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»MATRI X 4 : The end of the matrix.«

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What I would like to see in Matrix 4 (and how I would rewrite Matrix 3)

 

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well nice job i must say but i have a feeling that u did not put everything u were thinking of on the page....u should do that next time.

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Thanks, i think that is better to tell the story simple, but maybe next time ill do it more detailed.
And now the new character will appear.

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NOW A NEW CHARACTER WILL APPEAR....

In a police station in the Matrix....

They have Morpheus in an interrogation room....

Agent:- Well, finally the great Morpheus.... I must say it was very easy to catch you.

Morpheus:- How did you know? We were on a secure location.

Agent:- I wont get into details.... Lets say our friend Cypher was hellpfull.

Morpheus:- Cypher! Rat!

Agent:- Youīll have time to think about that in prison.

Morpheus:- All this time....

Another agent enters the room, and says something to the other agent in the ear....

Agent:- It seems that one of yours had a heartattack.

Morpheus:-Who?

The agent gives Morpheus something the other agent gave him when he entered the room....

Morhpeus sees it....

Morpheus:- Why him?

Agent:- He talked too much...

Morpheus:- Ill kill you!

Agent:- Dont worry your time will come too....
Morpheus...

Suddenly we see the building from M1 where they captured Morpheus....

We see the same guards, the metal detector.... and suddenly someone enters the door....

We see a black boot.... then another.... then another.... then another....

One of the guards looks at them....

Guard:- Hold it!
Guard2:- Dont move!

We see the guard approach them and they are all dressed the same as Neo in M1 and with kabuki masks (Japanese masks)....

One of the guards takes the mask of the guys face and we see its NEO!

Guard:- What do you want, tell your friends to take the mask of! now!

Neo?:-Are you sure?

Guard:- You two, the masks now!

The other guys take out the masks and they are Neo too! They look at each other and smile....

Guard:- What a -----

The Neo? thatīs in front of him punches him in the chest and throws him against the elevators doors.

The other guards take out their guns and the other Neo? takes him first and shoots the guard in the head.

The other one takes a Shotgun out of his coat ....

Neo1:- 8th floor....

Neo2:- Well what are we waiting....

Suddenly a guard opens the bathroom door and sees them, and goes for his gun....

One of the Neos shots him with thw shotgun in the chest....

Neo3:- Are there anymore guards?

The other Neo looks up for a second....

Neo1:- No.

Neo3:- Ok lets go.

In the real world.... Inside the goverment building.

Bane/Smith goes to the basement and looks for the fuse box....

Bane/Smith grabs a pipe and hits the box and cuts the power off.

In the interrogation room....

Jason is sitting with his head down against the table and hears an the guards outside talking....

Guard:- The power is off... over.. do you copy?

Suddenly Bane/Smith goes running towards the guard and hits him with a bucket in the head...

Bane/Smith takes his gun an enters the interrogation room....

Bane/Smith:- Hurry lets go!

Jason:- How did you escaped?

Bane:- There is no time lets go!

Bane and Jason go running thru the hallways and we see the guards behind them running....

Guard:- Shoot them!

The guards shoot but Bane shoot to an hits a fire extinguisher accidentally and they blow up....

Bane:- To the parking lot!

Jason:- Why there?

Bane:- Well need a car dont we?

The two of them go to the parking lot....

Bane shoot the glass of the car door....

Jason:- Hurry they are coming!

Bane:- Wait i dont remember.. ok ok .... red.... yellow... what was it ...

Jason:- Get down!

The guards shoot the car....

Bane:- There i got it!

Bane hits the accelerator and they start to look for the exit....

The guards keep shooting. to the car and the car go towards them...

Guard:- Ahhh!

Thecar hits the three guards.

Jason:- Lets go!

they get out of the parking lot....

Jason:- Were the hell are we?

We see a desert....

Bane:- Thank god for GPS lets see....

Bane looks at the screen....

Bane:- Do you feel lucky?

Jason:-What?

Bane:- Well apparently we are in the Vegas desert.

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cool, i like.

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Bane:- Well apparently we are in the Vegas desert.

Bane and Jason drive off and escape....

Jason:- Whe need to go to NY.

Bane:- Why?

Jason:- I have a friend there, i gave him a disc to destroy the mainframe of the Matrix.

Bane:- What makes you think he is still alive?

Jason:- Hope.

The camera slowly zooms out the car and we see the two off them heading for Las Vegas....

Meanwhile in the Merovingian's castle....

We see that Seraph is in a room, and around him there are a lot of guys on the ground.

In the Oracle's apartment....

We see the oracle sitting in the middle of the living room like meditating.... there is an ashtrey to her side and a lit cigarette.

Oracle:- Neo.... where are you....

Suddenly the smoke of the cigarette starts to make weird movements sort of like dancing....

Oracle:- You are alive!

Suddenly the somke of the cigarette goes out and someone knocks on the door....

Oracle:- Yes?

Voice:- Open the door, you have something that belongs to me.

Oracle:- You? no.... no

The oracle goes to a bedroom and starts to look for something in a small woodden box...

Suddenly we hear that someone kicks the door....

Oracle:- Youll never succseed, you are evil!

The door of the room slowly opens and we see... The Merovingian!

Merovingian:- Donīt make this difficult.

We see that she has a key on her hand.

Merovingian:- You think you can escape from me?

Suddenly the Keymaker appears behind the Merovingian, but its different, he is wearing a suit and has a lot of keys hanging from his neck.

