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Sati needing an exit?

Explain please.

When sati was about 15, the oracle gave her choice, to stay inside the matrix and watch the war go by or to be ejected out of the matrix, to help the resistence. She choose to be be ejected.

Any what do thinK of the story in general?

Yeah but how? She does need a body for this process and some kind of data overwriting method

The idea of a white angelic agent is cool, but it doesn't make sense to me personally.

I know that deep inside the Architect wants to get rid of humanity but such an action would make him an exile himself. So if in your story the Architect indeed becomes rogue, then it would be fun and make sense

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She does need a body for this process

yes that would be explained in an animatrix story where the oracle, gave the deletion codes to another shell to the merovingian so they could have satis codes inejected so to speak into someone in the matrix, like what smith did to bane.

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The idea of a white angelic agent is cool, but it doesn't make sense to me personally

All will be explained

Hmm we will have to wait and see then

But beware, I will not spare criticism when it's needed.

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But beware, I will not spare criticism when it's needed

ok

They are now on the neb.

Link: What happened in there?

Sati: I dont no, when we back in Zion, Can the neb last long enough without recharging?

Morpheus: 25 - 35 minites and lets hope so

We jump forwrd so we are at Zion.

Zion Control: Nebacnezzar, on approch, lets open her up, Gate 4, bay 12. Welcome back, enjoy your stay.

Link: Ill make sure of that.

The neb drives into Zion, and parks cleanly. Link, Kid, Sati and Morpheus get out carring bags, Morpheus gives instructions to recharge the neb, Sati gives her bags to a Zion worker and tells her to follow morpheus. Sati goes to Commander Lock room. She lets her self in.

Sati: Lock, the Oracle has given word, the war isnt over.

Lock: I dont beleilve this bullshit, you know that, so why do you waste my time by telling me? The war is over, i'm not sure how, i just know we surived, and it was the humans, not some procecy that ended it.

Sati: But the war isnt over, you know that.

Lock: The war is over i told, the humans surived.

Sati: The 'war' you speak of, was only one battle in that 'war', it ended in peace, the machines used a system override to let Neo have the chance to stop Smith, which he did, resulting in peace.

Lock: That was the end of the war, neo did nothing, it was us, the Zionists which lead ourselfs to victory. Neo used a ship which could of helped us.

Sati: Neo was the end of that battle, but not the war. You need to prepare for this war, or we will lose.

Lock: Get out, now!

Sati: You've been warned, when the machines come, it wont be a battle it will be genoside.

Sati, with one last stern look, walks out.

We cut to when the main lights are turned off and the small lights are turned on. Morpheus and Kid are looking over the balcony.

Kid: Will the neb be ready in the morning?

Morpheus: I think so, we need to get back to broadcast level, we need to end this war.

Kid: We sure do, well i'm going to bed, good night

Morpheus: Goodnight

Kid walks out.

Morpheus: Goodnight Zion.

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The next day came. The neb was fully recharged, Kid woke up Morpheus.

Kid: Morpheus, get up, we need to go.

Morpheus: o.k, get Link and Sati.

Kid leaves and gets them. We fast forword to them entering the ship.

Zion control: This is Zion Control, Nebachnezzer on exit, please open gate 4, full stand down of arms.

The neb leaves. we skip to broadcast depth. We see Morpheus and Kid be jacked into the matrix. They uploaded a car from the construct. Now in the matrix, Morpheus picks up the phone.

Morpheus: We're in, now where next?

Link: Am reading an agent near highway 48, are you sure you want to do this, only neo has survived an agent.

Kid takes the phone off of Morpheus.

Kid: I survived agents.

Link: Yes but you only just did though, i mean self-ejected from the matrix, thats just luck.

Kid: lets see you do it

Link: i cant be jacked in, so i cant self ejeceted myself.

Kid puts the phone down.

Kid: Come on, Highway 48.

They get in, morpheus drives. As Morpheus drives out he sees the cops, so he skids around the corner, they're driving down the road, and the cops drive around the corner. The cops start shoting, we go inside a cop car as he calls for backup. We see some mor shoting as we go in and out of slow motion. We go to a birdeye view of Kid and Morpheus car and the cops following, they drive off the screen, then we see a bike fly past, we cut to the back of the bike, we see red leather. We cut back to kid and morpheus. Kid and morpheus use the exit and go onto highway 48. Kid gets out and starts to shoot back. We cut back to the neb.

