»My Matrix 4 Script - Rebirth«

At the moment i am in the writing stage of it, but as i get more into it i will post it here. thankyou and i hope you injoy.


MATRIX 4 - Rebirth

Written by Neo1



Opening Scene:
Matrix code falls down the screen to reveal the title “The Matrix“, hold for 5 seconds then fade away, then more matrix code falls down, to reveal, “Rebirth“, hold for a further 5 seconds, then fade away to a black screen.

Scene One:
a black cloudy sky can be seen, then all of a sudden a flash of red licks over the sky, (the camera pans down) to reveal a battle field, it is a war between the machines and the humans in the final war before the matrix was built. Bloodshed and death fills the battle field on both sides. A lonely young soldier is cut of from his unit, when a huge machine, comes hurtling towards him, the machine pummels the soldier with its tentacles, making the soldier explode in a bloody mess.

A boy aged about 23, longish wavy brown hair, brown eye‘s, fair completion, wakes quickly, sweat pouring down him, has he sits up in a cold sweat, breathing hard, trying to catch his breath.

“No not again, why do I keep seeing this war. Why cant I get this bad nightmare out of my head.”

“But it seems so real, nah it cant be real, its just a dream.”

“Yeh, that’s it, it’s just a dream.”

As the boy catches his breath he slowly lays back in his bed, laying there for a while, pondering the images he had seen in his dream.

“it cant be real, it’s just a dream. But it felt so real though.”

The boy finally rolls over in his bead and goes back to sleep.

The sun rays shine over the boys face, when he is woken by the banging sound on his door.

“Raymond, are you up yet, if not get up know!”

As Raymond rolled over awaking in a sleep daze.

....more to come soon.

Sounds awesome so far!

As Raymond rolled over, awaking in a sleep daze. He snapped out of it quickly as he remembers the dream. He slowly made his way out of bed, got dressed and made is way down stairs were he grabbed a quick bit to eat before making his way to university.

Slowly walking down the street, he kept replaying the dream over and over in his mind, trying hard to understand why he couldn’t stop dreaming about the war. Walking now if in a trance he made is way up the stairs of the old colonial styled university, and into his lecture room were he took his seat.

“Good morning class.” Shouted the lecturer.

Sitting there, staring into space Raymond began to see visions of the, pod fields, of Neo and Smith fighting, and finally the death of Neo. Raymond quickly rose from his seat once again in a cold sweat, and breathing hard.

“May I please be excused?” He asks

“Yes, are you all right Raymond it looks like you’ve just scene a ghost?” Replies the lecturer

“I’m fine, I just have to...” replies Raymond

As Raymond shuffles past his fellow classmates who were sitting in the seats, the visions now began to play like a never-ending movie. He makes his way out the door and takes a few steps before he leans himself up against the wall cradling his head in his hands.

“What is happening to me, why am I seeing these images in my mind?”

“Am I going crazy?”

Meanwhile in another part of the city, the Oracle sits at the kitchen table, smoking her cigarette.

“Sati, may you please come here?” Requests the Oracle.

“Coming” Replies Sati

As Sati enters the kitchen, the oracle asks here to sit with her. Agreeing Sati makes her way to the seat, pulling it out she sits down.

“When Neo died, you ask me if we would ever see him again, and I told you yes one day. And it was from that day forth that you burdened yourself with walking the path of one-day finding him correct?”

“Yes that's right” Replied Sati

“Well I believe that your search may have come to an end. I believe that Neo has returned and is attracting allot of attention within the matrix. His name is Raymond and right now he is struggling to understand what is happening to him. I don't know if it is fate or coincidence that he has started having these visions, just when we are on the verge of the war starting again between the machines and the humans” Explained the Oracle

“Seraph may you please come here?” asks the Oracle

“How may i be of service” Replies Seraph

“I need you to contact Morpheus aboard the Nebuchadnezzar, and ask him to come see me please” asks the Oracle.

keep going, its good

working on the second scene now, post it soon.

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working on the second scene now, post it soon

good

Whatever happened to that animatrix 2 thing?

Deeindamatrix wrote:

Quote: working on the second scene now, post it soon good Whatever happened to that animatrix 2 thing?

Working to many nights, my ghost script is almost finished. i have the number for Waner Bro's in california. but i just have to get someone ring them, casue of me working nights.