Oracle:- No!

Merovingian:- Oh, yes you see, everyone has a price!

Oracle:- Dont help him you don`t have to do this, soon all this will be over.

Merovingian:- Oh, its that so? The only one who its going to end is you.

The Oracle opens the door and there are Merovingian's thugs on the other side.

Oracle:- No!

Merovingian:-Ha ha haha, I must say the Keymaker wasnt cheap, but he is worth it! Hahahah!

Oracle:- Why?

Merovingian:- Why not?

The camera zoom out of the apartment and we hear the Oracle screaming...., then we see the kitchen and we see that black smoke its coming out of the oven.

Meanwhile in the Merovingians castle....


Seraph:- No! I have failed....

We see that he grabs a sword from the wall and sits on the flloor....

Seraph:- My purpouse is over....

Suddenly Merovingian's thugs open the door...

Thug:- To late....

We see Seraph liying on the floor bleeding and around him a lot of guys.

In the police station....

Cop1:- Hey check that guy out.

Cop2:- Hey, Halloween its over!

We see one of the Neos standing outside the police department. The Neo punches the glass door..

Cop1:- Hey!

The two cops go towards the door and suddenly The Neo pulls out a shotgun and shoots the two cops.

Cop3:- Shots fired, officers down, one or more possible attackers, over!

We see a lot of cops going to the front door.

Outside the police station....

We see the other two Neos wearing the masks and they are doing something under a cop car.

Suddenly they run away from the car... and the car explodes.

Cop3:- Shit!

Suddenly all the cop cars start to explode and the explotion breaks the glass doors of the police department.

We see that a cop goes behind the desk and talks to a cop that is next to him....

Cop3:- Who are this guys?

Cop4:- I donīt know

We hear a car coming to full speed to the front of the building, and crashes thru the front door.

Cop3:- What do they want?

Cop4:-Cover me im calling the SWAT team!

Cop3:- Go go go go ! AAAAAhhhh!

The cop shoots at the Neos but doesnt hit them.

Cop:- Im from precint 34 we need help, three psychos drove a car inside the building and started to shoot everywhere!

We see that the other cop is behind the desk hiding...

One of the Neos aims at him with a gun....

Cop3:- Please donīt kill me!

Neo1:- Morpheus!

Cop3:-W-w-What?

Neo1:- Morpheus! the hacker, where is he?

Cop3:- He is in a an special cell in the basement !

The Neo walks away and the other two follow him....

Meanwhile in the real world....

In the car....

Jason:- We wont make it, every cop its going to be looking for us.

Bane:- I have an idea...

We see they arrive in a small airfield.

They pull up and start to sound the car's horn...

A guy comes out of a small house....

Guy:- Yeah, what can i help you?

Bane:- We need to get to NY.

Guy:- Sorry, we only use the planes for skydiving, you know the turists.

Bane:- Well, go get a lot of gas because we are going to NY.

Guy:- Hey, I already told you, we dont make that kind of service, now get out before i call the police!

Bane gets out of the car and aims a gun to the guy's head...

Bane:- You better cooperate!

Guy:- Iīll go get the gas.

Meanwhile in the Matrix....

In the police station....

The three Neos start to look for Morpheus, they go to the cells in the basement. We see that they have the former Zionites insede the cells....

Mouse:- Look its Neo!

Niobe:- What?

Neo1:- Where is Morpheus?

Mouse:- They have him in another cell over there! I knew he would come!

Suddenly the other two Neos take off the masks.

Niobe:- Three? Who are you?

The three Neos start to walk to the other room....

Mouse:- Morpheus!

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no dont tell me u wacked Morpheus

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Mouse:- Morpheus!

In a separate cell we see Mprpheus sitting.... thinking, he touches the wall.... like he cant believe that is not real...

Suddenly we hear gunshots, and steps coming towards the cell door....

Morpheus:- Neo?

The Neos kick the door down....

Morpheus:- What?

Neo1:- Goodbye Morpheus....

In the real world.... in the goverment building....

Federal agent:- Call him, tell him Bane and Jason have scaped.

We see the guards on the parking lot floor....

Guard:- They took a white car....

The federal agent makes a call with his cellphone....

In the mansion....

Arthur /Architect:- Yes.... This is unacceptable!... find them!

He throws the phone against the wall....

Arthur:- Dammit! Ok you want to play? lets play!

We see that the architect goes to a painting.... and behind it there is a safe, he opens it and takes out a cd....

We see that the label on the cd says :- ANGEL OF DEATH

Arthur put the cd and we see on the screen:- START Y/N?

The Architect presses the Y.

In the real world....

We see a small plane....

Jason:- Ok, when we first get there we need to find him, if something happens to me here are the codes you need for the program to work.

Jason gives it to Bane.

Bane:- What will happen with the others?

Jason:- They will wake up....

Bane:- How much time do we have?

Jason:- Less than two days....

In the Mansion....

We see the computer screen that says:- COMPLETED.

We see Arthur makes a call....

In the goverment building....

Scientist:- Yes..Mmmh.... well the only body we have right now is the kid we shot... Mmhhh...that will take at least 5 hours....

Voice on the phone:- Do it!

Scientist:- But, sir there is a chance that his memory is deleted.

In the Mansion

Arthur:- Do as I say we cant let them get to the authoryties!

In the goverment building....

Scientist:- Ok.