Sati: god there not going to survive, wait whats that.

Link: Its reading like a human.

We cut back to kid shooting. Then we cut to a cop shooting. We follow one bullet as it flies towards Kid, it gets closer and you can tell its goning to hit him. Just as it was about to hit him, we cut to his eyesight, we see the bullet, Kid closes his eyes, so the screen is blank. a little while passes, kid opens his eyes, hes on the neb. We cut back to the matrix to morpheus car.

Morpheus: wheres he gone? I cant do this alone

We cut to the neb.

Sati: Kid, what you do?

Kid: i think...i think i self-ejected myself again.

We cut back to the biker. We see the biker fly past the cops and to the side of morpheus car.

Niobe: Need some help?

Morpheus with a smile on his face: Deffinatly.

Niobe: You go, i'll stop these

With that niobe spins the bike around, So she is facing the cops, she reves her engine. and drives, she pulls a gun out and shots some of the cops. She stops shoting, and rips some of her cape off, and ties it around he throttle, she lets go of the handle bars and stands on the seat. Then when then she feels safe she jumps off of the bike and the bike flies in the cop car and expoldes knock some of the other cop cars over. For the remaining few she pulls out a Mac 11 and shoots them. We cut back to Morpheus. he is driving in and out of the lanes, dodging cars. We cut back to the Hermes(new ship built in the logos space)

Ghost on the phone to Niobe: Morpheus, cant do this alone, you need to help him.

Niobe on the phone to Ghost: O.k, i think we should let the new guy help.

Ghost otp to Niobe: What? Are you crazy?

Niobe otp to Ghost: I am the captain of this ship, you will do what i say.

Ghost otp to Niobe: o.k we'll send him in, but if anything happens, on your head be it.

Niobe otp to Ghost: O.k, wheres he going to be jacked in.

Ghost gives the headset back to Sparks: Down the street and on your right, in the pawn shop. He'll be there.

We see ghost jacking somebody in. Niobe runs to the pawn shop. Waiting there was the new guy.

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but if you do this story with such details you'll finish it sometime in 2007 .so i sugest you do rezumee ok?i have a good idea to to your story:neo is revived by the machines...bleah...bleah...bleah...read my fucking story and it wil be more curios don't you agree? something nice...just a few ideas from my story....i'm not selfish but i think it will be superb

you have a great imagination and you're story line is great but you need to make it more curios but in the same time more explained...'cause if not it will be something like revolution...i mean NO QUESTIONS ANSWERED...AGAIN so do you're best in making this story...

Yes...your intentions are nice but it is a bit chaotic.

They fly to Zion for what? To have one word with Lock and sleep?

And what is exactly their mission?

I like the idea with the Kid very much though. Unplugging wirelessly at will!

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Yes...your intentions are nice but it is a bit chaotic.

sorry cant help it, too many things am wanting to say.

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They fly to Zion for what?

Recharge the neb, Sati went to lock on her own.


And thanks guys for the coments, i will try not to write with so much deatails.

I like this story as much as MoblieAveNeo's version. One thing you should fix is it should go with MxO though, but there is a rumor that Morpheus faked his death. So it will go ok.

thanks, i will write another as soon as i finish my coursewrok

The new guy is called 'Vigor'

Niobe: Quickly, lets go Morpheus cant surive that agent alone.

Vigor: And with our help?

Niobe: He has a chance

Morpheus is on the phone to Link.

Link: Morpheus dont do this, its suicide

Morpheus: I have to, and what did i tell you about questioning me?

Link: Yes...sir good luck. You need any help? What me to send Kid and Sati in?

Morpheus: Please.

He puts the phone down and jacks Kid and Sati in.

Morpheus spots out the agent in white, he is aproching Roland and his crew. there appears to be cars that have been over turned.

Morpheus puts his foot down.

Sati and Kid are catching up with morpheus.

Sati reiceiving a phone call: Niobe...Where are you?

Sati looks out of the back window and sees niobe and Vigor on a bike.

Sati to Kid: We have back up. now put your foot down and help morpheus.

