»Mobil Ave Neo's Matrix 4: Program Revolutions«

I finally finished the story on august 20th 2006. You can read it in one go, without the chit-chat in between, in this word document:

Excellent my opposite!

Thoroughly enjoyed reading that, a little sad though *Sob*

Now are you absolutely sure that it was Agent Johnson?

I'd definately like to hear & see more. Thanks Neo

...Seraph begins fighting with the twins.
He is much more faster then them. So most of the time he hits them before they are able to transform into air.

In between the punches and kicks: "Oracle...get on the train! Get out of here!"

The train comes running into the station; while Seraph keeps distracting the twins, the Oracle and Sati run into the train.

Sati is startled by the man she had always find scary: the Trainman. The Oracle seemed to have suspected this...
The Trainman points a gun at them. Some people in the train begin to scream.
"Aah shut up!", says the Trainman and he pulls the emergency-brake. "Come on, follow me into the tunnel"

A few hundred meters into the tunnel there is a maintenance-passage where a 'familiar' green door resides. When they enter it, they are in the hallway of doors.
Again they walk a few meters further on, still threatened by the gun of the Trainman. Then they enter another door, which ends up into a room of the Merovingian's chateau.

"hahahahahahahaha...I never thought I would see the day to meet you woman!"...
"But yet here I am, eye to eye with the most powerfull woman in the Matrix. The problem is you are too old for me, otherwise I would trade you in for my precious Persephone...hahahahahaha"...

"Looking at your wise face, I gather you already know WHY you are here. You have the power to know the WHY woman. But I think I will explain it anyway, just to see the reaction of the beautiful Sati!"

"Our so called saviour Neo is resting within the Source. There are only two programs in both of the wide worlds capable of compiling him back to life: you and the great Architect. Unfortunatly, the old fart is uncorruptable and he hardly leaves his protected little shell. And even if the old math-teacher would be willing to help us, his parameters would prevent him. He is in no way allowed to unbalance the equation, which is the very thing he would acomplish by releasing Neo. He would then be appreciated as an exile, thus he would be deleted.
So in short, YOU are to only one capable of doing the job. If you don't, I will kill the precious Sati and take away your eyes. And what would the Matrix be without them...hahahahahhaha"

The Oracle:
"You are a bastard, but you can't help it. You are too ignorant to ever see past any values, let alone choices!. But you will have it your way, I know what I am supposed to do"

Mero:
"Very wise decision woman. I only have two values in my life woman: cause and effect. The cause was a failing simulation, the effect was the emergence of you, woman! Now, the cause was a rebellious program, the effect will be: TOTAL CHAOS...hahahahha"...

"There is one thing I am questioning though: why did you come to the station while you knew you might get caught?"

The Oracle:
"Well like you said...The cause is Sati or better phrased: love, the effect is me complying to your evil wishes. You would have gotten to Sati one way or the other, so I decided to comply in order to prevent more violence"

In the meanwhile the twins have joined the room.

Twin 1: "this little wingless ape is aggrevating"
Twin 2: "you should have seen his face when we told him about the trap though. He just looked like a human."
Both the Twins make a loud evil laugh.

Mero:
"Enough! Take Sati to the dungeon"

Sati seems to be (still) in shock. She doesn't resist the twins though.

The Oracle:
"Don't worry my child! Everything will be allright. Every beginning has an end!"

Mero:
"Hahahaha yes...an end we will have...soon!"...
"Trainman, take the Oracle to Mobil Avenue!"

To be continued...

The Merovingian goes to the lounge-room where his wife Persephone awaits him.

Persephone:
"Darling, are you sure about what you just did? The Oracle always seems to be sure of the outcome of things. Isn't it troubling you that she is so calm with this?"

Mero:
"My cherie, don't worry. I have been informed well. She would even give her life for Sati; this girl is somehow important to her. I think it is related to our beloved saviour. But the Oracle cannot predict the actions of the anomalous Neo. Nonetheless, neither can I. But I seem to be ahead of things. And if we not ever take a risk, how can we ever have a change?
The fortune-teller is taking a risk; I am taking a risk; let the games begin! Cheers my cherie!"

Persephone still looks worried...

Persephone:
"Will the big Architect allow all this?"

Mero:
"Well I realise that we are going beyond the bounderies of our deal with him. But I have the feeling he will agree on this. His purpose is to balance the equation. At the moment this requires him only to delete a few rogue exiles which I do not want in my organisation. So he is a bit bored so to speak. Unleashing Neo would make his purpose more tense again"

Persephone:
"Still I am afraid. He is so ruthless"

Mero:
"Hahaha darling...so am I! Don't worry, the chateau is entirely encrypted and I have doubled the security. Nothing will harm us. Again, my cherie, cheers!"