Scientist:-Ok take this one and prepare it for reanimation....

We see too guys taking a body bag and putting it on a table.

The scientist opens the bag....

Scientist:- Ok, theres a lot of work ahead gentlemen.

In the Matrix....

Morpheus:- You are not Neo, hat are you?

Neo1:- Im your executioner....

We see the finger of one of the Neos slowly squeezing the trigger....

FREEZE!

We hear gunshots, its the SWAT team, the other two NEOS are shot, and the other one closes the door and locks him self inside with Morpheus...

SWAT member:- We have a hostage situation, over!

We see that Morpheus is looking a the Neo, and he cant believe that its not him.

Morpheus:- Why are you here?

Neo1:- Your porpouse has finished you must be deleted....

Morpheus:- Then why dont you kill me already?

Neo1:- Because my porpouse its not over....

Morpheus:- Your purpouse is to kill me isn`t it?

Neo1:- No, its to bring the chossen one....

Suddenly we hear opera music and we see three images at the same time sort of like 24 Whitelaugh and we see the Architect on his room, Morpheus in the cell and Jason and Bane in the plane....

In the plane....

Guy:- Look i dont ant any trouble i dont care what you did , ill take you to NY, please dont kill me!

Bane:-Relax.

Guy:- Its a little hard ith you pointing that gun in my face!

Bane:- Sorry.

Suddenly we see Jason on the mirror having combultions.

Guy:- It seems that something its wrong with your friend.

Bane:- Jason!

We see that the combultions stop.

Bane cheks if he is alive...

Bane:- He is still alive.

The camera zoom into Jasonīs face and we hear the Oracle`s voice.... Neo....Neo.... your purpouse hasnīt finished yet....

Suddenly Jason opens his eyes and he is on the street.

Guy:- Sir are you ok?

We see thru his eyes and we see people around him... building.. we hear the sounds of cars.... its very blurry...

Cop:-What happened?

Guy:-I donīt know he was like this when I came here.

Cop:- Sir....Sir can you hear me?

Jason:- Where am I?

The camera sloly zooms out and we see that Jason is in the city..

Jason:- What happened, did we crashed, the plane....

Cop:- We seem to have a drunk men here.

Jason:- Wher is Bane, we were on a plane....

The cop tryes to grab Jason by the wrist

Cop:- Ok I need you to come with me to the station.

Jason:- No! I need to free Morpheus and the others!

Cop:- Hey, I told you to get up!

Suddenly Jason grabs the cop wrist and breaks it.

Cop:-Ahhh! Son of a bitch!

Jason looks at his hand closes his fist.

We see that he is back in the Matrix....

Guy:- Hey get that guy, he broke his hand!

Jason runs thru the streets....

Jason: Morpheus!

In the goverment building....

Scientist:- Ok he is responding to the program....

Arthur:- Good...

Scientist:- Ok, lets test it.

In the mansion....

We see one of the monitors, and we see a room....suddenly someon enters the room, Arthur makes a close up and its.... The Kid!

We see that The kid picks up a cellphone that is on the table....


Arthur dials a number....

Arthur:- Inside that envelope youīll see your targets, kill them.

The kid doesnīt say anything and cuts the phone, he opens the envelope and we see a picture of Jason and another of Morpheus.

The kid goes out the room....

Arthur:- And so it begins....

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cool, that was an adventure.

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Arthur:- And so it begins....

In the Matrix....

The kid is walking on the street and stops in front of a building.... the camera looks up and we see the Merovingian's restaurant!

The kid enters thru the hallway and a guy is in the reception

Guy:- Yes?

The guy gives the kid a basd look.

The Kid:- The Merovingian, he is specting me....

Guy:- Name?

When the kid is about to tell the name, one of Merovingianīs thugs appears....

Thug:- Ah you are here, follow me.

Guy:- Excuuuussseee mee? I didnt checked the list!

Thug:- Its right there..

Guy:- Where i dont see anything.

Thug:- Closer.

The guy leans and looks closer..

Suddenly the thug puts the guy`s head thru the little table...

The kid smiles....

Thug:- Letīs go.

Wee see the Merovingian sitting at his table, with Persephone, but he is wearing sunglasses....

Thug:- There he is.

Merovingian:- Well I donīt believe it, Neo`s number 1 fanatic eh?

The kid:- That was a long time ago....

Merovingian:- Yes, enough chit chat, lets get to bussines shall we?

The kid sits..

Persephone:- Bring our guest champagne..

Waiter:- Right away, ah excuse me, any brand in particular sir?

The Kid:- Anything its ok.

Merovingian:- Well finally someone with manners, our last guests didnt even ate.

The merovingian looks at his left and we see the twins smile, and one of them has the white Katana.

Persephone:- Oh dear, take out your sunglasses...

She tries to take them out.

Merovingian:- Donīt touch me woman!.... Iīm sorry, I think I look better with them on.

Persephone:- Ok, I dont know why you make such an scandal, you have beautiffull eyes, honey.

Merovingian:- Well, you want some information I understand, no?

The Kid:- Iīm looking for this two.

The kid shows hime the picures.

Merovingian:- Well,well, well, well... Isnīt this a surprise. Ok letīs talk in private.

As the two walk, we see construction workers repairing the floor, ceiling.

Merovingian:- As you can see I am remodelating, I had an argument recently.

As they pass a room, we see inside two of the Merovingianīs thugs drinking blood from a cup, and next to them we see the blade that Seaph used to end his life.

