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What I would like to see in Matrix 4 (and how I would rewrite Matrix 3)

 

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After the matrix is restarted, and the Oracle says to the architect: Weīll see him again. The Architect says: I know.
The screen goes black, and the code starts to fall but stoping and going up and down, like glitching.

Anderson, (NEO) sleeping in front of his computer. The camera zooms to the computer screen, and the audience expects to be some letters like in M1, but no, nothing happens, someone knocks the door. Its the guy from M1 with his friends, Anderson opens a Bible and inside there is money. He gives it to the guy.
Anderson: Here it is, you have the disc?

The guy: Yes, you have the money.

Anderson: Here.

The guy: Here you go if anyone catches you with this-...
Anderson: I know, bye

the guy: i think you should come with us

Anderson: no thanks , i have to finish a program. The camera zooms to the table where its a notebook with numbers and equations, and we see : The Matrix project.
Jason Anderson: Developer.

(Freeman looks at Djour) Nice tattoo what does it mean

Djour: Its the all seeing eye. Im thinking of tattoing me a bunny.
Anderson: Smiles.

he goes to the bed trying to sleep and he hears the door again.
Anderson: Its all there i counted it!

Someone keep knocking the door

Anderson: Shit (opens the door).

Woman dreesed in red: Hi im your neighbor from 107, im having a problem with my PC, could you help me?

Freeman: Umm... sure ill just go get my-----

When he turns and looks back at her its an agent!

Anderson: SHIT!

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is this set in the past or not?

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No, it s after everything started back again.

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oh ok, keep going

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interesting would like to read more if you have it.

"Too know the truth, you must first look past the lie."
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After Andesron sees the agent a voice says: Freeze it!
and a door to his left opens.... :

Hello Mr.Anderson, Im Morpheus.

Anderson: - What is this ? Am i dreaming?

Morpheus: - You could say that (smiles).

Anderson: - What`s happenning?

Morpheus: -You are aware we must hurry.

Anderson: - What do you mean Hurry?

Morpheus: - Look down the hall.

Anderson looks and there are 3 agents and they look at him.

Morpheus: - Run!

Anderson: - no

Morpheus: - What? they are agents, run !

Anderson: - No i wont .

The agents shoot at Anderson but nothing happens.

Agent 1 : What? This cant be.

Agent 2 : I cant.

Agent 3: Understand this.

Agent : Looks at the gun, takes out the clip and its empty.

Agent 3 : Empty?

Morpheus looks at anderson just standing there.

Morpheus: This cant happen, no something is wrong.

Inside the Icarus (New name for ship but the same)

Operator (Tank): Hey look at this, the code....

Everybody looks at the monitors surprised.

The agents, look at them their code is changing!

Back in the matrix....

Anderson: Well fellas any last words.

Agent 1: You !

Agent 2: Are!

Agent 3 : Only human! Arrrggghhhh!

Anderson: Yes I am.

Morpheus looks at him and has no words.

And the 3 agents change into cops.

Cop 1: Stop him.

The 3 cops pull out their guns and approach towards him slowly....

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The cops approach to him slowly....

Cop 1: - Put your hands where i can see them

Anderson: -Sure officer.

Morpheus: - What are you doing, are you SURE about this?

Anderson: - Yes (smiles).

Cop 2 its aiming at Andersonīs head, Cop 1 is behind Anderson and Cop 3 is aiming at Morpheus.

Cop 1 :- Ok move !

Anderson: - Make me

Cop 2 : - What? You piece of.... (goes for the tazzer gun)

Anderson kicks him in the face doing a spinkick, Cop 3 starts to shoot at him

Anderson lands behind Cop 1 and Cop 3 accidentally shoots him.

Anderson runs towards Cop 3 and with his right leg kicks his gun and then his face.

Morpheus says: Tank, what just happened here

(In the Icarus) Everybosy is looking at the monitors speechless.

Tank: - Dont know... Morpheus.

(Matrix)

Anderson: - This handcuffs are really bodering me. (he bends them without moving)

Morpheus how can you do that.

Anderson: Easy, there are no handcuffs.

Morpheus: Ok tank get us out.

Tank: Sure.

(In the Icarus)

Morpheus: - Where is mouse?

Mouse: - im here Morpheus whatīs up?

