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This story carries on from Matrix Realisation.

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Codes falls (with bits of white jumping from code to code) and writes Matrix Recapitulated, When the screen is black, waves of gold code start to flow out of the middle of the screen, the camera zooms into the centre, starts to fly around a key and flies off again the screen is black green code falls (once again with white) and goes around a Katana and goes into real.

It is the Château wall; somebody takes the sword off of the wall. Walks to the doors and opens them to the Le Vrai restaurant’s Kitchen.

Cooker: Hey you shouldn't be in here.
Man with sword: I am truly sorry

It’s Seraph. Imagine a fight scene with the cook throwing knifes and Searph blocking them with his sword. He stabs him. Searph walks off. He gets into the elevator to floor 101. There is no waiter waiting for a customer. He walks straight in. The place is empty except for the Merovingian, Persephone, the twins and a couple of goons.

Merovingian: Searph? Is that you? I find it hard to believe you bring yourself in front of me, even if you have no purpose.
Searph: It happens to all of us
Merovingian: I guess that’s correct, I hate my other form just not me. But you I guess its better.
Searph: That is of course your opinion
Merovingian: Of course.
Searph: Now, for a real discussion.
Merovingian: Go ahead
Searph: I need your help
Merovingian: what? Help? I see no reason to give you help!
Searph: You’re going to be deleted
Merovingian: Searph I am not dumb, I can’t be deleted when I have no purpose.
Persephone: The "Oracle" was killed, correct?
Searph: Correct, which means you could. Only the Architect can kill you but inside the matrix it’s self.
Merovingian: Is he who shot the Oracle?
Searph: Correct
Persephone: So why do you need our help?
Searph: We need to stop the Architect and avenge the Oracle
Merovingian: I will help you in your quest to stop him replacing us all
Searph: How did you know he replaced the Oracle?
Merovingian: It’s my job to know! But I refuse to help you avenge the Fortune Teller.
Searph: Understood. Do you have the location of the rest of us?
Merovingian: Well me you and my Cherie are in here, the Architect is most likely in his room and the Oracle is in the source!

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informative, ur building to something, i'll wait.

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yeah, its only the beggining

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Searph: What about Rama-Kandra and Kamala?
Merovingian: The Architect is bizzare program, am sure you agree. Searph, do you know how long i takes to create a program as complex as the Oracle?
Searph: No
Merovingian: Take it from me it takes a long time.
Persephone: Its a shame he uses them for ridiculous purposes
Twin #1: She knows
Twin #2: your secret!
Merovingian: Quiet you, Searph do you see that vampire there?

He points to a goon with a disformed face, and an arm long than the other.

Searph: Yes
Merovingian: I created him, i couldn't make him look right though. Day after day, frustrated by fail. I became obsest, i would go months without seeing anyone. Thats the best i could do. Even though he looks wrong, he serves his purpose just the same.
Searph: So where is Rama and Kamala
Merovingian: I was just getting to it. Creating programs isn't easy its arduous pain-staking process.
Searph: But he told me the translator was created long before he deleted the oracle.
Merovingian: I think he exaggerated abit there
Searph: But i thought he couldnt lie?
Merovingian: Yes he has been programmed to not lie, but exaggerating is bending the truth, not brakeing it
Searph: So where are RAMA AND KAMALA?

The goons step up and make themselves look big

Merovingian: Its ok lads, he just wants some answers
Persephone: At the moment Rama-Kandra and Kamala is in the Mobil ave
Searph: I thought that was created by you
Merovingian: I did, my only true, fully creation, my only child. Although it was the trainman who persevered and would like to think he created the place. I gave it to the architect on the agreement that i and my people had full access it.
Searph: I need to go to the Mobil ave
Merovingian: I will get the trainman to take you on one condition
Searph: What would that be?
Merovingian: You get me the key of the Translator
Searph: a key?
Merovingian: That is all
Searph: I will make sure i get it
Merovingian: Good
Searph: One last question: are you aware of the location of the others?
Merovingain: I have told you everything i know

Cut to Zion

Zion worker: Welcome back to the dock Roland, sir
Roland: Thanks it good to be back, what are we are now?
Zion worker: The machines are gathering speed, 17 hours and counting
Roland: We dont even have a day left
Zion worker: At the rate there moving they'll hit Zion in 8 hours!
Roland: WHAT? why didnt you tell anyone?
Zion worker: There was no one to tell, You, niobe and Locke were gone
Roland: Why didnt you tell Ghost? Colt? AK? Sparks? The Council?
Zion worker: sorry sir
Roland: I guess there nothing we can do now, is there? back to your orders
Zion Worker: Yes sir, striaght away sir!
Roland: You!
Another worker: yes sir?
Roland: Your in charge while I go to the Council

Cut to Council

Councillor West: Roland are you trying to tell us the machines will hit Zion in less than 8 hours?
Roland: That is what i am informed.
Councillor Dillard: What do you advise?
Roland: I advise to to go to the lower levels of Zion now before its too late.