The Kid:- That blood....

The Merovingian tryes to change the subject.

Merovingian:- Ah, this painting is magnificent dont you think?

The Kid:- Yes....

They get to the Merovingianīs office.

Merovingian:- As you may heard, I sell and buy information, that means when I tell you something, you give me something in exchange...., but I will make an exception this time.

The Kid:- Ok...

Merovingian:- One of them is.... lets see, In the police department downtown... Hahahaha.. oh excuse me.... and the other one is.... mhh.. thats strange.... i dont see him... Just like the last time... i know were he is.

In mobil ave....

Merovingian:- I donīt understand! he should be here!

Trainman:- Nobody came down here except those two.

He points to a couple of guys, the Merovingian goes towards them...

Merovingian:- Excuse me, have you seen someone down here.

Guy:- No.

Merovingian:-hat about you?

Guy2:- I havenīt seen anything.

Merovingian:- Ok, ok think....

The Kid:- Well?

Merovingian:- You go get Morpheus, and when you get back ill tell you, give me time.

The Kid:- Ok....

Trainman: Everybody on the train!

In the real world....

Guy:- Well, we are getting to NY.

Bane:- Ok leave us down here.

Guy:- There are still a couple of miles.

Bane:- When I sayed NY, I didnt meant for you to land on the Empire State!

Guy:- Ok..Ok..

We see the plane going into a field next to the road....


Guy:- You better take your friend to a hospital, he doesnt look good.

Bane:- Will do.

We see Bane going on the middle of the road...

Bane: Help! Help!

A car pull up.

Guy:- Whatīs going on?

Bane:- Help me, my friend, he is going to die, I need to take him to a hospital!

Guy:- Sure..., wait I help you carry him.

They carry Jason on to the backseat. Bane suddenly points the gun to the guy.

Bane:- Leave now!

Guy:- Dont kill me! please!

Bane gets in the car and drives off.

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cool, good rhythm of events.

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Bane gets in the car and drives off....

In the Matrix....

We see the front of the police department surrounded by cops and agents....

Agent 1:- He is inside.

Agent 2:- Yes,the anomaly.

We see the SWAT captain looking at a map behind a SWAT van with his team....

SWAT captain:- Ok, there are at least 20 hostages, there is one attacker identified as Thomas. A Anderson.

SWAT member:- What about the other two?

SWAT captain:- Both killed, ok we have entry points here, here, here, here and here, we wait untill dark to make a move.

Cop:- Ok, people, moeve the negotiatior is here!

Negotiatior:- What`s the situation?

Cop:- 20 or more hostages, one attacker.

Negotiatior:- Ok, tell the captain weīll take the office building across the street.

Cop:- Im on it.

Insidethe building we see the cops installing a hearing device to tap the phones, we see a guy with binoculars looking thru the window....

Guy:- Um, sir..?

Agent:- Yes?

Guy:- Wasnīt a SWAT team in the basement?

Agent:-Yes, all dead....

Guy:- How did you know that?

Agent:-Experience....

Guy:- Call the snipers, the attacker is in the entrance with the hostage!

Cop:- Send two units of snipers to the roof!

SWAT member:- Roger that, go go go !

We see the snipers on the roof aiming at one of the Neo's....

Agent:- Donīt shoot until he takes his weapon away from Morphues.

SWAT sniper:- Roger that.

Suddenly we see the sky turning grey and the clouds starting to move....

Cop1:-Thatīs strange....

We see the camera at full speed flying thru the clouds.

Suddenly something falls from the sky and hits one of the Neos and buries it into the wall.


Cop:- Shit, what a hell was that?

The camera slowly zooms into the hole and we see something moving...

We see Morpheus face looking shocked....


Suddenly the camera shows black boots.... the camera goes up and we see.... Trinity!

Morpheus:- Trinity?

She is dreesed the same as always....

One of the agents looks at her and goes runnig towards her....

We see thru Trinity`s eyes and wee see the agent in a yellow code....

Now we see in slow motion that he is taking his gun....

Trinity doesnīt move....

The agent puts his gun against her forehead, and she suddenly takes her glasses off, and the agent starts to point his own gun against himself....

Trinity looks at him and says: Shoot!

Agent:- Ahhhhh,, noooo! BANG!

We start to hear some kind of church choir and a beam of light, points to Trinity.

The cops start to point their guns to the floor and start to shoot...

Trinity:- Letīs go there is no time....

Morpheus gets up...

The two of them go to a cop car and drive off, while the cops keep shooting to the floor..

In the car:- What a hell was that back there?

Trinity:- Did you liked that trick?

Morpheus:- Yes but how?

Trinity:- Neo.

Morpheus:- Neo is dead.

Trinity:-No, he is still alive.

Morpheus:- I saw him die.

Trinity:- We need to get to the power plant north.

Morpheus:- Why?

Trinity:- I donīt know yet, Neo will tell us when we get there.

We see the car driving off....

In the real world....

In the car....

Bane:- Whatīs happening?

Bane looks at Jason looking like in a coma.

A cellphone rings....

Bane picks it up....

Bane:- Hello?

In an udentified plane....

Federal Agent:- It him....

Bane:- Shit!

Bane looks up, and he looks at the plane...

Bane:- Shit shit shit shit!

In the plane....

Federal Agent:- Thatīs the car, send your men.

We see guys dressed in black, like skydivers..

Guy:- Go go go!