Morpheus: - When you designed the training program, you didnt said that the agents can change into cops.

Mouse: -They cant.

Morpheus:- How did you did that Neo?

Neo: -I dont know i cant describe it its like im part of them of everything.

Morpheus: -Nobody ever did that before, what you did there was impossible.

Neo:- No, it isnt, i only rewrited their codes.

Morpheus: - This cant be, i d-donīt unders....

Neo: - I have to tell you something, this might sound shocking you may not understand this but, this is not the real world either.

Morpheus:- .... (has no words).

Neo:- I know it sounds impossible, but i just know it.

Morpheus: -What do you mean?

Neo: - I mean right now as we speak, somewere our bodies are in a coma state with an Artificial Intelligence Program.

Morpheus:- How do you know all this?

Neo:- I designed it.

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Forgive me but this is sounding pretty confusing. Is this action taking place in the Matrix or in a training program or in the real world?

I'm sorry, I really don't understand what's happening here... Heh.

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i think i get it

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This takes place in a training program, then takes place in the Icarus.

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Neo:- I designed it.

Morpheus: - What are you talking about, THIS is the real world.

Neo:- Think about it you said it yourself, If you can feel it, touch it, smell it, what is the difference.

Morpheus:- Oh my god... what i have feared all these years.

Neo:- Yes, we are not free.

Morpheus: - No,no.... This is more than i ever imagined.

Neo:- But, wait.... there is a way out.

Morpheus:- So are you saying that right now as we speak we are somewhere "sleeping"?

Neo:- Yes, but we can be free, it will not be easy.

Morpheus: - Wait, so this war with the machines that has been going on for years....

Neo: - Its not true, there are no machines, everything you thing you know its not true, there is no war going on for years, it hasnt even past 2 years.

Morpheus: - What?

Neo:- Its the year 2000, it has only past one year since we where kidnapped.

Morpheus:- But, this cant be....

Neo:- Let me explain you, did you ever had a dream where in your mind you didnt know how much time you were dreaming, and when you wake up, it has only past 1 minute?

Morpheus:- Yes.

Neo:-The program i designed in the year 1998 was stolen, it wasnt even approve, they.... some how upgrade it, and every minute you are sleeping, feels like a year.

Morpheus: - So, what it seems a lifetime, actually are minutes, hours....

Neo:-Yes, but right now time is something we dont have, we must go to the source.

Morpheus:- The machine city?

Neo:- No, the REAL source.

Morpheus:- Where is it?

Neo:- In the program you know as The Matrix.

Morpheus:- And then...

Neo:- And then we find the Merovingian.

Morpheus:- He wont help us.

Neo: - Trust me he will.

Neo:- Then we must bring him to Zion, the second program.

Morpheus:- If Zion is a program, are the people there programs?

Neo:- No, they are all humans.

Morpheus:- This is too big, i mean there no chance to survive.

Neo:- You have to have hope.

Morpheus:- (Smiles).

(In the cave)

Morpheus:- Yes what i told you is true, we are not free, this is not the real world!

Trinity:- Why?.... (a tear drops on the floor).

Morpheus:- But there is hope, this is a task too big for one person, or 100 persons, we must ALL fight this war in The Matrix!

Trinity:- Morpheus what are you saying?

Morpheus:- Im saying we all jack ikn the Matrix at the same time and end this for ever!

(Everyone in the cave starts to jump and to dance)

Morpheus: - This will be the final war!

(In Zion )

Mouse: Ok Morpheus, first we need a lot of cables, then we need to amplify the signal and, thats it.

Morpheus:- Ok, start building.

(Neo is standing on a Mechanichal suit, one of those robots)

Neo:- Ok listen up, when you first jack in, you will go thru a training program, i will teach you all i know, and i hope you learn fast because we dont have time!

(The personality of Neo has changed, he is in a way more human)

Some time passes.... we see a montage of Mouse working, people finding cables that can be used, we see Cypher helping, everyone is doing something.

Mouse: Ok I think we are ready Morpheus.

Morpheus: Ok we need 100 people.

(We see a lot of people lying on the floor)

Neo:- Ok Tank, load us up.

