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»THE MATRIX TV SERIES. ( Still doesnīt have a name.)«


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What I would like to see in Matrix 4 (and how I would rewrite Matrix 3)

 

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---------- EPISODE 01 ------------

WAKE UP

Written by Mrbrown950.


We see the code falling....

We see the camera traveling thru the green symbols....

We see flashbacks from the Matrix Trilogy, and we see the words "Know thy self "....

10 A.M.

Metacortex office building....

We see the sign that says Metacortex, and the camera starts to move up faster and faster untill it stops in one floor....

We see the cubicles, and the camera enters one in particullar....

We see a man playing solitaire....

Girl:- Emm.... Excuse me....

The guy closes the window....

Guy:- Yes ?

Girl:- The boss says he wants to have a word with you.

Guy:- O-Ok....

The guy walks thru the cubicles looking at the people work.

Suddenly another guy appears....

Guy:- John!, what's up ?

John:- Nothing much, im going to talk to the boss..

Guy:- Good luck men, oh and dont make a coment on his new "hair".

John:- I wonīt.

As John walks we hear what he is thinking....

John:- (Shit, he is going to fire me i knew it).

As he walks he bumps into a girl with coffee andhe gets burned...

John:- Ahhh!

Girl:- Oh, Iīm sorry, im----

John:- Itīs Ok.... (Fuck this is like a bad dream).

John enters an office....

Boss:- Take a sit...

John:- Thanks (Thanks? he is going to fire you!)

Boss:- As you may know, we are having a bit if a financial situation...

John:- Yes (MMmm Itīs Mc Donald's hiring? )

Boss:-And we are leting go of a few employees..

John:- (Thatīs it Iīm going to say something about his wig!)

Boss:- I need you to come a few extra hours...

John:- Well you ?----- W-Wait, what?

Boss:- Extra hours, we need to do some paper work.

John:- Sure.... (Thannk yoouu looooordddd!)

Boss:- Ok, go on now....

John:- Ok, thanks..

He goes out the office and does a little dance.

As he is dancing a girl sees him dance.

John:- OOhhh, I was just (Shitt!)

Girl:- Itīs ok, you have some moves..

John:- Well, thanks, you are....

Girl:- Stacy.

John:- Stacy (Staacyyy)

We see the two of them talking and suddenly we see a car pulling up to the building.

We see the door opening and a black shoe steps on the wet asfalt.

--------------------------- 10:30----------------------------

Stacy:- Me and some friend are going to have some drinks, want to come?

John:-Sure! (Extraa Hoursssss), Damn i forgot I have to stay to do some paper work.

Stacy:- Oh too bad, but im still having that drink with you.

John:- Sure!

John goes back to his cubicle, he grabs some sheets and starts to read....

We see three agents talking to a receptionist.

Agent: Thank you....

We see the agents entering an elevator....

Inside the elevator they load their guns....

It starts to rain....


We see John looking thru the window, and he sees Stacy going outside with some people and she is running from the rain...

Stacy looks up and sees John....


John smiles at her, and she waves....

We see the agents arriving at the floor....

John continues reading....

One of the agents is talking to the boss....

Boss:- What? John? I donīt believe it.

Agent:- He is the man we are looking for....

We see John typing.... and suddenly a girl appears....

Girl:- Some guys are looking for you.

John:-Who?

Girl:- I donīt know they look like feds, you havenīt killed someone have you?

John:- Ha ha very funny, letīs see what they want.

John starts to walk towards the agents....

Suddenly the camera shows a black bike on a rooftop next to the building.

The biker starts to accelerate going towards the window....

John keeps walking....

The Biker gets closer....

John walks....

The biker gets closer....

John walks....

The agents go for their guns....

The bike jumps off the rooftop....

John looks back and sees the bike....

The agents aim at John....

A guy drops his coffee.

One of the agent pushes the boss away....

The bike gets closer!

John hides in a cubicle....

The agents start to shoot....

The bike goes thru the window!

-------------10: 57, 10:58, 10:59, 11:00--------

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