The guys start to descend to the car....

They open their parachutes....

They land on the car, and the parachute covers the car.

Bane:- Shit!

Guy:- You have the right to remain------ CRASHH!

We see the car flipped over and the guys lying on the road.

The people starts to get out of the car.

Woman:- Oh my god, are you ok?

The people starts to get them out of the car....


Bane:- My frien in the back seat is uncouncious, please help me.

Guy:- What happened?, are you ok?

One of the guys starts to get up and pulls a silenced gun.

Woman:-He has a gun!

In the plane....

Federal Agent:-Dammit!

He aims it at Jason.

But suddenly Bane covers him and takes the bullet.

Woman:- Call the police!

Bane:- Please, you have to make it, Neo....

Bane dies....

Skydiver:- Back off, police!, This men are extremely dangerous, we have the situation under control!

In the plane....

Federal Agent:- Ok there they are, hurry up!

Skydiver:- Go back to your cars, thank you!

The people starts to go back to their cars....

The plane land on the side of the road....

The other skydivers start to get up..

Federal Agent:- Hurry up, leave the other!

They take Jason into the plane and escape..

In the plane....

Federal Agent:- Ok, what wrong with him?

Skydiver:- Probably he hit his head in the crash.

Federal Agent:- Ok, pilot take us back to base.

The plane turns around....

We see several images at a time: Trinity in the car with Morpheus, Bane lying on the road in a puddle of blood, Jason inside the plane and The Kid in a room looking at Morpheuīs picture....

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nice i like it, but i have to read it again...didn't get it good the first time around.

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We see several images at a time: Trinity in the car with Morpheus, Bane lying on the road in a puddle of blood, Jason inside the plane and The Kid in a room looking at Morpheuīs picture....

In the Matrix....

The Kid is in a room looking at Morpheuīs picture....

He gets up, puts a coat on and exits the room....


In the car....

Trinity:- Morpheus, the only way to get on time is----

Morpheus:- Yes I know.... the freeway.

In the freeway....


Cop:- All units, stand by!

We see a lot of cop cars waiting for something....

Trinity drives to the freeway....

Trinity:- What? How did they know?

Trinity sees the cop cars and starts to reverse.

Morpheus:- We need an exit.

Suddenly a cop car comes from nowhere and hits the car from behind, and a lot of cop cars appear behind it....

Morpheus:-It,s a trap!

Suddenly a black limo appears.... we see The Merovingian getting out, and the Keymaker, and the Twins...

Trinity:- Good to see you Merv.

Merovingian:- Same here, oh and I see you are with Morpheus.

Morpheus looks at the Keymaker....

Morpheus:- Why are you helping him?

Keymaker:- My purpouse is to protect the most important door.

Trinity: -The source....

Merovingian:- As entertaining is to talk to you, I have a lot of things to do.... Kill them!

One of the twins goes towards the car with the white katana..

Suddenly something lands on the freeway faster than the sound!

We see Neo grabing the sword with one hand and we see that he doesnt even bleeds.

Twin1:-This cuts thru everything, the Architect----

Twin2:- Created it.

Neo brakes the sword....

Merovingian:- You again?.... this is the last time we do this.

Neo:- I know.

Merovingian:- KILL HIM!

Cop:- Shoot!

Suddenly Merovingianīs thugs appear in dirtbikes, they are at least 100.

Merovingian:- Enjoy the show....

The twins and the keymaker smile....

Suddenly Morpheus and Trinity get out of the car.

Neo:- Run Morpheus, ill fight them.

Morpheus:- No, we fight this together, the three of us!

Trinity:- If I die today it will be fighting.

Neo goes towards Trinity... and kisses her..

Neo:- My love is real.

Trinity drops a tear.

Merovingian:- OOOOO, isnīt this a touching moment, right before you die.

For the first time we see that Neo is scared.

Neo:- Something is different, this guys are stronger, but the only way is if he....

Merovingian:- You guessed, you are bright.

He takes off his sunglasses but we dont see his face, because the camera is behind him.

Neo:- All cookies need....

Merovingian:- Doe...

Neo:- You wont get out of here alive.

Merovingian:- No? Weīll see that. KILL THEM!

Neo suddenly looks at the white Katana, and the Katana repairs itself, the pieces go into place again.

The Merovingian looks surpised.

Neo grabs the sword and gives it to Morpheus.

Neo:- Give me your hands...


The three of them put one hand to the center one on top of the other.


Suddenly a light illuminates them and a blinding light comes from the center, so bright we cant see them, we see white.

When the light fades we see that they are dressed in white, we see that Morpheus has two white Katanas, Trinity has a silver and white gun, and Neo is dressed in white.

The Merovingian raiders go towards the three at full speed.

And so the battle begins....

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epic indeed. i like the way the White Katana repaired itself and then they all change into perfect form or something of that nature. cool bro. Thumbup

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You could call it perfect form, its the power of the holly three.

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And so the battle begins...

Neo:- Ok split!

The three go separate ways....

We see Trinity running and the Raiders catching up....

Suddenly we see one of Merovingian's thugs in a car going at her....

Trinity shoots the thug and the car losses control and hits another car....

Thug:- You are going to die AAAAaa!

Trinity suddenly changes direction and runs towards a truck...

Thug:- There is no way out!

Trinity goes towards a truck with cars on top and shoots a chain.... the cars start to fall, and hit a lot of the raiders.