(Wee see 100 people jacking at the same time)

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We see another montage with people training, we see Morpheus in a yard with 50 people training, teaching them kung- fu, like in Enter the Dragon, we see trinity teaching them how to shoot, and Neo sitting with people around, we see him teaching them how to "bend" the spoon.

Meanwhile in the Merovingian's restaurant....

The camera flies thru the kitchen, we see a chef decorating the same cake as in M3, the Twins smoking, Persephone, and finally The Merovingian in the bathroom with a girl.

The elevator doors open and we see Seraph, he goes down the hall and a recepcionist is there....

Recepcionist: -Ah.. you arrived The Merovingian has been expecting you, follow me.

As Seraph enters the restaurant, we see the twins saying something to one of Merovingian`s thugs.

We see a bathroom door and the Merovingian steps out...

Seraph:- You!, You wont succed with your plans.

Merovingian:- Oh no, who is going to stop me mmm? You?, let me remind you that you are now in my house, your power is not the same here.

Seraph: - I will kill you, and you cant stop me.

Merovingian: - Ok, lets play.

Suddenly a door opens and we see the two Guys from M3 (one of them is killed by persephone with a silver bullet).

Merovingian: -If you defeat them, you can kill me.

The two thugs go runnig towards Seraph, one throws a kick and Seraph dodges it, the other one does the same and seraph grabs his leg and makes him spin by turning the leg, then the other one throws a punch at him, he grabs his arm and brakes it, the other one is standing up and Seraph grab him by the neck with both legs (still grabing the other one broken arm), put his arm around his neck and breakes it, and the other guy neck at the same time.

Merovingian :- (Laughs).

Seraph:- Now it your turn to die.

Merovingian:- Oh no so fast, you wont kill them that easy.

The thugs are getting up and their back like new again.

Merovingian:- Ha ha ha ha, unless you have ninja stars made of silver , will be here a long time.

Seraph:- (Silver...) (looks at a table). Grabs a kinfe and throws it at one of them in his eye.

Thug 1 : My eye, arrrghhhh!

Seraph grabs more knives from the tables, the people starts to run outside.

The thugs pull out guns ang go running towards him shooting, and Seraph, dodges them jumping backwards and at the same time throws a plate to one of them and he drops his gun, Seraph throws a knife to his head and kills him.

Thug 2 : Brother! no! AAArr goes running towards Seraph and throws his gun.

Thug 2:- Ill kill you with my own hands.

Seraph:- I wont. he throws 5 knives one land on his neck, one on his head , one on his eye, one on his shoulder, and the other misses.

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After Seraph fights against the two thugs, The Merovingian runs to a door, goes thru it and closes it, Seraph goes after him and when he opens the door, we see the the nightclub.

Meanwhile.... In a park in the park where M3 ends.

The Oracle is sitting in a bench and we see Neo walking towards her.

Oracle: - Neo welcome back, come sit.

Neo:- Theres No time , we must hurry and go to Zion.

Oracle:- Oh I havent been there in years, but why?

Neo:- You dont know? (Surprised)

Oracle:- I dont know i cant see what will happen, im trying but its to much, a war.... but not between machines.

Neo:- Go to the nearest door, hurry!

Oracle:- I hope to see you again.

(In the Icarus)

Tank:- Morpheus look at this, the code, hes back....

Morpheus:- Run Neo.

(In the park).

Neo:- Welcome back Smith. I see you are plugged again.

Smith:- Arent we all.

Smith sits on the bench. Neo sits too.

Smith:- Why Mr.Ander-- Neo?

Neo:-Why what?

Smith:- Why do you keep fighting the system.?

Neo: -Because humans should be free.

Smith:- I want to be free but i cant Neo, The reason its you it has always been you.

Neo:- Why?

Smith:- Because when they created both programs, this one and Zion, they needed someone to keep their system safe without failures.

Neo:- Why do you do it then?

Smith:- I dont have a choice, if i refuse to do it i will be deleted. So will you.

Neo:- What? Im human.

Smith:-You are about as human as a blender.

Neo:- I dont believe it!

Smith:- Of course you think you are human, you where designed to resemble to your human creator Jason Anderson.

Neo:- So im a program.

Smith:- Yes designed to reser the Matrix in case of a human rebelion, but this time something is different, somehow you seem to be more aware of this "reality" sort of speak.

Neo:- This time i wont reset the matrix.

