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[Matrix Revolutions]
Merovingian: "It is remarkable how similar the pattern of love is to the pattern of insanity."
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mrbrown950
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911
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Experienced poster
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-We see the Matrix code falling.... and 911 appears.
We see a factory at night....
The camera shows a door....
Suddenly we see a cop car and a cop getting out....
The cop turns his flashlight and takes his gun....
Cop:-This is unit 32, Iīm on location, im going in..
Voice:- Roger that 32....
The cop enters and we see a lot of high shelves, cardboard boxes....
The cop walks slowly....
Suddenly we see a guy dressed in black and with sunglasses.... He is GHOST!
The cop looks at a box and it say: "VERSATAN" PRIORITY 1039.
Suddenly we hear footsteps running away...
The cop turns around quickly and starts to run in the dark....
Cop:- Stop, police!
We see ghost jumping into Niobeīs car and escaping.
As the cop runs to the exit, we see a white light and e hear a screeching noise.
Suddenly we see three shadows....
We se three agents.
As the cop runs, he tryes to explain.
Cop: Hurry they went that way,!
Agent:- You failed.
Agent 2:- You are useless.
Agent 3:- You are obsolete.
Suddenly the three agents pull out guns.
And everything goes in slow motion....
The agents shoot!
Good morning wake up itīs a beautifull saturday! you are listening to KLFB rock and roll 24 hours!
We start to hear the song by AC/ DC "Highway to hell"
"And itīs a highway to hell....
The music starts to slow down, the voices start to deform..
"And itīs a highwwaaaayyy toooo heelllll...."
He is stil looking at the agents in slow motion...
The cop looks hears a baby crying... he looks to a box in the floor.... and he sees a baby with tubes inside a capsulle.
The cop screams but the only thing we hear is the song....
The camera shows his eye and it closes....
Suddenly it opens!
AAhh!
Honey are you okay?, It was only a dream...
Cop:- The baby....
Wife:- Come on, ill make you breakfast....
In the kitchen....
We see the guy sitting on the table and two kids sitting there too...
The looks at his son and he has a MIB action figure (Men in black).
the kid points to him and pretends he shoots him.
Kid:- Bang, Bang... You are dead daddy..
The Wife turns the radio and we hear.... Good morning wake up itīs a beautifull saturday! you are listening to KLFB rock and roll 24 hours! This is AC/ DC with "Highway to hell"....
TO BE CONTINUED.
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Neo1
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Spent much time here, parents wondering
Posts: 1129
Location: The Matrix
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the cop quickly makes his way to his feet and begin to breath hardly.
"turn that off" says the cop.
"but honey, im" replys the wife,
"NOW!, please can you turn it off" screams the cop
the wife makes here way to the kitchen counter and switchs of the radio.
still standing dazed, and confused the cop replys
i've got to go, im late for work"
-- Bathroom --
as the cop gets out of the shower and raps the towel around himself, he wipes his hand of the fogged up mirror and begins looking at himself, when all of a sudden he begins seening images of shadowed men, and a baby with tubes inside a capsulle.
startled and confused a takes a step back.
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"Too know the truth, you must first look past the lie."
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Marsoullis
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Hop-in
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Nearly 3 hundred posts!
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Someone can hop in for me this time around. My mind's on other things at the moment, so I'm not feeling many creative juices to contribute. I'll help next time.
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vieome
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I am starting to like this site
Posts: 85
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Cut to computer monitor:
Screen:
Transmisson reloaded
I am goin to show these (ones) a world
where anything is possible.
Voice overs
Troi: He is good!
Day: We better find an exit.
Troi: First, how about a kiss?
Day: You know it isnt real... in this place.
Troi: Well its different, but it is the same.
Day: Your wish is my command.
Then on the screen appears the reflection
of the two people who are talking.
There is a guy sitting in front of the
monitor and standing behind him is
a women. He stands up and faces her
and they move in for a kiss. The image
freezes and frozen in time they share
a kiss. The camera pans around their
still image(time slice) and stops on a tatoo on the
womens back. It is of a black cat.
Then the whole room turns white. They
are inside a training program.
The action continues
Troi: Hey times up...
Then Day turns and looks directly into
the camera. As if she is looking at the
viewers.
Day: You remember us dont you, well he
freed us too.
Cut to
A room inside zion. It is the training
room. We see an operator she is a women.
A foggal(?) women.
Being unplugged is Troi and Day.
Hayleigh: Have a good trip?
Troi: Yeah, its the only high around here.
Day: You wont be saying that tonight.
Troi: Leigh I have been meaning to ask.
Hayleigh: Ask no questions hear no lies.
Troi: Sorry but I wanted to know.
Hayleigh: Well it is a good question, and
no... I am glad I am pure human, not having
the ability to plug into these training
programs you enjoy, does not bother me in
the least.
Troi: But surely you must wonder whats it
like.
Hayleigh: Just as you must wonder
whats it like to be human without holes.