We see Morpheus waiting with the sword....

The Raiders go towards him.... and suddenly he starts to run towards the guys too....

Morpheus starts to cut the guys into piecesand the bikes go flying off towards the other cars....

Suddenly one of the raiders goes into a truck and starts to go towards Morpheus!

Morpheus grabs a dirtbike and goes towards the truck!.

Merovingian:- What are you doing Morpheus?

Morpheus jumps off the dirt bike and takes out the Katana and cuts one of the truckīs wheel and the thug loosses control and flips over.

We see Neo standing waiting for the Raiders, and at the last moment he puts his hand and the Raiders hit like an invisible shield.... The dirtbikes go flying off in the air, pieces of steel, the guys flying in the air.

Merovingian:- You two, kill him!

The Twins go towards Neo, and Suddenly we see Morpheus....

Morpheus:- Neo!

Morpheus throws the Katana to Neo.... but suddenly one of the twins pulls out a gun and shoots the Katana away.

Neo starts to fight with the twins... one of the twins throws a punch and Neo blocks it and kicks him in the chest and throws hima against a car, but the twin goes into ghost form and goes right thru the car....

The other twin takes a machine gun and starts to shoot at Neo but the bullets bounce off him (Yes, he is doing his Superman thing Whitelaugh).

Neo punches the air apparently and a second later the twinīs glasses brake and he is thrown against a car, and this time he hits the car.

The few of the Raiders that are left go towards Neo, even the ones that are fighting Trinity and Morpheus.

Neo does that M1 thing (The taunt he does when he is fighting), and some of the Raiders stop.

Merovingian:- What are you doing attack him!

The Raiders donīt move.... Suddenly one of the bikes starts to move towards Neo, the thug tryies to stop it.

Thug:- What is going on?

Suddenly all the dirtbikes start to go towards Neo.... and then the thugs!

Thug:- What is this?

Suddenly Neo starts to suck them into a white light that comes from his chest and the thugs dissapear inside Neo.

We see Trinity and Morpheus surprised.

Then we see a pile of dirtbikes and Neo standing there.

In Mobil Ave....

We see the trainman coming out of the train.

We see 25 thugs on the station on the floor.

Trainman:- What?

In the freeway....

The Merovingian goes into the limo and the twins are inside.

Merovingian:- What do you think you are doing?, go out there and kill him!

The twing go towards Neo running and suddenly Morpheus appears on a dirt bike with his white Katana and jumps off and the dirtbike goes towards them, buth they go into ghost form... the two of them smile, but that was a distraction, suddenly we see Morpheus in the air and he comes down and cuts them... the twins go into ghost form again, but after a few seconds they start to shake and they start to crack and they explode like Agents.

The three of them start to go towards the Merovingianīs limo, but suddenly he kicks the door and throws it against Trinity.... The door hits the invisible shield around Neo and doesnīt hit them...

The Merovingian comes out of the limo.

Merovingian:- This is going to end now!

Suddenly the camera zoom into Marovingianīs sunglasses and we see they start to melt, and we see a golden light that slowly turns into red.

The Merovingian goes running towards Neo.... an hits him!.... Neo goes crashing into a building in the city.

The Merovingian grabs Morpheus by the neck and starts to burn him....

Morpheus:- Aaaaaahhhrgggg!

Trinity:- Morpheus!

She shoots at the Merovingian but nothing happens...

The Merovingian lets go Morpheus and punches Trinity into the ground....

After that he flyies to the city where its Neo....

In the city....

We see Neo in the middle of the street and the people looking at the sky.

The Merovingian comes flying and Neo stands his ground.

The two of them hit each other, Neo stops him and the energy wave brakes the windows of the buildings and cars.

The people starts to run....

Neo throws the Merovingian against a building... but he comes back and lifts a car! He throws a car at Neo, but Neo blocks it and the car flyies against a store.

The Merovingian starts to throw more cars at Neo....

Neo goes flying towards him and hits him..

In mid-air Neo punches the crap out of The Merovingian and the Merovingian falls into the middle of an avenue.

He leaves a smoking crater...

As Neo walks towards the crater.... The Kid appears in a car going towards Neo.

Neo:- You?

The Kid crashes the car against Neo and nothing happens, The Kid goes flying thru the windshield towards Neo and punches him....

Neo gets up and we see blood coming out of his nose....

Neo looks at his hand with blood and then looks at the kid.

Who are you?

The Kid:- Im your biggest fan HAhahahah!

The Kid goes running towards Neo and Neo stops all his punches.... but one of them hits him....

Neo goes into a car and blood is coming out of his mouth...

The Kid goes towards him again but a car hits him!

Its Morpheus and Trinity!

Trinity:- Bastard!

The Kid:- Punches thru the hood of the car and rips out the engine!

He jumps off and goes towards Neo again....

In the real world....

Federal Agent:- ok give me the gun.

Guy:- Sir, I think first we should-BANG BANG BANG!

Guy:-He shot Jason in the head!

Pilot:- Hey, he sayed to bring him alive!

The federal agent shoots the pilot and the guy, and then shoots himself...

We see the plane crashing into the ground..

In the Matrix....

Neo dies before the Kid hits him.

The Kid:- Get up! Get up!

In an apartment in NY....

We see Bane with a guy and a laptop..

Guy:- Ok, the first code.

Bane:- 03948572832223323....

Suddenly someone knock on the door.

Guy:- Shit they found us! take the computer and run!