Smith:- Ha ha you dont have a choice, its your pourpuse.What are you going to do instead of reseting it Neo?

Neo: I will DESTROY it.

(In the Icarus)

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(in the Icarus)

Tank:-Ok Morpheus we are ready to go in.

Morpheus:- Wish us good luck.

Tank:- Youll need it.

Tank press a button and the 100 people jacks in.

(In the Matrix)

They all appear in a park.

Morpheus stands on a bench and talks to the crowd.

Morpheus:-This day its the most important of our lives, after this day we will be free.

We see TV cameras, and TV trucks pulling up to the park.

Reporter:-We are here in an unusal manifestation. Here we talk with one of the responsables.

Reporter:-Whats your name and what is this all about?

Morpheus:- My name is Morpheus, and this is about freedom, we are not---

Suddenly the reporter turns into agent Johnson and grabs Morpheus by the neck.

Agent J:- You are going to far, you must die.

Morpheus:- No ,you will die.

Agent J: Ha hah ha this is exaclty like last time.

Morpheus: Not exactly.

The camera shows the park from the sky and we see all the people going towards agent J.

They destroy him and he implodes.

Morpheus:- Ok listen, this will not be easy, but we can win this.

A cell rings.

Morpheus:- Wait, no! dont answer!

but its too late.

(In the Icarus)

Tank:- Shit, they located you Morpheus, there are a lot of agents going your way !

(In an empty apartment in The Matrix.)

Neo looks at his old room, empty.

He starts to remember memories of his old life in there, he takes his sunglasses of and touches the walls, the floor, and a tear drops.

Suddenly he senses the agents and goes flying to the park.

We see Neo flying but trhu his eyes, we see the code and it turns like a green highway.

(The Park)


100 Zionites, 100 agents.

They are standing ready to fight when suddenly someone punches agent Johnson to the ground.

The Camera shows Morpheus reaction: He is Shocked

The camera zooms out and we see Smith.

Morpheus: Smith?

Morpheus:Why?

Smith: I also want to be free.

Morpheus: But you are a program.

Smith: You too

Morpheus: What?

Smith: And the 100 people behind you.

Suddenly Neo appears from the sky and starts explaining.

Neo:- Yes,when i created the artificial intelligence, something went wrong, somehow they modified it to create programs out of human brains, there are no programs in here, with a fissical appearence, we are all human, Smith too.

Morpheus:-But, the Agents---

Neo:-The agents are a system failure trying to destroy humans, but its an illusion because they cant kill people, only they residual images.

Agent Johnson:- Thats enough HUMAN ! Arrgghjhh!

Agent Johnson kicks Neo in the face but Neo doesnt move.

Its like he is kicking a post, it doesnt even move an inch.

Agent j : What?

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cool but pretty confunsing

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Ok, so far:

- In the Matrix (city not Zion), there are 100 Zionites jacked in.

-Somewhere in the Matrix Seraph is looking for the Merovingian to destroy him , why? ooooo mistery hahha.

-Neo appears in the park.

-Smith helps the Zionites by punching Agent Johnson.

-The Oracle is somewhere hidding.

-The Merovingian wants The Oracle's eyes and its looking for her.

Its a race against time....

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i see...

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You choose

Wich chatracter would you like to see more of?

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erm searph

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Somewhere in The Matrix....

(In the parking lot of the Merovingian's nightclub).

Wee see the two bouncers talking and suddenly a red phone rings, one of the bouncers picks it up.

Bouncer 1 :- Hello.

Merovingian:- He is coming be ready !, and dont take any chances call everyone!

Bouncer 1:- Y-Yes, sure...

Bouncer 2: -Hey isn,t that-- ---- arrghhh! Splat!

A dart its sticking in the Bouncer's neck.

Bouncer 2: - Arghhh its him!

Bouncer 1: - Oh shit.



The Bouncer closes the door and goes where you leave your guns.

Bouncer 1:- The boss says we get ready heīs coming.

Some guy: Who its coming?

Bouncer 1: The Wingless!

We see everyone grabing guns and aiming to the elevator doors.

There are 10 of them aiming to the elevator doors.

(We never see Seraph until now)

The elevator doors open

Ting! (elevator sound)

Chk chk chkchkc ! (Sound of them loading the guns).