Morpheus is driving towards the agent from behind. Roland and his crew jump out of the way. and the agent just turns around. When agent is just about to be hit it jumps over the car. Morpheus jumps out as the car is about to crash into a barrier. Morpheus talks Roland, Mauser and colt to fight the agent.

Morpheus runs over to the agent and starts to fight him, Roland and his crew follow. (You can imagenine some really cool fight sence until...) The agent trips morpeus over and punchs him away. Spin kicks Roland away, flat fists Colt away nad back flip kicks Mauser in the face.

the agent striaghtens his tie then his cuffs. He starts to walk towards Morpheus, Roland, Mauser and Colt. He hears skiding. he turns around. Sati, Kid, Niobe and Vigor are stood there. Vigor starts to shoot the agent he dodges all the bullets. Again they run towards the agent and start to fight (Again use your imagniation, with Morpheus Roland mauser and colt joining in, make it so the agent is recieving more hits than the others but still isnt losing badly until...) the agent does a spinging trip nad trips them all over and exits the host. they get up. Morpheus gets his phone out.

Morpheus: Wheres he gone?

Link: He seems to be in a buliding, hes opening the door and...hes now...dissapeared. I think he must of entered core network because am not scanning him any way else.

Morpheus: We need to enter the core network, there must be a reason why he entered

Morpheus calls Roland and Niobe over on there own to talk.

Morpheus: Roland, Niobe, will you and your crew help me

Roland: Whats the mission?

Niobe: Stopping that agent...

Morpheus: And stopping the war.

Roland: Jeee-sus, we cant do this alone!

Niobe: Well where are we going to find help? we are the only crews that survived, plus the hammer and Neb took sustainable damaged and i lost my little baby, the Logo, i cant believe it was 11 years ago, when Neo was alive.

Roland: Well it seems we need to free some goddam minds.

A grin becomes on morpheus face. *Cue Music, with quite rocky edge* we show images of people recieving phonecalls, and people being woken up. we are back at zion with around 15 new people.

Morpheus Niobe and Roland gets the new guys and girls to stand in a line.

New Guy #1: What is this? School?

New Guy #2: Yeah *laughs* You take the Red Pill?

New Guy #1: Ye, I regret it now just look at this shit hole.

New Girl: Shut up were all here for the same reason.

New Guy #1: Yeah..because we had nothing better to do.

Morpheus to everyone: People, you are here because, you are needed, needed by us, the people of zion, the last human city, to help us save mankind. *theres murmours from the crowd* Listen, you are the difference, you may denie it now but once you feel the matrix, you will beleive what i have said, you will now be assighned a crew, these may change or you could be with your assigned for the rest of your life, so make yourself friends or make yourself a grave. Right...Venge you have been assighned to my crew, of the Nebachenezzar. Pure your on the Hermes with Niobe...

Once the call has gone round, morpheus, roland and niobe start to talk again.

Morpheus: These crews are too big i cant cope with a crew like this.

Niobe: Better have a word with the council, We need some more Hovercrafts.

Roland: If we do either Colt or Ghost should be the captain, plus is there anyone out here who would want to be an opperator after years and years of bad press?

Niobe: they'll be someone.

They are in the concillers hall, with all the new people and crews sat in the seats watching.

Councillor Dillard: You are requesting that a new ship be bulit to cope with the new rebels being unplugged from the matrix.

Niobe: Yes Councillor, we would be very gratful

Councillor West: O.k have annoced that a new Hovercraft shall be bulit.

Niobe Roland and Morpheus show controlled celeabrations.

Councillor Dillard: Till the new ship is bulit, what are the new people going to do.

Morpheus: Some shall be sent to broadcast depth with us, while the others who are still in Zion will be trained hand to hand combact and gun use and ways of the matrix by Ghost in the zion mainframe.

Councillor Hamann: Are you staying the night, or are you going back to broadcast depth?

Roland: I'll stay, you two go, i need to recharge my ship.

Morphues and Niobe call there crews forward they choose two extra from the new guys than there normal crews (minus Ghost on niobes.) They go onto there ships and drive off to broadcast depth.

Goooood...good!

in the matrix...