But on some level I know what it like...
to plug in. You see this keyboard, notice
it is not qwerty. Well the signs on it
are ancient japanese symbols and a bit
of other stuff. Our system it
not like the systems you are used to,
this is quantem. It may look as
if I am using my fingers here, but really
when we hack into the matrix we kinda
use our minds. I think of what I want
to do... then its done.
Day: Hey thanks for the lesson but I
am beat and starved. What say Troi, we
grab some chicken soup.
Troi: It does not taste like chicken.
Day: It does to me.
Fade out to white. then the white collapses
into a black hole. Soon the movie screen
is black. Then we see some gold code load,
not the normal green and then this title
comes up. A day to review...
Cut to
a meeting between LOCKE and HUME.
Locke: Well... a year of peace was better
then nothing.
Hume: You know I really thought the peace
would last. I am not even sure how the
war started again.
Locke: Well the oracle did say we will
see neo again. That was a sign.
Hume: Yes...yes, I guess there is only
(one) thing to do.
Locke: I have already sent five ships
looking for him.
Hume: But you dont...
Locke: I do now...
Cut to cop again...
Cop: whats happening to me
(sorry ones had to throw this in before two many unrelated post get in the way, mr brown you next)
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mrbrown950
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911
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Experienced poster
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Cop: whats happening to me ?
Wife:- Honey, are you ok in there?
Cop:- Umm.... Yes...I was just-----
Suddenly he opens the door....
Cop:- Iīm ok, I better get to work.
Wife:- You sure?
Cop:- Donīt worry, see you later.
He kisses her.
Kid1:- Bye daddy!
Kid2:- Catch the bad guys!
Cop:- Sure will ahhaa bye.
We see him walking down the street....
As he walks he waves at his neighbors... he looks at the sun beams going thru the trees.... suddenly he bumps into a guy talking to a cellphone....
Cop:- Sorry...
Guy:- Thatīs ok..
Cop:-Damn machines.
The cop arrives to the station....
Old Guy:-Hey Romano ! I heard about that drunk the other day!
Guy:- Hahah keep laughing old man!
He pretends to punch him....
Old Guy:- Sorry, itīs just to weird, i never heard of a drunk kissing a cop in the mouth! hAHAHA!
Cop:- Today is gonna be a long day!
He goes to the coffe pot and pours a cup.
We see him standing drinking the coffee and suddenly we see two cops bringing in a screaming guy.
Guy:- Iīm telling you men!... The machine control us!
The cop suddenly looks at the coffee pot, then looks to a computer over the desk.
Cop:- Nut job....
The cop enters the cop car.
Cop:- 32 here, reporting in.
Operator:- Good luck 32.
He starts to drive and as he drives off, he sees thru the car`s mirror three agents taking the guy to a black car.
Cop:- Fucking FBI....
As he drives nothing happens, everything is calm....
Suddenly we hear gunshots.... BANG BANG BANG!
The cop drives into a neighboorhood....
He gets out of the car and we see guys coming out from the alley..
Guy:- You know were you at piggy?
We see a gang dressed in red.
He goes for his gun.
Guy:- Donīt move fool.
The cop looks at a couple of guys standing in front of a grocery store and he sees a corean guy shot on the ground on a puddle of blood.
Guy:- Any last words?
The guy points the gun to his head.
Suddenly in the alley someone comes walking towards them. we cant see who it is....
Guy:- Yo! check that out.
We see the copīs face....
Guy:- What, you want some too ?
TO BE CONTINUED...
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vieome
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cut back to zion
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I am starting to like this site
Posts: 85
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Cut to door
Then knock knock
Voice over
Hume: Come in
The door opens and we see it is spoon boy.
Hume: Yes what can I do for you child
Spoon: I needed to speak to you about the war.
Hume: What do you know about war kid, there is no war
Spoon: There is no war.
Hume: Well I guess everyone must be talking, but you are too
young to be thinking about war.
Spoon: Its just
Hume: Just what kid?
Spoon: Neo he left me with this sir.
He hands Hume a disc.
Spoon: He said that if the war started again I was to give it to you,
He said it will help you find him.
Hume: Thanks, now you go back on making those spoons and
thinking nothing about the war, everything is going to be okay.
Hume sits staring at the disc. He loads it...
Hume: What, what is this about. Looks like some kinda address
Locke who is still with him and had been silent speaks.
Locke: What address
Hume:
cut to alley.
Guy: Hey I am talking to you
(sorry ones this is my last contribution sorry Neo1 I had to
take your place. I am about to be unplugged from the internet
for who knows how long. You guys look after yourselfs and
take care of Micro.)
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Deeindamatrix
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So many posts, I am a Warner Brother
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Location: indamatrix
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the cop looks at the phone nodding his head, when he looks up to thank the mysterious guy, he is left standing in the alley all alone.
cut to the next day at home (11:44)
Cop: Love?
wife: Yeah?
Cop: Have you seen my phone?
wife: Which one?