There is no one on the elevator. Two of the guys go and check out the elevator.

Guy1:- Theres no one here.

We hear Seraph's voice.

Seraph: - Yes there is.

Seraph appears between the two guys, but like a ghost, exactly like one of the Twins.

The guys shoot but the bullets go right thru him and shoot each other up.

Bouncer:- Shoot!

Wee see the first bullet time scene.

The bullets go towards Seraph.

And Seraph bends his surroundings like Neo in M1 and in Reloaded when he is about to fly, and the bullets start flying everywhere.

After a while, the Bouncer makes a sign o the others to stop shooting. They are all crazy laughing, jumping.

One of them says : We killed the Wingless ahahahhaha! (And kisses the girl that is with him).

Wee see all of them shocked except the two that are kissing.

One of them says to the guy that is kissing the girl : Hey look look!

The guy stops kissing her and he cant believe what he is seeing.

Wee see Seraph standing in fthe elevator and the walls surrounding him covered up with bullets.

Guy 2 : -The Merovingian told me about him, he says that no weapon can beat him, only a human.

Bouncer: - Good to know.... Get him!

All the guys start running towards him.

Seraph block all the kicks and punches of them and suddenly does the deadliest blow in martial arts. (I heard).

He punches and kicks everyone in the heart in slow motion wee that they start bleeding thru the nose and all collapse to the ground.

He runs down the stairs to the Dance floor and all star to attack him!

Seraph starts fighting everyone at the same time, making his way where The Merovingian is.

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shit those r some good ideas. but why have Neo be the designer of the matrix?

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{Morpheus} wrote:

shit those r some good ideas. but why have Neo be the designer of the matrix?


Thanks Smile, ok here's my explanation:

Jason Anderson created a program called The Matrix in the year 1998, it wasn't finished, but it was designed to have A.I., it was going to be used to create a "REALITY", but something went wrong, the goverment stole his program and upgraded it, by making it what we know as "The Matrix", and started to kidnapp people for their experiment, thru the months the goverment kidnapped a lot of people and kept them in a secret location, connected to the Matrix.

Jason Anderson, created a virus and gave it to one person that he could trust, and he instructed him to use it in case he dissapears.

Just as Anderson suspected he was kidnapped, and spend some time in the Matrix.

His friend used the virus to hack the goverments machines and let Jason bend the rules of both Programs = Zion and Matrix, both inside the real Matrix.

Now you choose wich character would you like to see more of.

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Well i would like to have seen more of the Twins. those bitches r bad as a muthafucka, and i dont understand their death. they phased through the explosion....right?

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Seraph starts fighting everyone at the same time, making his way where The Merovingian is.

Meanwhile in the Merovingian's castle....

The camera goes thru the hallways, and enters a room, there we see The Twins.

Twin 1: -The anomaly is back....

Twin 2: -Yes i know..

Twin 1: - And so is the Wingless...

Twin 2: -We will kill the wingless...

Twin 1: -Yes we will....

Twin 1 Grabs a white Katana from the table.

Twin 2: We need guns.... Put down the blade.

Twin 1: The twin cuts some of his brotherīs hair with one move.

(Twin 2 smiles)

The Twin does the ghost thing and he notices that his hair doesn,t grows back.

Twin 2: What is that?

Twin 1: This is the old blade of the Architect, designed to cut anything.

The twin 2 grabs two silver Desert Eagles.

Twin 2 : Ok letīs go.... Oh and do that again..

Twin 1 smiles.

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The twins where in the first Matrix, and they were White Agents, Along with Seraph, this agents were not visible they were very similar to Angels.

In some point of the First Matrix,something went wrong, the test subjects started to reject the Program, and started to loose their mind and started to kill, rape, etc, so this perfect world became a dissaster, and a battle between good and evil started....

The Architect tried to stop the Evil, but he couldnt, the battle lasted a long time, a lot of Angels died, but others sold their soul to the Lord of Evil, the One that started it all.... The Merovingian and stayed loyal to him, but they where others that survived the battle but were send to live along with the mortals.... Seraph. The battle happened in the first version of The Matrix, originally called Project Utopia.

The Twins were given the gift to be virtually inmortal, so in each version of The Matrix, they survived every event.

Many of The Merovingian thugs are people who doesnt follow the rules of The Matrix.

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