Scene Two:
The Nebuchadnezzar hurtles through a tunnel, static discharge from the pads light up the dark tunnel in a blue hue, as the Nebuchadnezzar tries to out-run a large group of Sentinels that are chasing them.

“Link how long left before the EMP is charged!” Shouted Morpheus of the CB radio

“Thirty seconds!” Replies Link in a quaky voice

“Shit there are two many of them, what are we going to do” Screams Kid

“We will make it!” Replies Morpheus calmly

Flashback for Morpheus:
As Morpheus stands in front of the couch in the living room of the Oracles apartment, He asks her the fundament question

“How should I trust you, how should I trust what you are saying to me.”

As the Oracle sits on the couch looking back at Morpheus, with a low calm voice she replies.

“Morpheus are already no the answer to that, and the choice is quite obvious”

“Thankyou Oracle, once again you have told me exactly what I needed to hear” Replies Morpheus in a low voice.
Flashback ends...

“Five seconds!” Shouts Link

“On my count, Three, Two, One... Now Link; throw the EMP” Replies Morpheus.

Link pops open the clear cover that houses the switch to the EMP, and slams his fist down on it hard. From the control centre were link is sitting, a pulse of energy serges through the Nebuchadnezzar and out to the surrounding area, disabling any and all of the sentinels which were in hot pursuit of the Nebuchadnezzars and it crew.

The Nebuchadnezzar failing to switch of it power was also disabled by the EMP, and falls to the cold, dark dead ground, in a cloud bang. As the smoke and dusk settle Morpheus, Link and Kid open the hatch and wander outside carefully, watching the step for an unexpected surprise attack from a sentinel that may have survived the EMP.

“Link, I want a full systems check, and damage report as humanly possible” Commands Morpheus

“Right on it” Replies Link

“Kid, you and myself will inspect the outside of the ship, but be careful” Says Morpheus

“Right!” Replies Kid

After making a few but thorough sweep of the Nebuchadnezzar, it was not long after that Link had all of the systems back on line and operational again

i like it

Goddamn it you are good,keep it up on this way dude,and what do you know the wachowskis may read it "supposing that they are not members of this forum" and they like it,the next day we may see what you are talking about in the theaters....

Good, good, very good, but it has some little things which would seem wrong:
First, Morpheu's ship(the Neb) was destroyed in M2.
Second, Morpheus was killed during the story process of the Online game "The matrix Online".
And finally and most importantly, after neo's "death", peace was made between machines and humans, thus why is it that in your story that there is a chase of the Neb by some sentinels?
Keep it up man, great story so far.

Very well done. In my opinion better than mobil ave's story. No disrespect to him. I just hope you'll finish your story.

For some reason I picture the scences u tell as animated with the artwork like Ghost in the Shell: SAC. Anyway nice work and keep it up.

That you all for your comments, greatly appreciated.

and as for the things said about morpheus and the neb, it is simple. Morpheus was not kill in MXO, it was an illusion, but inactaul fact he survived. and as for the neb, it was rebuilt. and also about the war, peace only lasted for a while, it was the machinces that sparked it up again.

Neo1 wrote:

That you all for your comments, greatly appreciated. and as for the things said about morpheus and the neb, it is simple. Morpheus was not kill in MXO, it was an illusion, but inactaul fact he survived. and as for the neb, it was rebuilt. and also about the war, peace only lasted for a while, it was the machinces that sparked it up again.

Nice, great adaptation. Could you refer to Morpheu's death more? Do you mean that it was an illusion for your story, or was it that way for real in MxO?

MXO only, in my story he is as fit as a fiddle.

Neo1 wrote:

MXO only, in my story he is as fit as a fiddle.

Then, could you please refer more to Morpheus's death in MxO and why you say it was only an illusion? I have no idea what you are talking about here.

You see i haven't played MXO yet im still for it to be sent over to me from my uncle in america. I only learned of morpheus death in the game from people who had already played it.

I was only using the illusion side for my story/script, because morpheus is an integral part for my story/script. If there is a video clip relating to morpheuse death that i can see, then i will add this section into my story/script. Because think about it, it would be could. it would give that movie that little edge/twist to it.

PS. I was pissed off my tit, when i wrote that previous post. and i didnt explain myself properly, sorry.