Bane escapes thru the fire exit....

He goes into a cyber cafe....

In the Matrix....


Morpheus:- There is no time, go go!

Trinity goes into a car and drives off....

Morpheus:- You are here to kill me?

The Kid:- Yes...

Morpheus:- Go ahead.

The kid takes out a gun but doesn`t shoot....

In the goverment building....

Scientist:- Mhhh...thatīs strange...

We see The Kid on a table....

In the Matrix....

Morpheus doesnīt say anything....

The Kid suddenly collapses into the ground....

In the goverment building....

The kid suddenly wakes up!

Scientist:- Shit.... Alarm!

The kid brakes the scientistīs neck.... and runs off....

In the Mansion....

Arthur:- What?... This cant be... I had callculated everything.... this must be a mistake.

In the goverment building....

We see the kid looking for something in a file....

The Kid:- So you did this to me?

The camera zooms and we see a picture of the Architect....

The Kid:-Cedar grove 1149....

In the Mansion....

Arthur dials a number but no one answers..

Arthur:- Answer the damn phone!

On the road....


We see the plane crashed.... and we hear a cellphone ringing.

The camera goes thru the plane and we see a hand that presses a button.... then slowly put the cellphone onto his ear.... and we see its Jason!

Jason:- Hello?

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nice cant wait to hear the ending.

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Jason:- Hello?

In the mansion....

Arthur:- Neo...

On the road....

Jason:- Who are you?

Arthur:- Im your creator....

Jason:- Bullshit! The Matrix is not real!

Jason cuts the phone and heads to a gas station nearby....

As he walks towards the gas station, he starts to remember what happened on the plane....

He sees the Federal Agent shooting the two guys....

What is this?

Suddenly we see a flashback..

BANG, BANG, BANG!
Pilot:- He shot him in the head!

We see the other guys pulling their guns....

Jason:- Why?

He enters the gas station.

Tling , tling ! (bell noise)

Old guy:- What on Earth happened to you kid?

Jason:- Oh, this.. I hit my head, sould you tell me where the bathroom is?

The old guy points to a bathroom...

Jason turns the water on, and cleans the blood from his forehead, and for his surprise, there is nothing there.

Jason leans towards the mirror and sees that he doesnt even has a scratch.

He starts to look at his arms, checking for scars, but nothing, there is blood but no scars.

We see Jason walking towards the city....

As he walks, he starts to remember his old "life" in the matrix and falls to the ground....

We see a cop car....

Jason opens his eyes and he is in the backseat of the cop car....

Cop:- Calm down, we are going to take you to the hospital.

Jason:- Iīm ok, let me out!

Cop:- Calm down, or weīll take you to the station!

In a taxi....

We see The Kid, he has a file, we see its a picture of Arthur.

In the Matrix....

Trinity arrives to the powerplant.

Trinity:- Ok, what now?

In the real world....

Jason closes his eyes....

In the Matrix....

We hear Neoīs voice.... Trinity.... Trinity.

Trinity:- Where are you?

Neo:- Everywhere.... go to the third room to you left and open the first door....

Trinty:- Ok.

Trinity goes inside the plant....

After a moment we see security guards on the floor, and Trinity inside a room with generators....

Trinity:- Iīm here.

Neo:- Now.... the second switch, turn it off....

Trinity turns it off and we see that on an another plant an alarm sounds....

Guard:- We have a problem with sector 101.

Neo:- Get out of there....

Trinity:- Will I ever see you again?

Neo:- Yes....

In the real world....

We see Bane entering the codes....

Bane:- Where ever you are Jason.... good luck.

Bane presses enter and the lights go out.... suddenly the entire city blacks out....

We see that the radio in the cop car doesnt work.

Cop:- Crap!

In the mansion....

We see that the monitors turn off., the light....everything.

Arthur:- What?

He picks up the phone but is dead....

Suddenly we hear a noise of glass breaking....

We see that Arthur goes to a desk and grabs a gun....

Wife:- Arthur, can you hear me., dont call the police!

Arthur:- Where are you?

Wife:- Iīm scared!

Arthur starts to walk towards the dining room....

Arthur:- Donīt be so dramatic honey itīs only a-----

Suddenly we see The Kid with Arthurīs wife, and he is pointing a gun to her head.

Wife:- Arthur!

Arthur:- Please, what do you want ?

The Kid:- My life back!

Arthur:- Iīm not in charge, I dont make the orders, the one you want is Jason Anderson, he created it.

The Kid:- Bullshit, I have your file right here!

The Kid throws the file on to the table...

Arthur:- Ok, you donīt understand....

The Kid:- Oh, I understand! You took away my life!

Arthur:- I had no choice!

The Kid:- What?

Arthur:- Let me explain, they sayed they kill my son if i didnt cooperated!

The Kid:- Is this true?

Wife:- Arthur, I thought he was kidnapped.

Arthur:- He was....

In the police station....

Cop:- Take a look at that guy, it has been with his eyes closed since we arrived.

Cop2:- Hey! What are you meditating?

In the Matrix....

We see Morpheus and Trinity in the apartment of M1 (The one with red chairs).

Morpheus:- Now what?

Trinity:- We wait.

Suddenly the phone rings....

Morpheus picks up....

Morpheus:- Hello?

Neo:- We did it.

Morpheus:- Neo?

Neo:- In a few moment all this will be over.... you will be FREE....

Morpheus:- Neo....Neo?

