»Animatrix 2«

The end is just gr888. I like the narration that u gave, I cud imagine the whole thing in my mind. I feel like i shud make an animated movie on Animatrix 2 myself based on ur story.



It was really action packed.

you seem to like it, thanks, why dont you write your own animatrix story, come on its fun

Deeindamatrix wrote:

u seem to like it, thanks why dont you write ya own animatrix story, come on its fun

Yeah I think i will give it a try.

Cool, what story are you going to do

I might write one if I get bored
It'll most likely be about Agents... Possibly a rogue Agent.
Hmm *thinks*

Megtrix wrote:

I might write one if I get bored It'll most likely be about Agents... Possibly a rogue Agent. Hmm *thinks*

Now why dont that suprise me LOL,

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Possibly a rogue Agent

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Neo1 wrote:

Now why dont that suprise me LOL,

I have no idea
I have some half formed ideas for stories but I'm not sure about them... Like an Agent falling in love, a runaway Agent fighting the system, an Agent that is sick of following order after order etc.

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Like an Agent falling in love, a runaway Agent fighting the system, an Agent that is sick of following order after order

Cool, I like the idea of the the agent falling in love, even though love is just a word, its the connection the word means which is important

Deeindamatrix wrote:

Cool, I like the idea of the the agent falling in love, even though love is just a word, its the connection the word means which is important

OK, I've started it but it's not written as an Animatrix episode. It's a fanfic So when I'm happy with it I'll post it in my own thread This is the beginning of it:

Day after day... Order after order. I'm bound to the system, yet I feel so compelled to fight it. Agent Strife acts like he has some form of control over me, he commands and expects me to follow. Agent Beech acts like she is his servant, mind you we were both programmed that way, just as he was programmed to command. So I expect he was surprised, if he could "feel" such a thing, when I decided to rebel.

Cool, is that a monolouge of your agent?

Well it's more of a narrative, because like I said, it's gonna be a fanfic, not an Animatrix script type thing.
But yeah, it's his thoughts

Ok its a really good start come on going

My real life started as I opened my eyes for the first time, all I felt was pain, just a horrible blinding light everywhere, I think I passed out after just a moment of it. I awoke later and found myself being pulled out of a putrid smelling tank, that looked like it contained a mix of embriotic fluid and human waste. My eyes worked now, mostly, but I was aware that my entire body ached badly. I couldn't take the pain and blacked out again without being able to comprehend what was happening around me.

This time when I opened my eyes I saw leaves. Bright, green glistening in the early morning light. I sat up and looked around at a lovely little glade, lush grass surrounded by wonderful trees, shrubs, and flowers, and as I looked closer, fruits and berries. And a small steam gurgled by at one end of the clearing.

I inspected myself and found that I had small metal lined holes on my arms and back. But almost all the muscle pain was gone and I felt good. I was clothed in a loose tunic and and tattered pants. There was a complicated looking medical monitoring device that sat passively displaying my heartbeat, and many other things from the looks of it. It and the illuminated and slightly blue tinged ceiling far above where the only things that looked out of place.

"Keevo, your awake at last." A voice, female, rang out from behind me. I turned to see who had called my name and saw a beautiful woman walking towards me caring a tray of food. She sat down on the blanket I was on and said, "my name is Cat, here I know you must be hungry, eat while I explain whats happened to you. I realized then that I was incredibly hungry and ate ravenously while she explained everything.

About the machines, the war that's now ended, about Moroheous and Neo, and about how I was one of the new arrivals to the Real World. She explained that this was the first time I had ever eaten my food. And it tasted so good. She also told me something else, she told me that humans destroyed the ecosystem on earth and there was permanent cloud cover. She told me that some of the robots went into space... and that they brought some of us with them as a sort of back up power supply while also gathering as much sunlight as they could. When the war ended, the machines seemed to show something almost resembling kindness to people who woke up out here. They built us this place, this massive enclosure on there much more massive ship. They pretty much leave us alone, but monitor us heavily, they may even be planing on relocating us to a distant star, a new earth. The harshest they get is when they tell us not to leave the enclosure, and there pretty polite about it then. They seem to have a fascination with life and had brought with them a collection of viable seeds that survived the radiation. That's how this place was created, even though its all gone on earth due to the nuclear winter.

