»CaptPostMod's Matrix 4«

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have you started working on 5

I know i have! ... and an animatrix 2!

I have plans to read your stories Dee. I'll let you know what I think.

thanks and now back on topic...captpostmod i still havent finished

Deeindamatrix wrote:

thanks and now back on topic...captpostmod i still havent finished

That's kewl, it's a long read.

I've sketched outlines for 5 & 6 but haven't started seriously writing on them yet (I haven't had a lot of free time for just fun projects).

Was awesome.
D/Led and read it start to finish tonight..

Thanks.

Hey, it's back up. The hosting sight had some problems, but my M4's back up for anyone who wants to check it out.

CaptPostMod wrote:

Hey, it's back up. The hosting sight had some problems, but my M4's back up for anyone who wants to check it out.

site?

Ok, I also upload it at my site, here is the direct link for the .rtf file: trueredpill.googlepages.com... and it will stay there forever.

EDIT

I also added it to my Downloads page: trueredpill.googlepages.com...

th3 p4th wrote:

CaptPostMod wrote: Hey, it's back up. The hosting sight had some problems, but my M4's back up for anyone who wants to check it out. site?

Oops.

th3 p4th wrote:

Ok, I also upload it at my site, here is the direct link for the .rtf file: trueredpill.googlepages.com... and it will stay there forever.

Wow! Thanks th3 p4th

Don't mention it!

Awesome stuff there CaptPostMod. I find it a shame that the second and third parts won't be released, afterall it's a fantastic beginning, but unlike M1 it doesn't really work as a stand alone story. To fix this you could perhaps flesh out what it is that Ava is supposed to do, so that it could be implied similar to Neo's task at the end of M1.

In any case, in the original post (despite it being over a year old) you mention that you like to write at least seven pages of material a week, so I'll live in hope that one day you'll pick up the motivation to work on a follow-up.

I just fixed up some of those much complained about typos in the version of my M4 script available. Part of the problem was that th3_p4th didn't have the final version that I'd meant to post up (which was my fault). Don't know what happened there.

I'm still looking for my final version. But in the meantime, a much less typo riddled version is available. trueredpill.googlepages.com...