Persephone:
"Cheers darling!"

After the Merovingian finishes his drink he walks out of the lounge and says: "My cherie, I have bussiness to take care of, so au revoir"

Mero approaches the twins who are awaiting him in the hallway of the chateau.

"boys I need you now more than ever. The old whiner is never going to agree on this. I just told my wife the partial truth, to comfort her. He is always so straight to bussiness, he has no fun! nondedju da la merde"...

"boys prepare yourselfs for the battle. I'll be right back"

Mero enters another room to access a computer. He opens an ecrypted file by typing a password.
The file is titled: entry-codes to Mobil Ave.
After writing it to a disk, Mero returns to the hallway.

"Come on boys, if we take backdoor #316 we will be just in time"

They open a door from the chateau and enter the hallway of doors. They walk a few hundred meters, taking a few corners. Then they enter a door again.
They end up opening a maintenance-door at the subway station "The Spring Garden".

Mero:
"Aah magnificent. Just like I planned; I hear the train coming"

The subway station "The Spring Garden" is the secret access-point to Mobil Ave. When you apply the entry-codes there, a communications-gate will open up.

The train arrives. There is blood on one of the windows. People are screaming. The Oracle is standing among the passengers, still very calm. Agent Thompson stands near her with a smoking gun.
The Trainman lays dead on the floor.

Mero:
"Boys, do what you supposed to do!"

The twins approach agent Thompson, who immediately reaches for his ear-piece.
A second later, two of the other passengers morph into the agents Jackson and Johnson.

Mero:
"Get those bureaucratic bastards out of the train!"

Meanwhile all the passengers run away screaming from the train and exiting the station.

The agents shoot at the twins, but offcourse this has no affect. The Merovingian seems to be much less nervous, now that their guns have empty chambers.

One of the twins punches agent Jackson out of the train through the window.

Mero:
"Merde!"

Mero sees that agent Johnson reaches out to the body of the Trainman to reach for his gun.
Mero doesn't hesitate and starts to run at him. When he is close enough he takes a strong jump at him and kicks him hard in the back.
Quickly Mero takes the gun from the Trainman and empties it in the back of agent Johnson.
"Take that you pencil-pusher! hahahahahaha...it's been a long time since I've been part of the action!"...

"Hurry boys, or else this piece of shit will find himself another host to abuse!"

One of the twins is allready fighting agent Jackson outside of the train.
The other twin grabs agent Thompson and throws him over his shoulder, right out of the train.

Both twins:
"Go boss!"

Mero runs to the front cabin and uploads the disk into the steering-computer.

"Haha here we go, fortune-teller!"

The train begins to move. While it runs into the tunnel, we hear a modem-like sound. The train dissappears from our sight...

Excellent Neo! Dammit, I have to wait for the next installment!

So Merv can get his hands dirty, wonders never cease to amaze

Pencil-pusher ? That was a nice touch

Awaiting the next installment...

Man! Kick-Ass so far. Keep going. Need to hear more.

Thanks for your support guys!
I am too tired now, but I will continue as soon as I can!

very nice. Very nice, indeed...

We hear a little echo in the quiet environment of Mobil Ave. An old, slighty aggrevated man is repeatedly walking from one side of the station to the other.

The man looks up when he hears a modem-like sound. Just a few seconds later the train comes roling into the station.

The doors of the train open up...

Mero:
"Ladies first!"

The Oracle comes walking out of the train, followed by the Merovingian.

Mero:
"Archibald! What a pleasant surprise! It's such a honour that you might attempt to stop me yourself. I feel very important all of a sudden. Hahaha"

The Architect:
"There's no predication in both worlds that would make me think that I could pursuade you. I am here to exchange information with my opposed factor, the intuitive program that has proofed to be most valueable to both of our worlds"

Mero:
"Well I cannot stop you, now can I. The only program that has higher powers in here is the Trainman, but he is no longer among us. Our powers are equal down here Archibald...weak, just like humans"...

"How about that heey Archibald. You and me, one on one. We could have a great laugh together. But you probably would indicate that fighting is too inefficient for you and that it is not amongst your parameters. Hahaha. But do go ahead! Try to convince the fortune-teller with your techno-babble. I owe you that much respect."

The Architect:
"Mother, as much as I regret that you almost eliminated my function by balancing the equation yourself, ergo letting the two uncontrollable variables merge into one, leading to a stabilized equation, approaching almost mathematical precision, I do not wish for you to cancel out your efforts again."