She showed me then, because she said seeing is the only way to really comprehend first coming into the real world. There where large windows on earthier side of the enclosure, as I stood looking out I saw the vast blackness of space, covered by by the twinkling heavens, I felt serene. And I saw the rest of ship. It was huge. Machines of all sorts covered its hull, buzzing with a never ending drive to accomplish the job at hand.

I hear things aren't going quit as well back on earth... but, I'm having a fine time here, and its a hell of a lot better than my old, fake, unimportant life. But I am curious what the machines have in mind for us...

Life on this ship really is pretty good. In the Construct I had been an average under achiever. I worked at a screen printing shop, and smoked most of my pay away. I hung out with my stoner friends or sat around by myself, and that was mostly it. I fantasized often about everything around me falling apart, and something new replacing it. I never wrote the novel I was going to write or got the good job I deserved. And now I'm here, and it was actually all fake. Whats even weirder is that the Real World for me is a giant space ship headed... somewhere.

The other people here all seem to get along well for the most part, but it does get a little boring sometimes. We spend allot of time building structures out of the materials provided for us, mostly this super light weight metallic substance. The crops do not really require much work besides pruning and harvesting, the machines leave this for us to do. About 70 percent of our bubble's floor is grass covered, trees, ponds, streams, and small gardens cover the rest. Our makeshift homes lines base of the giant walls, with the huge bay windows directly above them, letting the astral view pure in above us, but sometimes being blocked by the giant solar sales that shimmered in the blackness, collecting vast amounts of energy.

One day some of us were rooting through some supply canisters in the back of a storage room and found a bunch of different varieties of seeds. I came across all sorts of exotic herb and flower seeds in one of them. We gave them to the gardeners group and continued on foraging, Cat found these great anti-grav jump boots and hover cycles, that helps pass the time, (you can reverse the grav drive and actually stick to the sky-like ceiling and look down at the huge, wonderful almost Eden like gardens).

Years past. We mostly like to sit in a circle in the woods, smoke billowing out of bamboo pipes, discussing our situation, and wondering where were headed. I don't really care, because when you get free health care, free food (they also provided us with tons of this pre-made gruel crap, so if we ever get to lazy, we will still be able to eat, yuk) good company, and great smoke, its just hard to be discontent.... I lay back and ate some delicious potato stew, and pondered the trees waiving in the simulated wind. Pretending not to know that we are all constantly being monitored, and kept alive by a bunch of machines, who totally control our fate.

petitiononline.com...

My lastest petition is for a animatrix 2 to be made so if you agree sign it please, I want another animatrix showing more from the matrix world.

Dee man i signed the petition,

come on guy and girls. lets sign the thing so that we can get we want and that is more animatrix.

thanks deffinatly gathering speed now i hope it keeps up

i just realised my petition is now on google. Hopefully it make it be used more so far 80 signitures. Sign it now!

Ya'll do realize of course that the 3 Matrix Movies alone made over 1.5 BILLION dollars, right? Quite a worldwide following if you ask me. If anyone, it'll be Warner Bros making big plans for an "Animatrix 2", cause it and anything else with the green word "Matrix" on it is gonna make bank.

And with all due respect, it's pretty lame to think that peons like us could get our stories in it. That job is left to the Wachowskis and the greatest innovative minds working in the anime industry.

Not to say some of your stories and ideas aren't good enough, all the same .


As for me, I'd love to see something new -- a facet of the matrix introduced which could only be conceived by its creators, and there are many yet to be revealed.

the petition is in general for them to make an animatrix 2. Not just for us to have them make our ideas

i might write a script for this animatrix 2 idea

any ideas for stories?

Deeindamatrix wrote:

the petition is in general for them to make an animatrix 2. Not just for us to have them make our ideas

I know. And I suppose it's good to show they have a specific fan base and market for such a project.

But the fact is, it's not them to be writing to -- it's the Wachowskis. They're the ones in power now. But the thing is, they don't cater to fans. If they feel the inspiration to make it then they'll make it.

the sory is coing to be about if the matrix found a way to get in to the traning programs i cant think of the title and i cant think of who should be in this story

actualy if u all hep me to write this script i will put your names on it so if u wanna help me plz dont hezatate to put your ideas to me