Trinity:-What did he sayed?

Morpheus:- He sayed we are going to be free, that this will end in a few moments....

In the police department....

Cop:- Keep calm, is a black out!

In the cyber cafe....

We see the monitor and it says.... 89 % COMPLETED.

In the police department....

Cop:- Go check, on the meditating guy....

Cop2:- Ok.

The cop walks toward the room... opens the door and Jason isn`t there!

Cop2:- What a-----

We see on the chair Jasonīs clothes.

Cop2:- Son of a bitch!

Cop:- What happened?

Cop2 :- He escaped!

In the Mansion....

Suddenly we hear a door opening slowly... its Jason dressed as a cop!

Arthur:- Jason!

The Kid:- What do you want?

Jason:- The same as you... my life back.... but I realized that the Matrix was a part of me, and I cant erase that.

Arthur:-Exactly!

The Kid:- Shut up! You are going to die!

The Kid shoots Arthur!

Wife:- No!

Jason leans to talk to Arthur.

Arthur:- Go to the safe.... there is the thruth....

Arthur dies....

The Kid escapes....

Jason goes to the room, and the safe is open....

He grabs some documents....

Jason:- What?

In the goverment building....

The power if off there too....

Suddenly we see Morpheus opening his eyes.... we see everybody opening their eyes!

In the mansion....

There is an envelope that says Jason....

Jason opens is and inside there is a letter....


LETTER TO JASON:

DEAR JASON, IF YOU ARE READING THIS IT MEANS IīM IM PRISON OR DEAD, IN ANY CASE, I WANT TO TELL YOU THAT I HAD NO OTHER CHOICE, THEY FORCED ME TO UPGRADE THE MATRIX PROGRAM, I NEVER LIKED IT, IN FACT ONE OF THE SUBJECTS KNOWN AS BANE WAS WORKING FOR ME, YOU SEE IN THE ROOM YOU ARE NOW THERE ARE CAMERAS WATCHING YOU, THE GOVERMENT INSATLLED THEM, AND I PRETENDED NOT TO NOTTICE, ANY WAY, I INSERTED A PROGRAM INSIDE BANEīS BRAIN TO HELP YOU DESTROY THIS PROGRAM, I COULDNīT TAKE IT ANYMORE, IM SORRY I HOPE YOU FORGIVE ME.... THERE IS ANOTHER ENVELOPE WITH IMPORTANT DOCUMENTS FOR YOU, THERE IS THE TRUTH, I HOPE YOU FORGIVE ME...

GOOD BYE.... SON

ARTHUR.

Suddenly Jason grabs the other envelope and he finds out that....

Jason:- Iīm his son?

TWO MONTHS LATER....

Tv:- After nearly two months of discovering a secret building in the dessert, we have exclusive interviews with the victims of the experiment called PROJECT MATRIX.

Reporter:- So what was it like?

We see Trinity in a house with her family.

Trinity:- It was like... this, there is no difference.

We start to see the reporter interviewing everyone...

Reporter:- When did you started to suspect that it was not reality?

We see Tank in a press conference....

Tank:- When I woke up....

Suddenly we see a white house....orange leaves covering the grass.... inside we hear kids running and we see someone cooking.... its Trinity!

Suddenly we see her hip, and a pair of hands appear from behind.

Trinity:- You scared me.

The camera slowly goes up and we see....Jason!

We hear a kidīs voice....

Voice:- Dad!, look at this!

Jason goes towards a computer and looks at a drawing his son made.

Jason: Itīs beautifull, what do you say we go play outside.

Bobby:- Yeah!

Call your sister...

Bobby:- Dana!

Suddenly we see a little girl coming down the stairs...

The three go and play outside....

Trinity is watching them thru the kitchenīs window, adn suddenly someone rings the doorbell.

Trinity opens the door....

Its Morpheus!

What are you doing here so early ? Ill set another plate...

Suddenly we see that the whole shipīs crew its there too... they all come i.... as they come in they say hi to the kids, to Jason... and finally we see Bane coming thru the door.

Jason:- Letīs eat.

We see all eating on the table.... and suddenly Jason looks at a newspaper...

LOST COMMUNICATION TYCOON APPEARS.

38 YEARS OLD MARVIN WILLIAMS APPEARED AFTER BEING LOST FIVE MONTHS, HE WAS PART OF "THE MATRIX PROJECT", TONIGHT A WELCOME PARTY IN NEW YORK WILL BE....

Morpheus looks at the newspaper.... who would tohugh huh?

Suddenly someone rings the doorbell.

Jason opens the door and its Marvin (The Merovingian)!

Marvin:- I was in the neighbourhood, is there place for one more?

Jason:- Sure.

Jason:- I almost forgott I have the presentation for the new building.

Jason goes to a room and turns the computer on....

Suddenly the screen goes black.... and we see green letters.

Neo.... wake up....

Neo presses CTRL +Alt +Supr, but nothing happens.

The Matrix has you....

Suddenly we see a message...

HAPPY THANKS GIVING FROM MOUSE!

Jason smiles....

We see Mouse in some sort of award show.

I HOPE YOU CAN COME TO THE PREMIERE OF MY MOVIE.

We see apicture of Mouse with the lady in red.

Jason goes back to the table....

Tv reporter:- Weīll be back after this messages with our story "THE PROJECT MATRIX" after this messages.

The tv turns off....

EVERY BEGINNING HAS AN END....


THE END.

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