Cop: my new one
wife: I think you left it on the stairs
Cop: ok
The cop runs to the stairs to see if the phone is there, its not
Cop: Its not there!
wife: well i don't know its your phone
Cop (sarcasticly): Thank you
wife (sarcasticly): your welcome
He goes upstairs
Cop: Kids?
Kids: Yes
Cop: have you seen my phone?
Kids: Yeah
Cop: Thank god, where is it
Kids: On the stairs
Cop: No really where is it, i havent got time for this
Kids: On the stairs
He looks around and the phone is there
Cop: what? i could of sweared...hmm...Thanks kids
He picks up the phone. walks back into the room and sits down he looks at the clock and it says 11:52
Cop: Right i can do this, 12:00.
He cant sit combtably he is always moving. He looks to the clock again 11:57. The phone rings, its ringtone "highway to hell" by AC/DC
Cop: What? Highway to hell?
He dosent answer it
Cop: Its a trick
The clock goes to 11:58. The phones still ringing
wife: Darling your phones ringing
Cop: I know
wife: Well then anwer it
Cop: not yet
wife: Why? who is it?
Cop: I'm not sure
The clock goes to 11:59. The phones still ringing
Cops thoughts: Should answer it? No...no...not yet, how do i know its him? what if someone else, itll be ingaged when he rings, why me?
The clock goes to 12:00. He answer the phone.
Cop: Ermm..Hello
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th3 p4th
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Awesome!
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So many posts,I should be cited in books
Posts: 1574
Location: Core Network
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I like it very very much!please continue!
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mrbrown950
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911
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Experienced poster
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Cop:- Ermm..Hello
Voice:- Go to the kitchen....
Cop:- Wha-- What?.... Who is this?
Voice:- there is no time, go to the kitchen...
Suddenly someone knocks on the door.
Wife:- Coming!
We hear the wifeīs conversation....
Voice:- Ms. Romano?
Wife:- Yes, what can i----- BANG BANG BANG!
Cop:- Jane ! No!
The cop runs to the living room and sees the Agents.
Voice:- Go up the stairs!
The agents pull out their guns....
The cop runs upstairs.
Agent:- Kids?
Agent 2:- At school.
Agent3:- Heīs upstairs.
The agents go up the stairs very slowly...
Agent:- Mr. Romano ? We wanīt a word with you.
We see the cop looking for something in his closet.... He takes out an old revolver.
The agents walk slowly thru the dark hallway.
Suddenly we hear the song.... And is a highay to hell!....
The agents kick the bedroom door and its a computer playing the music....
We see the window opened.... and we hear a crash and a car driving off!
The three agents go running don the stairs and go outside the house.
We see the garage door with a big hole and tire marks still hot.
Agent:- He has scaped.
In a building...
We see a guy sitting in front of monitors, he is an agent....
Agent:- I know.... move to plan B.
We see the agents entering the car....
Agent:- Malpaso Elementary school, Bobby Romano 10 years old, Jamie Romano 8 years old, ready for deletion.
We see a school....
Teacher:- Ok, go on play outside.
Kids:- Yeahh !
We see the car of Mr. Romano pulling up to the playground.
He runs inside the school.
Cop:- My kids, itīs an emergency.
Lady:- Calm down, give me their names.
Cop:- Bobby and Jamie Romano! Hurry up!
Lady:- Donīt you take that tone with me!
Cop:- Ok, iīm sorry can you get them.
Lady:- Sure, wait right here.
The cop looks thru a window and sees the black car.
Cop:- Shit!
The cop goes running outside and sees his kids playing.
The kids are in the middle of the yard, and the agents start to walk towards them and they slowly take their guns out....
The cop looks at them and pulls out the revolver....
TO BE CONTINUED...
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Neo1
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Spent much time here, parents wondering
Posts: 1129
Location: The Matrix
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BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG,
the cop unloads the entire barrel cyclender at the agents, and to the horror falling before the cops eyes the three agents dodged everone of the bullets.
now the agents recover themselve and straigten the tyes. and then looks down at the cops young son.
agent 1: Prepare for deletion.
cop: SHIT! No
"BANG", the agent pulls the trigger of his desert eagle, the bullet leaves the barrel in a firey explosion and enters the cops young son. and exits through his back followed by a spray of rich red blood.
the son hits the floor.
cop: run jamie, run!
jamie couldn't moved frozen on the spot, by what he had just scene.
cop: RUUN jamie
but it was to late the second agent had pulled out of his coat his desert eagle and pulled the trigger.
cop: NOOOOoooo....no
now the cop drops to his hands and knees and begins to cry.
the agents start looking at one another, and then agent three pulls out his desert eagle from his coat and with agent onw and two they begin to walk towards the cop.
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alyce
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Here is an Oscar
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One-Oh-One
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Location: zion
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IS th meant to be two stories or one. I like the idea that the war couls haeve started again after revolutions it explains alot
and even why we are still in the sam matrix. The video too is a nice touch. I wish you guys can do another one and if so can I join. The agents as feds is classic..
Who do I caontact
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mrbrown950
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Yes
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Experienced poster
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