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sounds like the action is upcoming in full speed.

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yeah, if he gets the key

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hell yeah i cant wait.

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Councillor West: Ok, Raise your hand if you want to retreat to lower Zion

They all raise there hand

Councillor West: Are we all in agreement?
Councillor Haaman: Seems like its time to go

Cut to Sewer

Locke: Whats going on with him?
Niobe: I don't know, he just went insane
Sati: When it happened before he just back normal in a snap with no memory of what happend moments before.
Locke: Why wont his arm move?
Niobe: He seems to be holding something
Sati: Its a key
Niobe: Is that what he was talking about?
Sati: The translator gave it to him
Locke: Who the hell is the translator?
Sati: The oracle wasnt feeling right...

Locke has sinister grin on his face

Sati: ...so she told us to talk to the translator instead. So we went and when we got there he gave morpheus a key and the rest is history.
Niobe: Either way we need to get out of here and morpheus seen by a medic or something.

Cut to Street (matrix)

Searph walks down a street and goes inside a telephone box, he lifts the phone

Searph: Your going to pay, even if it takes me intil after the reload. i am going to avenge the oracle.

The dial tone happens. He places the phone back on the reciever and walks out, he walks into a Oritenal weapons shop.

Shop Owner: Hey you, i know you! you was the guy who killed almost 40 police officers single handed.

Searph picks up a Bo

Shop Owner: HEY! Stay back!

The owner runs into the back, he rings the police

Shop OTP: yeah yeah, thats right, the guy who killed all those police officers. Thanks.

Searph walks around the corner

Searph: Please, I mean you no harm, I merly want this Bo.
Shop Owner: Take it, take it all. Just dont hurt me

You hear cars screeching.

Police on a speaker phone: Put the weapons on the ground and come out with your hands up now!

Searph: Go!

The shop owner stumbles up runs out of the shop. Searph slowly walks out, he goes out side. The police open fire on Searph. He takes refuge inside the shop. When the barrage of bullets end. He runs out side. Imagine a shoot-out/fight scene with searph being quite acobatic with his moves. Waves after waves of police attack him. When he has killed about 60 cops. He begins to tire and t.w.o.qs an cop car and drives off. All the cops jump into there cars and follow him. Searph smashs the window in front of him. grabs his Bo gets ready. While all this is happening the cops are fireing at him.

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...AND THEN....?

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and then you wait

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Very good Dee, as great as the first, but better. Thumbup

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fine i'll wait, it is worth the wait.

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Very good Dee, as great as the first, but better. :Thumbup:


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well duh i've only been scince the begining. *im ur #1 FAN!*

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Mabye one day there will be competition for #1 fan

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NO IM #1 AND THAT IS THAT! U HEAR ME THAT'S THAT! *lol* Whitelaugh

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Searph drives onto the highway. He has an abnormally large amount of police following and shooting at him. Searph is darting in and out of traffic. He sticks his bo out of the window. he turns up onto a brigde going across the highway, he climbs on to the bonet and uses his Bo as a pole vault off of the bridge. He lands causing a massive wave in the ground, flinging all the cars around him away, hitting other cars and the walls. It is so powerful the brige foundations crack casuing it to fall. Searph jumps over the barrier in the middle, takes a car and drives off. To end the scene it pulls back through a t.v screen of the architect and he taps his pen and the screen goes black.

Cut to Venge

The sentinal has nearly reached 01. he is about 29 miles away.

Cut to Hermes

Alexa OTP: So were in agreement, phase two will begin when I land.
Raul OTP: Make it so

Alexa closes connections to Raul. She searches for a safe place to land. Press some buttons on a screen next to her and begins to land.

Cut to Machines digging

The diggers are moving quickly, the sentinals runners and retractiods and moving quickly and are also attacking the ground.

Cut to Le Vrai Restraunt toilets

The merovingian and persehphone are placing cream on scars on the side of his face which come from the side of his eyes.