Morpheus otp: Link can you see him?
Link: Erm...Right...Am not reading him...or any over agent...any where in the matrix
Morpheus: What?
Link: Not one agent
Morpheus: This isnt ri-
Link: Am reading something!
Morpheus: WHAT?
Link: Neo!
Morpheus: Neo? Where?
Link: He seems to be at the oracles
Morpheus: Oracles?
Link: Yeah
Morpheus: Am going!

Morpheus closes the phone and enters the car with Sati Kid and Venge. They drive off to the oracles

At the oracles:

Oracle: Well well well i wasnt expecting you here
Neo: Hmm why? I thought you of all people would of seen me coming.
Oracle: Well am losing my touch, as you can see, I have lost my shell again.
Neo: How?
Oracle: I made a choice...again, you should know this most of all, choices change your life.
Neo: Yeah...What was the choice?
Oracle: To let Sati leave?
Neo: Sati? The girl from the train station?
Oracle: Yes yes
Neo: where she go?
Oracle: Zion
Neo: How?
Oracle: Even for you, your asking a alot of questions, but anyway, you remember when Smith was at large and found a way to enter the real world?
Neo: Bane
Oracle: Yes that was him, Smith injected him with a virus, like what he did to you, and enter the real world. the process was like that.
Neo: HOW?

Oracle looks with asoundment

Oracle: Neo? Whats happen to you?

Searph walks in.

Searph: Oracle, whats happa- Neo?
Neo: Well well, arn't we starting to see each other more often, like old times, a?

Searph starts to fight Neo (imagine a small fight scene like smith and morpheus in m1)

Neo: Now why did you do that, you already know who i am, you just didn't believe it, you didn't want to believe it.
Searph: Smith!
Neo: Yes thankyou for confirming what everyone has figured out.
Oracle: How?
Neo: How the tables have turned?
Oracle: I dont get it, how didnt I see this happening
Neo: Well you didnt, you coudn't have because you only saw Neo, not me, mabye if you hadnt of lost another shell you would of seen me, but the past is the past and so are you.

With that Neo fly kicks the oracle, but searph knocks him out of the way.

Searph: Oracle...Run...Ill stop him i have beaten him before

The oracle runs out of the door down the stairs and runs into the white agent...

In the hallway of the oracles apartment...

Agent: Hello, Mother
Oracle: Architect?

In Oracles arpartment...

Neo: Its useless, why do you still try?
Searph: I fight for who means most
Neo: The Oracle, shes means nothing.
Searph: Shes means everything

In the hallway of the oracles apartment...

Agent: Wasn't you expecting me?
Oracle: No. No. No. This isnt right, how didnt i see you, this, what have i done?
Agent: All I can say is, The Merovingian is keeping his eye on you.
Oracle: Huh, the Merovingian, whats he got to do with this.

In Oracles arpartment...

Seraph: Smith, who are you?
Neo: Just as before, i not sure how it happanned, it just did, it seems i am a scitsophrenic, Smith is all powerful, Neo knows nothing.
Searph: Smith, give back Neos body.

In the hallway of the oracles apartment...

Agent: Don't you understand?
Oracle: This is to do with Sati, isn't it?
Agent: Yes, thats the girls name, Sati, I can remember giving the go ahead for her deletion, no purpose, no use, but you scarificed your skills to let her stay.
Oracle: I gave the Merovingian the deletion codes to my shell, to help Neo, then i gave my deletion codes codes to my next shell to have Sati help in the war.
Agent: Didn't you realise that you can't delete your last shell, that contains the eyes that gave you your imbility to see past the choice.
Oracle: So the merovingian has the abilty to see past his choice?

In Oracles arpartment...

Neo: I could let him have control now, but am just going to let him sleep in the back of my mind.
Searph: let him have control
Neo: Why? So you can tell him where i am, he'll never beleive you, like i said smith is all powerful.

In the hallway of the oracles apartment...

Agent: The Merovingian can see past his choice and if he is still like what he was years ago, i think his followers have copys.
Oracle: What have i done?