The Oracle:
"Don't bother, Architect. I am here to do, what I am here to do."

The Architect:
"Very well then. It is no longer efficient for me to utilize my time here."

Just seconds after that the Architect dissappears from Mobil Avenue. It very much looks like the digitised-way in how the rebels got out of the Matrix through the phone-lines in M1.

Mero:
"Well, Oracle, shouldn't you go after him? Into the Source to complete your mission of faith?"

The Oracle:
"I will! Why don't you join me then?"

Mero:
"Hahaha, you know I cannot do that. The Source would pulverize me and never let me go free again"...

"Listen to me carefully fortune-teller. You will only compile Neo from his source-code. You will NOT execute him as a program yet! If Neo comes in here in an awakened state, Sati will die! That's a promise! And you, out of all programs, know that I will allways keep to my promises!"

The Oracle:
"Don't worry, you will get exactly what you want. Give me a few minutes if you please, I haven't used my compiling-structures for quite a while now. I had to re-learn some sub-routines thanks to you terminating my shell back then."

Mero:
"Sure, sure. Patience is a virtue I lack, but everything has a price!"

The Oracle dissappears from Mobil Avenue in the same way that the Architect did.

Mero walks up to a bench and sits down. He closes his eyes and thinks about his scheme with Neo.

To be continued...

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Sorry Mobil. Tried to help but it was not seen that way. I do not want to anger you so have removed this post.

[EDIT]This is a response to a post originally posted by MarcDaniel. He all of a sudden removed all of his posts, withdrawing his opinions. It think of this as a missed opportunity. Why not share your thoughts?[/EDIT]

MarcDaniel,

You know I have appreciated -some- of your comments in our private chats.
But this goes a bit too far to my opinion.

I am not writing a book. I am just writing a possible setting for a fourth Matrix movie.
The beauty of this, is that the people on this forum can imagine how everything looks like. This is because they have (probably) seen the trilogy.

I know for instance that I don't use many french words in the dialogues with the Merovinigan. That's because I simply am not good at french
I assume that the people on this forum will get the point.

So I request you nicely to respect my story as it is. Suggestions are welcome (either private or public), but don't re-write it as a whole please.

We know that the Architect speaks in rather difficult words. But you reached the limit. Man, it gave me a headache. The Architect is not THAT difficult

So losen up Marc. I am just writing this for fun; let's keep it that way.

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[EDIT]This is a response to a post originally posted by MarcDaniel. He all of a sudden removed all of his posts, withdrawing his opinions. It think of this as a missed opportunity. Why not share your thoughts?[/EDIT]

You made it look like a competition this way, not me.

But hey, who am I to judge?

For the other folks: I will continue my story offcourse any time soon.

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Please continue with your story. It seems to be getting good.

Cheers.

[EDIT]This is a response to a post originally posted by MarcDaniel. He all of a sudden removed all of his posts, withdrawing his opinions. It think of this as a missed opportunity. Why not share your thoughts?[/EDIT]

I didn't exactly ASK for your help.
We just red each other's story and you were making suggestions. Some of them I like, some of them not.
And we indeed did have fun with it.

Now this is the last I have said about it.
I don't want to turn this thread into a flame.

[EDIT]This is a response to a post originally posted by MarcDaniel. He all of a sudden removed all of his posts, withdrawing his opinions. It think of this as a missed opportunity. Why not share your thoughts?[/EDIT]

Because of your last IM to me you were enraged so I felt removing my post to be the best thing to do since I believe they were taken the wrong way: Taken as an attack or competitive thing when I truly was only trying to aid. If my posts are not aiding you then they best not be on here and you should continue with your awesome story. I am sorry my posts were taken in a way they were not intended. I can not change the way you took them, I can only say they were not meant to be taken that way. If you do require help on anything in the future, please clearly message me about it and I will be more than happy to do so, but I will not take the initiative like I did this time round.

Please continue with your story.

Peace.

You must have the last word don't you?
Destroying the fun for others.

You could have let the users judge about your so called suggestions to me.

But instead you went chicken and removed it all.
I was never enraged. Just told you the truth about what I think of your actions.

Now please, go write your own story-thread.

Marcdaniel wrote:

<removed> Could be taken negatively.

Damn, this is so childish.

Why, why, why Mr. Daniel...Why do you remove?

You are entitled to your opinion. Even if it makes me hit the roof, why remove it?

Enjoy free press!

