»The Matrix Harmaggedon«

My ideas for M4, sorry that I´m not a native speaker, so I have to get along with a limited number of words...

Intro:
It is dark in the synagoge. We see two traditional clothed jews sitting in the front row.
There are just candles burning. In front of them there are some old scriptures with hebrew signs on them.
One of them says: There is more to the Matrix then they know.

The other: Brother, will it be revealed ?

The first one: I don´t know brother, but I know they need him back.

“Who do you think of, Neo or Smith ?”

“Neither, nor”.

Camera close up to the scriptueres, the letters start to glow in gold, then there is a fade in,
We see golden light, the gold code,
The next fade in into the gold code, green letteres appear, and then a fade in into the green letters, we see the common Matrix code (like the beginning of M3)
The common Matrix code materializes and we see a telephone in a dark, cold room, the walls are made of stone.

A female hand picks it up, it is a beautiful about 20 year old indian girl, dressed in black leather,wears beautifl sunglasses next to her stands Seraph.

Morpheus appears: I havn´t been here for a while

Seraph: It´s good to have you back. We need you

Morpheus: Why

Sati: The old buisness, set the captives free

Morpheus: You have grown up

Sati: Let´s go

She opens a door, they are in the entrance hall of a prison, similar to Alcatraz.
Prisoners, dressed in grey skirts, are sitting in small cages, there are about 3 guards in the room

Guard 1: Whats your buisness ?

Sati: “Freedom” pulls her gun, and shoots the guards,

The sirens start to yell, there is red flackering emergency light, while about 10 guards are coming from every side.
Morpheus and Seraph pull their guns too and start to shoot
The first guards are killed, Seraph starts fighting and kills two people with a whirlwind kick,
Sati jumps high into the air, time freezes, she kicks a guard, who flies into the wall,
Morpheus is shoting the last five men
The sirene is still yelling, the rest is silence

Morpheus to Sati: You remind me of an old friend.
Sati: The pain of the loss has grown with the time. It´s not only her you miss.

Suddenly a door opens, special forces , about 50 men are coming through the door

Sati: We don´t have the time for this

She stretches here arms into the air and the walls starts first tremble, then they break down, and so the special forces are burried under the bricks.

Morpheus, Seraph and Sati continue their walk through the prisons, watched by the schocked and surprised inmates, the open a door and follow the steps into the dark cellar.

Here, the inmates are not in cages, it looks more like lockers, they cant move, they have an oxygen mask over their face, there are shackles on hands and feet, you can just see their faces through a small window.

Seraph points to cell Nr. 6: He worked for the merovinger and killed 59 children

Sati: He is not the reason, why we are here, here he is, cell 30

Seraph enters a code and the door opens

Morpheus: I´m out, you havn´t told me that it is him

Sati: We need him and you

Morpheus: He has traited me, I can not forgive him

Seraph: You have to

Morpheus: I can´t and I´wont, I don´t care what the Oracle said, I leave now

Morpheus walkes alone into the dark

Sati open the shackles and remove the mask, a familiar face appears


Cypher

To be continued.

entertaining!

hmm not bad, but who are the jews at the begining.

Deeindamatrix wrote:

hmm not bad, but who are the jews at the begining.

*g* well. I thought I could deepen the mythology a bit, by inventing new characters ( bash me, but´s a bit like M2 and M3)
You´ll never know the full truth

May be it is better to start the story without them, may be they get an important role

ok, lets here the next part then...

I like the storyline, but the premis of the movie is based to much like the matrix triology. I think that you need to establish new characters with maybe a hint of old characters to boot. And come up with a different type of sotyline. example ETM was writen from a different point of view, but it still was based around the movie.

What you need to do is something simalar to that. Find a different angle and work from there. (example my script about ghost which is finished yet).

Somethings to think about.

Sati - background Info, new plot/storyline,

Neo - being found/coming back to life

Morpheus and Niobe - and the effect that there relationship has when morpheus begins searching Neo

Ghost - and how is coping with the lost on Trinity.

Those were just a few examples. Make it creative but dont make M4 like M1 - M3 in storyline and plot structure.

Thank you for your tips, I´ll try to consider them, but at the moment I don´t have that much time...
Cause I´m new, I don´t know what the abbreviation ETM stands for.
Greetings
Renovatio

Enter The Matrix

Anonymous wrote:

Thank you for your tips, I´ll try to consider them, but at the moment I don´t have that much time... Cause I´m new, I don´t know what the abbreviation ETM stands for. Greetings Renovatio

Your welcome, i thought i would be hand to know these things.

also can i put out something, in your script, you were talking about people being inside these lockers, can i just point out that these is to similar to the pods were people are connected to the matrix

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