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its your story, do what you want

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ok the story/script is called calsh of the matrix

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looking forword to reading it

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yeah but i am working on another script/story called the red pill

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red pill hey, that sounds interesting.

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yeah its about a guy caled animal and yes i know he never apeyerd in the movies but get back to the story/script he meets trinity and gets his mind freed but his nightmares of machines killing him comes true

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sounds good

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yeah just wait till i finished the script then i will put it on this animatrix 2 topic

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cool, go for it... cant wait to read it.

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yeah i will post it when i have finished the story

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Title: Serendipity

Plot:

This is the story of the last potential “one” Morpheus finds before finding Neo.

Script:

Morpheus: (Camera zooms out to reveal silhouette of Morpheus’ back sitting on a chair with the matrix code in front of his head. He is dictating to a computer that records his voice log. He is in his ship.) Hope is all that I have and yet it slips through my fingers like grains of sand. It is my curse and my gift, she told me I would find him yet I have failed again and that poor woman’s blood is on my hands. I find myself questioning the oracle and yet I feel that she is right, I know she is. I also feel that I am running out of time. As if the whole world is swelling and the crash will imminently fall on Zion’s gates. I will find him I must.

Screen fades black. We now are looking through the dreary gaze of eyes that have just awoken. Sunlight floods the camera and it is ground level on a lawn. The camera stays in first person as it rises from the ground and sways as it focuses.

Hannah: Not again not again. This is crazy I can’t live like this. (She walks to the sidewalk and hails a cab.) Eli street please.

As the cab stops Hannah stumbles out. She heads into a destitute apartment building and climbs the stairs. Then she stops short and grabs her head and we see her vision.

There is a white figure on a flat green field in front of him stands a great bronze gate that is open and stands alone with no walls on either side. In front of him is a mass of black figures that spans as far as can be seen. They all have white eyes. Now the white man steps through the gate and it slams shut behind him. Now he is facing the black multitude and we see he has black eyes. He raises his right hand and the black figures shuffles apart to let him through as he makes his way into the mob they fill in behind him. The view is above him a tiny white speck in a sea of black the camera then plummets directly down to him. He throws back his head and all of the black figures get sucked into him like a vortex. The infusion of black figures becomes violent and then it stops and the screen goes white and we hear “Neo” whispered as the camera goes back onto Hannah on the steps.

This is all I feel like posting now but the basic storyline is that this woman (Hannah) has been tormented by visions and premonitions that drive her mad. She is the target of the machines because she has told her psychiatrist (a machine) all her visions. Morpheus is led to her by the oracle she tells him that the path of the one flows through her. He interprets this as her being the one when she is only the last step. She is walking up to meet him kinda like in m1 only he is alone. They have a dialogue but it is cut short as a tear gas canister breaks through the window. She has been bugged and drugged during a hypno therapy session with her psychiatrist and now the agents are coming. They flea to the roof and jump into an alley by means of the fire escape. As they are being chased she ahs another vision. Now they are in a subway station she stops and hands Morpheus a piece of paper and tells him that if he wants to find the one he must let her die. She jumps in front of the subway train and the homing devise is carried away from Morpheus. He falls to his knees in dismay and looks at the paper. Samuel Str. 3rd floor room 8. He walks into the room #308 and sees “Neo” carved into every inch of the walls and floor.

Fin.

P.S. This is a candid bible reference. Samuel is a boy who hears god calling him. Eli is the rabbi who recognizes that fact, and Hannah is Samuel’s mother. How sweet is that.

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This was said on the first post on page 2

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the story of trinity and what the oracle told her


The oracle tells Trinity that she will fall in love with the one when he is dead, well thats what she said in the short term.

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dlax wrote:

Title: Serendipity

Plot:

This is the story of the last potential “one” Morpheus finds before finding Neo.


This one is great. Nice read, good ideas.

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You know we are matrix fans, we are a rare group of thinkers that took the concept of the matrix seriously, and thought about it and discuss it....
As I was reading in this topic I realized that some want animatrix episodes that explains somethings in the movie that we didn't understand, or things that were ignored...
Some of us want these things from the Wochowski brothers...
Now, I don't think that this is what we deeply want, we, or I will say I, don't want ( if I wanna hear anything from the brothers ) answers, I want something else, that makes me dig really hard for true and meaningful answer.
I really don't wanna imagine how it's gonna be if the boys answered all our questions, we're gonna be left alone without anything to discuss, and we would consider what they said and that's it.
Like for example since I was a kid about 10 years old, I really had tons of questions about the natural of reality, I really believed in a hidden simulation, because I couldn't stand or believe the idea that my father was one day not a bussiness manager he was like me a 10 year-old boy, thus I started to think about an explanation or explanations, and when I saw the matrix I sort of stopped thinking and accepted what they think, and this is not what should happen to all of us, every question pops in our minds, leads us to digging for many facts we won't usually find out.
That's I think is the reason why the boys refused to do any interviews or anyting else to the press, that's why when we saw them in the matrix revisited talking to Josh, they said nothing important about the story, that's why they turned down Warner when they were asked to do the commentary on the DVDs, and instead the brothers didn't ask the actors to do it, they asked philosophers and critics...
What I wanna say is what Silver said "They know what they're doing."

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