»My Matrix 4 Script - Rebirth«

firstly unlike yours mine makes scene, and it is along the path of the 3 before it.

And secondly when i refer to Neo in my story, I am refering to the line used in the last film. Neo has come backl, in visions and the anomly code. when you read it properly you would understand that.

Agent Black wrote:

Your story is nice, very nice. But I do have a question. How come Morpheus didn't even hesitate to say no to the Oracle? After everything that happened with Neo and the false Proficy, why would Morpheus even want to believe her again? What if it was just another system of control? I know if I was Morpheus I wouldn't even go to the Oracle. Some things are best to be figured out on your own. But please, keep this good story going

Morpheus knows this, he knew this in revolutions when he went to see the oracle, when searching for neo. Because he relised at the end of revolutions that everthing that the oracle said actual came true.

why don't you call the nebechenezzer (bad spelling i know) the nebechenezzer 2 (in roman numerals) reborn (like a play on the title of the film?) just a thought. ?

Firstly i would like to thank everyone for your comments.

Now, there has been some confusion with some people with my script/story that they cannot comprehend or crasp. So i would like to clairfy this.

1) The title rebirth, corasponds to the birth of the new chosen one, because the sort period of peace between the humans and the machines has ended and the war has started up once again.

2) Neo is Dead physical, but mentally he is not, that is what i am refering to in my script/story. This will be explained more indeapth as the story goes on.

I will be posting some more of my story up soon, now that x-mas and the new year is over i can start working on it again so stay posted.

I understand your story so far, its good

Thankyou

anything to come soon?

been busy and i have not got around to writing much, but ideas are alwasy flowing, and something will come soon.

thats good to know

neo1 you should of been writing the scripts and direct the first 3 matrix films not the w borthers and this matrix reborn sounds like a great film

thankyou agame, its alwasys nice to get feed back from my peers.

its ok and whos the phone calles to warner bros an the w/brothers about your scripts/story

agame wrote:

its ok and whos the phone calles to warner bros an the w/brothers about your scripts/story

WHAT ?, can you explain a little more clearer please

Im over the whole V for Vendetta Avatar, it back to tyhe original and the best.

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we have neo back!

Neo1 wrote:

agame wrote: its ok and whos the phone calles to warner bros an the w/brothers about your scripts/story WHAT ?, can you explain a little more clearer please

ok i ment to say are u making any progress with your new matrix story and are u making priogress in geting it to warner bros and the creaters of the matrix movies

oh i understand know okay . and in answer to your question "NO" i am not going to speak to warner until i have finished my story.

a right now i just look at my screen/story and go were can i go from hear. i have a bad case of writers block

and thanks dee its good to be back.

ok

i know this is a rough draft for you. but the grammar is pretty off in some places. and the dialogues aren't very convincing between the characters compared to some of stories i've read and the movies, of course. maybe don't try so hard to make them speak intellegently, rather a bit more honestly.

sorry for the bad post, but just wanted to be honest.

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