Morpheus and his crew run up the stairs

Morpheus: Oracle, whats happening?
Agent: Hmm Its Morpheus
Morpheus: How do you know who i am?
Agent: I watched you escape the police officers at heathrow, which wasn't very complicated i must add, i watched you find Thomas A. Anderson, I watched you be caught in the air by Neo.
Morpheus: How do you know all that?
Agent: I watched it happen.
Sati: Morpheus he's lying
Agent: Well, me and the Oracle was just talkin about you?
Sati: What have you done with her?
Agent: Me? nothing, we are merly just old friends
Venge: Who are you? and Whos the Oracle?
Agent: Well I would of never guessed you would be unplugged, espacially with the code your carrying?
Kid: What code?
Agent: The code he carries will be intercalated in the annoymolly allowing a cataclysmic destruction of the delegates of the subpoena...huh what was that all about.
Oracle: You was programed to speak like that, don't denie the system.

Searph runs out of the oracles arpartment and down the stairs

Oracle: Are you o.k?
Searph: We need to go, you all do, smiths found a way to copy himself again.
Morpheus: Smith?
Kid: Neo stopped him
Morpheus: What happened to Neo?
Searph: He is Smith
Sati: What?

Neo walks down the stairs.

Neo: Theres no point in running, theres no where you can run, theres no where you can hide. I will find you.

Some nice features but it just doesn't tie together for me

And the Oracle and the Architect would never talk in such a way and tone.

Wierd...

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And the Oracle and the Architect would never talk in such a way and tone.

well i tried to write it so the oracle sounded like she was extremly confused, and the agent was tring to speak but the architects programmed 'talk' overridded.

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Wierd

in which way...

just crappy story line or...
Dont understand or...
Both

As i got no reply i will continue.

Agent: Go, GO! Ill stop him. *start to fight*
Searph: Come Oracle this way
Searph and the Oracle go
Morpheus: My crew this way
Morpheus and his crew go

Neo: Hmm fight an agent, never thought this would happen.
Agent: I helped you bugged Neo, I helped you find morpheus, why are you doing this?
Neo: Its my purpose
Agent: You...have no...PURPOSE!

Outside Morpheus and his crew are talking to the Oracle

Morpheus: Whats happaning? Whats wrong?
Oracle: I cant tell you, but he can *gives morpheus a piece of paper*
Morpheus: The translator
Oracle: He is backup for the oracle program.
Searph: Come

Searph opens the doors of the oracles apartment, it opens to the hallway. The doors closes with the oracle and searph inside.

Venge: Morpheus, what has just happened? Who is the Oracle? Who is the Translator? What is with my code?
Morpheus: Time will tell.
Sati: We need to contact the translator
Kid: How though?
Morpheus: I think i have an idea.

Morpheus rings Link

Morpheus otp Link: Do a systems search for 'The Translator'
Link: The Translator?
Morpheus: Yes
Link: O.k I have found it
Morpheus: Details
Link: Gobyen Island, 360 miles away from Mega City, there are no exits, so you going to have to find out where to get there.
Morpheus: O.k take us to a port.

Morpheus and his crew enter the construct and are put back at a port off Mega City. they take a boat and go to Gobyen island. They get there and it looks like mega city, but uninhabited. They slowly walk round and see a buliding that looks like the oracles apartment buliding, they go inside to the oracles room, and a man is sat at the table.

Man: Hello Morpheus, Sati, Kid, Venge, if you are here i am persuming the oracle has lost her eye, i see, am sorry i never introduced myself i am the translator, i was created by the oracle as a failsafe to the oracle program, i was programed to tell you everything., I like to see myself more straight forword than the Oracle, i don't guide, i order. The matrix was created in order to provide power for the machines.
Morpheus: I know this
The translator: The first matrix was, as the architect would say, perfect. Let down by a fatal yet simple problem, humans. Humans are imperfect beings so being put in a perfect surrounding, made the humans reject the system. Thousands died due to themselfs, there was nothing wrong with the program, as i said before the matrix was perfect.
Morpheus: What matrix is this?
The translator: The matrix was redesigned, to incorrperate the the inpurites of the human nature, again this faluired killing thousands. The matrix wasn't going to be left it was redisigned thanks to the help of a investigating program, called the Oracle, my creator, she stumbled apon an answer, so the matrix would not be a complete disater as before, it had a 99% effectity, you are the 1% which rejected the system.

I'm still finding this very wierd and kind of unorganized, but continue so we can see how this ends.