Now folks do you want me to continue on the story?
It's boiling in my head, but when I start to write, it really comes out.

Feel free to ask questions and debate parts of my story though. You can do it here or contact me on MSN.
Don't let MarcDaniel discourage you. I am very open and not enraged at all (although, not that quickly

Hmmmm....

I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! Please continue, I am especially curious at to the whearabouts of Seraph. Did the twins kill him. I think it's awesome that Mero isn't just sitting around giving orders.

Yeah, comon Neo give us MORE!

If the trilogy is over, matrix-explained is where the party will be!



Can't wait to hear what happens next, m-a-n!

The Merovingian's day-dream about his scheme with Neo is disturbed when he hears a sound. It is the same sound he had heard when the Oracle and the Architect had left the station.

When Mero opens his eyes, he sees the Oracle sitting on her knees. She holds Neo's head; the rest of Neo's body is lying on the ground. We see that he wears the same clothes as in his appearance in Mobil Ave at the beginning of M3.

Mero immediately suspects something and yells:
"Why are you holding him like that woman?"

The Oracle:
"Calm down. His purpose belongs in the Source. His code does not have access to this area. I had to hold him in order to transfer him with me to this place"

Mero:
"Yes, yes, I see. Now execute him and get away from him!"

The Oracle:
"No"

Mero:
"What do you mean with 'no'? You know the deal!"

The Oracle:
"Oh I do, I just would like to know what you are planning to do with him now that you have him. My intuition tells me that you are going to leave me here. So what harm could I ever do to your evil scheme with the information you give me?"

Mero:
"Why should I even take the risk woman? It is MY bussiness to know, not yours. This is the point where you fail woman. It proofs us that your days are over! Now execute the program Neo, or else I will give Sati a very painfull death!"

The Oracle looks sad, but she obeys.
She puts her hand into Neo's head (a bit like Neo did put his hand into Trinity's heart in M2). Again we hear a sound and immediatly the Oracle pulls her hand back. A few seconds later, Neo opens his eyes and sits up. The first person he sees is the Merovingian (the Oracle has moved back according to the instructions of the Merovingian).
From the Merovingian's perspective, we see Neo in golden code for a while (just like Seraph has in M2).

Neo:
"You? Again? Am I dreaming? I hope so, because I don't like the image of this"

Mero:
"Welcome back to the living Neo! You are far from dreaming!"

Neo looks around the station. As he spots the Oracle, we see a little happy twinkle in his eyes.

Neo:
"Oracle! What are you doing here with him?"

The Oracle:
"I am doing what I am supposed to do, Neo my friend"
She looks at the Merovingian, who gives her a threatening look. She decides to comply...

"He will guide you further on. My purpose in this matter has been furfilled. I am sorry Neo, but I have to go now"

Without waiting for an answer she uploads herself to the Source again.

Neo:
"Oracle!...where did she go?"

Mero:
"She appearantly is running from you. She fears you."

Neo:
"Why would she fear me?"

Mero:
"Because she is the cause and your suffering has been the effect. It was she who used you in her little game. It was she who took away the life of your beloved Trinity. She used you for the continuation of the Matrix"

When Mero expresses the name Trinity, we see another twinkle in Neo's eyes.

Neo:
"Trinity...but how...how?"

Mero:
"I know you have many questions. If you think about it, the Oracle never gave you any straight answers. I don't have anything to hide from you, because I don't serve this so called system. So if you want answers, you have to join me!"

Neo:
"Join you where?"

Mero:
"The Matrix offcourse. Wake up Neo!"...

Neo looks confused. The Merovingian sees this and he begins walking to the train.

Mero:
"The train is due to leave! All aboard!"

Neo stands up, but he is still confused and in doubt.

Mero:
"Remember how Trinity saved you from this hell-hole. I know that I am not as cute as she is, but I am your only way out of here Neo."

Neo still hesitates...looks around the station again.

Neo:
"Oracle! Where are you? What is all this? Can I ever trust the frenchman?"

Mero waits a few seconds...

Mero:
"You see! The fortune-teller has left you behind as garbage. She doesn't know the answers, so that's why she has chosen the easy way and has returned to the Source"....

"Come on Neo, her days are over now. You are the future!"

Neo thinks for a moment, then decides to get on the train.
His face is still full of distrust. But he feels that he has no choice at this point.

The train-doors close and they go off to the Matrix...

To be continued...

It just gets better and better. A better reference to the Oracle's hand in Neo would be Neo's hand in Trinity, of course it was in code, in fact Smith's hand was surrounded by something, so maybe it looked the same.