After making a few but thorough sweeps of the Nebuchadnezzar, it was not long after that, that Link had all of the systems back on line and operational again. Boarding back on the ship, Morpheus and the Kid head back to the bridge on make a course for Zion.

While travelling back to Zion, the intercom starts lighting up.

“Operator” Answers Link

“Is this the Nebuchadnezzar?” Asks Seraph

“Yeh, Who’s this” Replies Link in a curious voice

“This is Seraph; I have a message for Morpheus, the Oracle requests a meeting with him urgently” Replies Seraph

The message is passed onto Morpheus by link and soon Morpheus prepares himself to jack into the matrix. Successfully jacking in Morpheus stands before a old styled ringing telephone, which was placed on a beat-up old desk located on the back wall of the cold, gloomy, dim lit room. Morpheus picks up the receiver.

“I’m in!” Replies Morpheus to Link.

Morpheus puts down the receiver, turning he makes his way to the door. Turning the dirty, dented doorknob, he slowly opens the door, and makes his way out of the room.

Cut to the Oracles Kitchen:

Were the Oracle is sitting in her chair smoking her cigarette looking up at Seraph who is stand near the door way looking back at her.

“I hold grave fears about the upcoming events the are going to transpire Seraph” says the Oracle in a low voice.

“What do you mean?” Replies Seraph.

The oracle stares at seraph only for a brief moment as if see was in some sort of trance.

“It’s time, may you please show are guest in, Seraph...Thankyou” Replies the Oracle.

“Morpheus, good to see you again” Says the Oracle

“Oracle!” Replies Morpheus in is serious voice

“Please Sit?” Replies the Oracle

“I am all right thankyou; I would rather stand if that is all the same” Replies Morpheus

“Suit yourself!” Replies the Oracle

“We are in dark times again, Morpheus. As you are undoubtable aware of, the machines are preparing to start the war between you and them.” Says the Oracle

“But I thought Neo saved us!” Replies Morpheus

“He only won the battle, he didn’t win the war” Replies the Oracle

“What do you mean” Replies Morpheus

“I mean, with all of the red pills that were set free, after neo died, and the red pills that you and the other Zionites have set free as well. The machines once again feel threatened and have set in motion extermination plans for Zion.” Explained the Oracle

“But in the dark times that are going to follow, there is a light that will shine. You see sati was intrusted with the task of once again finding the one. and her search is now finally over. You see a boy...Raymond, he has began to see things, visions of the past, and I believe that Neo has returned. But there is also another threat, that we now have to worry about. You see the Merovingian, is a man that wants power and after seeing what smith was capable of doing within the matrix, he believes that he can at last achieve ultimate power, by concurring the matrix for himself. He believes that this is his purpose, his destiny.” Explains the Oracle.

“So what are you telling me?” Replies Morpheus

“Now that Sati’s task has ended, yours now begins. I entrust this task you Morpheus. You must contact Raymond, and help him as he walks the path of the chosen one.” Explains the Oracle

“Very well, I will except this task.” Replies Morpheus.

“Oh, Morpheus how are you doing. Are your dreams still filled with the events of your death”

“Yes...But...” Replies Morpheus

“Sati is a remarkable young girl, is she not.” Replies the Oracle

“Yes she is!” Replies Morpheus.

“Thankyou Oracle, it was good to see you again” Replies Morpheus

“I believe that we will seeing more of each other, in the troubled times to come” Replies the Oracle

“Seraph will take you back now" Replies the Oracle.

Keep it coming, keep it coming! It's great so far.

Thankyou

Your story is nice, very nice. But I do have a question.

How come Morpheus didn't even hesitate to say no to the Oracle? After everything that happened with Neo and the false Proficy, why would Morpheus even want to believe her again? What if it was just another system of control? I know if I was Morpheus I wouldn't even go to the Oracle. Some things are best to be figured out on your own.

But please, keep this good story going

You got a good start Neo1 but what I found from this is

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Well I believe that your search may have come to an end. I believe that Neo has returned and is attracting allot of attention within the matrix. His name is Raymond and right now he is struggling to understand what is happening to him.

You are trying to bring Neo back into the story and that would not be quite interesting.Neo is not only the ONE,Why can't another ONE think in the sameway,trying to understand wat's going on around him.I think you must have totally killed Neo in your story and must have started with a new ONE with a fresh story.Anyways that's my opinion.