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What I would like to see in Matrix 4 (and how I would rewrite Matrix 3)

 

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Cut to door

Then knock knock

Voice over

Hume: Come in

The door opens and we see it is spoon boy.

Hume: Yes what can I do for you child
Spoon: I needed to speak to you about the war.
Hume: What do you know about war kid, there is no war
Spoon: There is no war.
Hume: Well I guess everyone must be talking, but you are too
young to be thinking about war.
Spoon: Its just
Hume: Just what kid?
Spoon: Neo he left me with this sir.

He hands Hume a disc.

Spoon: He said that if the war started again I was to give it to you,
He said it will help you find him.
Hume: Thanks, now you go back on making those spoons and
thinking nothing about the war, everything is going to be okay.

Hume sits staring at the disc. He loads it...

Hume: What, what is this about. Looks like some kinda address

Locke who is still with him and had been silent speaks.

Locke: What address
Hume:

thebluered.blogspot.com...

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The storie continues

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man u guys r still at it. im telling u two should think of a career in writing ur very good at it.

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i have always like reading, and watching movies and anime, so i think that is were i got my writing insperation from.

"Too know the truth, you must first look past the lie."
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Neo1 wrote:

i have always like reading, and watching movies and anime, so i think that is were i got my writing insperation from.


Is it you who wrote the black cat story I think it is great
But I think it is too matrix like you know the cat=rabbit

And Locke and Hume both being philosophers who discussed power. But none the less you are talented keep up the good work. I would like to see more.

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we have actual philosophers here? i did not know that.

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Locke: -What address ?

Hume:- Youtube.com...

Locke:- What does it mean?

-We see a chat room....

NEO JUST ENTERED THE CHAT...

Locke:- Neo?

We see the screen and someone starts to write a message....

NEO:- Help me, im in the black building.... the tower is burning....

Hume asks what does it mean....

HUME_ZION:- Where are you?, What tower?

NEO HAS LEFT THE CHAT ROOM....

We see a hand with sunglasses.... The hand crushes them....

The camera goes up and we see its an agent....

We see Neo sitting on a chair....

Agent:- You know why you are here Mr.Anderson?

Neo doesnīt respond....

Agent:- Whatīs the matter, the cat got your tongue?

Neo:- You will all die.

Agent:- Mr.Anderson, you are here to be deleted.

In Zion....

The Kid:- Troi!

The kid asks the people were is he....

Guy:- He is in the cave with Day.

The Kid:- Thanks!

Guy:- I wouldnīt disturb them if I were you!

The kid enters the cave and sees a light far away.

We see Troi and Day sitting with candles kissing....

The Kid:- Day! Troi!

The kid scares them and Troi burns himself !

Troi:- Shit!, What?

The Kid:- Iīts Neo, he is in danger!

Day and Troi knock over the candles and go running to a ship.

Troi:- We need to broadcast!

Guy:- Sorry iīm fixing the pads on this thing, in a week maybe itīs ready..

Day enters the ship and turns it on.

Operator:- Woww, hold on, we are still calibrating it, we are not ready to broadcast yet.

Day:- You are now!

Day grabs him and puts a knife to his neck....

Day:- Call the gates....

Operator:- W-what do you expect me to do, the ship is not ready..

Day presses the knife against his neck harder....

Day:- If your next answer isnīt yes, i swear ill kill you!

Operator:- Ok Ok! This is "The Icarus", we request to open the gates.

Guy:- You can go thru gate 7, have a safe trip.

We see the gate opening....

Day:- Troi! Hurry up!

Troi goes running inside the ship....

Guy:- Hey, you canīt go-----

The guy enters the ship and sees Day with the knife....

We see that he starts to make signals to the control tower....

In the control tower....

Guy:- What?

In the Icarus....

We see Troi going towards gate 7....

In the control Tower....

Guy:- Gate 7?

Guy2:- Isnīt that the Icarus?

The guy looks at the other guy...

Guy:- Yes, why?

Guy2:- Well, according to this readings it has one pad missing and its at half- power.

The guy pushes a button and we see the chains changing direction....

Troi:- They are closing the gates!

Day:- Hurry!

We see the Icarus going at full speed towards the gate.

We hear an alarm....

Guard in APU:- Stop that ship! Shoot!

We see two guards shooting the ship....

The ship goes thru the gate....

Guard:- They escaped! Call the other ships!

We start to see the inside of a lot of ships at the same time....

We see a message on the monitors....

STOP THE ICARUS AT ALL COST

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mrbrown950 wrote:

Locke: -What address ?

Hume:- Youtube.com...



I htink you are lost b ro

you tube is alink to awebsite

here


youtube.com...

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nah im not lost im simply intigued(sp?) by the stroy.

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I have no idea what this thread is about...can some enlighten me?

Just to point out, cats were used in the egyption times to spy for their owners, the cats would go out into the cities at night and gather information, and then return to their masters....this is why Cats have an aloof nature.

Cats are also quite psychic, they have a larger field of vision, seeing more than the human eye. They can sense frequencies that others do not notice. If a cat adopts you, ie, a cat starts visiting your place, its a sign that it can sense danger and its there for your protection.

However in the dream state, black cats are actually mean deceipt! If you dream of black cats, it means that you feel being deceived by something or someone.

So in the first matrix movie, where Neo sees a dejavu of a black cat, and thus morpheus continually going on about the matrix being a 'dreamworld'. I instantly knew that Neo became aware of deceipt around him, thus the matrix changing, and cypher, being the person that was deceitful.

The white rabbit on the other hand...well thats a totally different story altogether..

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What is the missing (Link)

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ok u 2 just made this whole thing confusing.

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The missing link in the trilogy is that we don't know nothing about the previous cycles.

Did the One look the same (as being cloned)?
Was there an Anti One and so yes, was it a copy of Smith or another agent?
How and why did they meet the Merovigian?
Who jumped out of the window instead of Trinity? Morpheus?

matrix-explained.com...
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o i c, well how can we answer that?

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The Wachowski's should come and type it here Smile

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i'll ask em'.

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....why, in the first story, would the agents have killed the cop's family? That's not really how they work, is it?

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what? i dont understand.

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It's seems he has been having some verbal disorders like you.

As I said: like attracts like Whitelaugh

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well...whatever. so what is new?

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