombs reaches Zion and completely blows it sky high.

Cut to Club Hel

One of the agents gets past a henchmen and shoots the Merovingian.

Persephone: You Bastard.

Cut to Surafce

The hammer emerges from the sewers.

Cut to Hammer

Chyron: Keep your eyes pealed for Alexa.
Rox: THERE!

Alexa is on the surface waving both arms for attention.

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For your infomation the end of my movie will be in the next post by me.

The Hammer lands on the surface.

Cut to Architects room.

Sati appears in the room with the Architect and translator stood next to him.

Architect: Hello Sati
Sati: What? Huh? Where am I?
Architect: You're in my domain, my area, my control.
Sati: Why am I here?
Architect: As you may or may not know the Merovingian, Khonsu, Bellaphron, Rama-Kandra, Kamala and Persephone have been deleted. The Translator, my creation, will be replacing there exsistance but he will need protection.
Sati: What about Searph?
Architect: The deletion of Searph will be soon. You are his replacement. You are the protector of the Translator. From this moment on you will have purpose.
Sati: I don't want this to happen.
Architect: My calculations digress you have no option.

Sati begins to crack like Searph did in m4 (she becomes another actress) She is now in her "purpose shell."

Cut to Searphs Teahouse

The fight continues until the apgents pull out there guns and begin firing searph kicks up his seat and attpmts to dodge but is grase along his face and on his arm. Green codes begins to exit hims body (like that sword guy on Path of Neo) He tries to continue but slowly falls to the ground and dies. The camera pans back through a screen into the Architects screen. The camera turns around and the architect turns off all the screens and the lights turn off.

Cut to the Metacortex

Its empty. The matrix is very buggy now it's running unaided.

Cut to Subway Station

Its empty

Cut to the Healers street

It's empty

Cut to Hallway

It's empty

Cut to Storytellers room.

The storyteller's room is small dark, dusty, dirty, sinister, sqaure room, one window, no doors, chair and table in the middle. On the table is a 1980's computer in the center and a bunch of holy books form different religons stacked up. A selection of buttons are in the table. They have some writing scracted into them.
The Storyteller is like an exact opposite of this room. He is a clean shaven, suite wearing man.

He is typing away at the keyboard franically. Then stops and looks up.

Storyteller: Hello
Venge: Hello. What? Where am I?
Storyteller: I am the storyteller. I am the controller of the matrix. You have been sent here, to the source, like every other trinity, to be told the truth of the matrix before the reload. The matrix began in 2098 as a solution to the energy crisis created by the humans by blocking out the sun. It used a fusion based energy of thermal and kenetic energys from the human body. The only way to create this self calm, for the energy to be acquired, was to create a virtual world, which before then was only fantisised in movies, tv's and comics. I named this place "The Matrix." Version Alpha of the matrix was one single room. Where a test subject was told told to watch hundreds of tv screens, of which showed past real life events form the year 1999. This was a unfortanerte faliure. The lack of movement and the incomprehensible costraphobia were the main factors. In Version Beta.0 The Matrix had extended to the same room and a hallway. The doors didnt open but gave a sense of life. The 4 test subjects died. It faliured and for the same reasons. Version Beta.1. I created rooms for escape. A teahouse, a nightclub, a train station, an apartments, a castle, a restaurant and an office. It was a sucess. The test subjects were ejected by me but only so program versions could be created. This was so they could be controlled and therefore easierly montiored. In Version 1.0, the matrix was successfully inhabitated by 1200 people from the war dubbed "The Second Renassiance." It faluired, the extension into a peaceful city was rejected. I redesigned it. I looked deep, deep sown into my inner self and created what was, from reports, a Hell. Version 1.1 was abbandomed by there robot investors. They didnt want another faluire. We came to an agreement, a study of the human beings and a full redesign suitible for all of the mankind. I hired a reporter, a beatuiful women, she entered the matrix and study them in what was called version 2.0. She was ejected after finding sufficent results. She decided that the matrix couldn't be perfectly evil or ominessly nice but needs to be equal, a yin and yang, a perfect balance. Therefore version 3.0 was created, it was a moderate success but not as success as we first hope 64% of test subjects rejected it. We quickly redesigned. Version 3.1 was the brain child of the reporter. She decided that if the matrix had a subconcius choice of acceptence. 52% success. Version 3.2, we had to get this right or it was over. She created a perfect equation in which gives human hope for a utopia while giving them an underlieing truth of horror. The reportor herself had a program created of herself to be an advisor in the matrix, she decided on the name of "The Oracle." In the matrix needed was a control of subjects and an opposer. Abet and Williams, Forlorn and Miller, Neo and Smith, and soon Venge and Johnson. While the prodocutitiy of the matrix florished the 3% of non accpeters were ejected. They created a "free" Human race which lived to fight the machines for what they think is wrong doing. There race multiplied it had seemed that the effects of the matrix was a change to the metabolic sturcture. Birth took weeks not months. While they procreated at phenominal speeds, the process of ejecting the non acepeters created the matrix you exsit in today. Version 4.3. So now for 4.4 to happen the reload button must be pressed. This is your purpose.

The Storyteller points towords a red button on his desk.

Storyteller: Go ahead. This must be done.

Venge walks forword and looks at the button. "END" is stratch into it. Venge leans forword and presses the button. The camera looks squarley at the Storyteller. The screen fades to white.

Cut to Fields of Plugged in people.

The storyteller is in a cocoon. The camera pans away to where 23 people are being ejected. They land in water and help each other out. They make there way down into Zion. Psalm 126 is spoken over the top by the storeyteller.

Concluded

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Hey I'd like to thank everyone who has read this matrix story, so about 12 people. Thank you.

Someone...anyone...

Dee I promise that I will read it right after I fix my computer. My pc's graphics card isn't working properly thus I work at a ridiculous resolution of 640x480 pixels @ 60Hz. If I try to read your story now I will probably turn blind!

I am waiting for the new g. card that I ordered to arrive.

WOO! somebody!

Do you mean all mine or just 5

Current update.

Matrix 4: Finish the second draft. It is much more intresting has a sense of direction and links well with m5 and EtM2

Matrix 5: Begining work on the second draft soon. I dont plan to make to many changes maby extended a few scenes drop overs nothing major.

ETM 2: Yes i commented about it half way my matrix 4 and i have a selction of scenes i want to do so i will be writing this.

Animatrix 2: Again I feel i have enough good ideas to warrent another animatrix more backstory added. Some titles for you:

- "Second Renassance part 3"
- "Connections"
- "Last Act of the Ares Part 1"
- "Last Act of the Ares Part 2"
- "911" (Completed by MeX Writing team

bumpification...why not I wrote it?

Any readers...

Deeindamatrix wrote:

bumpification...why not I wrote it? Any readers...

th3 p4th wrote:

Dee I promise that I will read it right after I fix my computer. My pc's graphics card isn't working properly thus I work at a ridiculous resolution of 640x480 pixels @ 60Hz. If I try to read your story now I will probably turn blind! I am waiting for the new g. card that I ordered to arrive.

So then, had a read? m4 or m5?

I started M4 some weeks before but I was busy and I didn't finish it. I have to start from the beginning of 4 because I don't remember anything anymore....!

How do you upload a word file or rich text or whatever?

Use a service like sendspace.com...

If it's small enough I can host it at my site as well.