Merovingian: Stupid eyes, good job we all kept my original ones. I guess it will be nice to see that jedus Searph fail, there is no way he can get that key.
Persephone: Where is the key?
Merovingain: Another world
Persephone: The real world...
Merovingian: Correct
Persephone: Wouldn't you one day like to see what the real world is like?
Merovingian: Does it matter? And I mean when we started we saw videos of the place, so you know what it is like
Persephone: I just want to go there, some time
Merovingian: Come on, we both know we can never go
Persephone: We can go, i know we can go, you made that little exile girl escape. You cant keep everything away from me. Don't you think i would of thought 'Where did he get the oracles eyes?'
Merovingian: arrrr...my sweet persehphone, its not our place to be and, come to think about it, how did you find out?

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omg just as good as ever. its a work of art.

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my best ever review

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frm ur #1 fan..right?

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right!

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u hear that bitches im #1! YYEEAAHH!

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Persephone: I have my sources
Merovingian: I am sure you do.

The Merovingian walks out.

Persephone: Prick!

Cut to Zion

Roland: How long?
Zion worker: 16 hours, its weird the diggers are going the same speed but for some reson they are still gaining speed. I seems all the machines are helping.
Roland: Something isnt brewing quite right in crazy town

Another Zion worker walks over

Zion worker #2: Roland sir, we have confimation of the machines army.
Roland: and...
Zion worker #2: They are sending diggers, sentinals, runners and retractoids
Roland: Retractiods?
Zion worker #2: Yes sir
Roland: You, go tell Colt or Ghost that they have a retracting problem
Zion worker: Yes sir, striaght away sir!

He goes

Roland: You back to your orders
Zion worker: Yes sir

Cut to Colt and Ghost

They are on the legde near the edges of Zion. The Worker runs to them. The "..." represent heavy breathing

Zion Worker: Roland...has...sent me t...to tell you...you have a...re...rectracting problem
Colt: What?
Ghost: Retractiods?
Zion Worker: Yes sir!
Colt: This may be more serious then we first thought
Zion Worker: Orders, sir?
Ghost: yes, go to the Zion army work rooms and tell the APU and RAPU workers that Ghost and Colt demand the presence in the dock.
Zion worker: yes sir.

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Cut to Zion army

The Zion worker pops his head around the corner.

Zion worker: Would every...WOULD EVERYONE WHO IS-

The room is to loud. It seems the alliance has started on the normal people. Some of the Rebels shouts

Shout #1: BURN IN HELL BASTARDS!
Shout #2: WELL I WONT NEED TO GO FAR THEN!
Shout #3: FUCK YOU!
etc.

Alice notices the zion worker.

Alice: oh...hi, what you need?
Zion worker: Colt says would all APU and RAPU workers report to the dock imediatly.
Alice: ok i tell them
Zion worker: And ill tell them about whats going on down here.
Alice: Good

Alice throws a table at the wall. All goes quiet, everyone is looking at her.

Alice: Would all APU and RAPU wrkers report to the dock now!

They ignore her. She does it again. The crowd stops again

Alice: You all have to report to the dock becuase, the machines have reached Zion!

They ignore her saying.

shout: Shes making it up!

Alice: Orrr...fuck this am going to Roland

Cut to Zion control room

Roland: Thier doing what?

Alice runs in

Alice: Thier ignoring me
Roland: who's thier?
Alice: the army
Roland: This is to big for me. Where Locke when you need him!

Cut to sewer

Sati: Can you get the key off of him?
Niobe: i can try, i dont know what good it would be

She tries to but fails.

Niobe: cant do it sorry
Locke: I say leave him and we make our way back
Niobe: Locke you cold blooded bastard!
Sati: You can leave us but where not leaving him here.

Cut to Searphs teahouse

He is pacing up and down

Searph: Where is the key? Wheres the translator? Its his key he will have it?

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Searph walks to the door and opens it to the hallway.

Searph: Think Searph, the hallway is mega city, so i need to the metacortex but which door? Is there even a door to the Gobyen Island?

A voice from behind him

Agent: Yes there is
Searph: hmm its you
Agent: I see you have made an agreement with the merovingian. Even after he took the Oracle.
Searph: I trust him
Agent: You trusted me.
Searph: He has helped me before, he keeps his promises.
Agent: Of course he does
Searph: I know he is a narrow minded, self centred son of a bitch, but right now i trust him. Now what do you want?
Agent: I have come here to tell you
Searph: Tell me what?
Agent: That the key of the translator is not here
Searph: Where is it?
Agent: The real world. The Translator gave it to Morpheus
Searph: Morpheus has it

Searph looks up and the door to his left is closing, he is alone again.

Searph: Why does he try to help me? I need to speak to the Merovingian

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