»Mobil Ave Neo's Matrix 4: Program Revolutions«

Yes you are right. It would more look like the scene where Neo 're-starts' Trinity's digital heart.

In my scene, the Oracle puts her hand in his head because that's where the centre of the program Neo is residing: his now by AI driven mind.

I will change it in my story, thanks for the suggestion.

your story is excellent mobil_ave

it brings me back to my "bullshit" zelda analogy

the power of the one is now the "triforce" that everyone seeks to rule the world(matrix)

the source is the sacred realm where the power resides

i love this analogy...brings two of my favourite things EVER together

Great story Neo!

Waiting for the next installment

Mobil,

To echo the comments from others, very nice work. I especially like the way you're blending in elements from the devil's (Merv) temptation of Christ (Neo).

Thanks for the support guys!

Will continue as soon as I can.
I am fuelling my inspiration

Another Smith wrote:

Great story Neo! Waiting for the next installment:)

Yea... Mr. Anderson

Its been awhile where is the rest?

Yeah sorry folks.
I had alot on my mind lately.
And when I am here, I prefer debating/discussing above story-telling.

But rest assured. I'll try to put in another episode this weekend!

Stay tuned...

i will be waiting for you neo!

look you are going to continue that story or im gonna go crazy insane bonkers

Neo, i need the rest of the story. I need it....I want it....we NEED YOU NEO to finish the story.

Yeah..Why are we waiting?
Why are we waiting?

Como'n Neo - -Next installment please!

im going insane dude....

Damn, yes I know I am dissapointing you guys.
It's all in my head, just don't had the time and feeling do write it down again.

Tomorrow (wednesday) I will force myself to write the next installment; that's a promise!

YIPEE

freaking fantastic!

The train with Mero and Neo arrives at the station "The Spring Garden".

Mero:

"I hope you still know that trick to stop bullets"

Neo:

"Why?"

Mero:

"Never mind. You will notice what I mean when you get off this train"

Neo gets off the train.
A few seconds later some people in the station who spot Neo morph into agents. Again Neo is confronted with agent Thompson, Johnson and Jackson.

Neo:

"Hiya fellas. I didn't miss the sight of you, but I did miss the joy of beating the crap out of you"

The agents begin to shoot at him. As we know, Neo has no problem stopping the bullets.

What follows then is a kind of mix between the burly brawl from M2 and the fight at the rebel meetingpoint at the beginning of M2. The agents get their asses wooped and each time they morph into a new person within or near the trainstation.

Mero stays out of sight and reaches for a cell-phone.
He calls the ghost-twins.

twin 1:

"Yes?"

Mero:

"Where in the hell are you? Get your airy asses to Spring Garden as soon as possible and my punishment will be less terrifying."

twin 1:

"Those agents kept bothering us boss and we figured that your acquired treasure would defend you"

Mero:

"Nonde nonde nonde-dju de la merde! Get over here now. I need for you to scare the people away from the area of the station. Otherwise the agents won't give us a chance to move along!"

Mero immediately hangs up the phone.

twin 1:

"We are getting aggrevated"

twin 2:

"Yes we are"

In the meanwhile Neo makes some pretty impressive moves.
He avoids agent Jackson's punch, quickly grabs his gun from his holster and shoots all three agents with three efficient shots in the head.

A few seconds later they come running into the station again. The police seemed to have arrived now also...

A swat-team comes running in from both sides of the station and orders Neo to freeze...

Neo stops the bullets from both sides by holding one hand up to the left and the other hand up to the right.

The ghost-twins have arrived at the station. They see the swat-cars and they hear the bullets go off.

twin 2:

"Why don't we let this arrogant piece of shit die in that bullet-rain?"

twin 1:

"Yeah. He doesn't value us, never shows any graditute"

The swats have emptied their guns on Neo. He drops all the bullets on the floor and he runs at the swats on the left-side of the station.
He smashes the swats, breaking their necks and spines as he goes. He seems to enjoy killing them, he seems enraged.

The swats on the right-side have reloaded most of their guns. Neo uses two of the swats as a shield and after that he quickly grabs and throws two other swat-members to the team on the other side.
After that he grabs a machine-gun from a swat-member that has just reloaded it.

What we get to see then looks a bit like the lobby scene from M1.
Neo dodges and shoots, making his way to the right-side of the station.
When his gun is empty he jumps into the group using some whirlwind kicks.

Mero's head carefully sticks out of the steering-cabin...

Mero:

"Neo, we must escape through the tunnel, otherwise this geeks will keep coming over and over again"

Mero and Neo quickly walk into the tunnel.

Mero:

"Here! Over here there is a shaft that leads to the street. But then you would have to fly like hell"...

"Please take me with you?"

Neo:

"Why should I you french fag!"

Mero:

"Because I know where things are in the Matrix; how to get the things you need. I have connections! And most important of all: I have all the answers to your questions. I don't serve this system!"

The agents have entered the tunnel. They start to shoot.

Mero:

"Please Neo, what do you have to loose?"

Neo:

"Well a free flight won't hurt"

They enter the streets through the shaft.

Neo gathers strenght to fly off at high speed. He leaves Mero behind.

Mero:

"Neo! You promised!'"

The swats begin to surround the Merovingian and order him to freeze.
We see some fluids extending within his pants.
Then all of a sudden Neo comes flying back like a rocket and picks up Mero just like he picked up Morpheus and the Keymaker in M2.

Neo (shouting a little, because of the air-fluctuation caused by his flying):

"Haha sorry pal. I just wanted to startle you off abit...
The devil himself peeing in his pants. Even Smith would have handled it with more dignity. Your answers better be good, not wasting my time!
I guess you want to go to the mountains? To your chateau?"

Mero (still trying to catch his breath) :

"Yes...please..."

Neo:

"Okidoki; off we go! Hold on!"

Neo increases his flying-speed.
He extends his left hand like superman and with his right hand he holds the Merovingian by his collar.

They fly off to the chateau...

To be continued...

Cool Neo...

I just had visions of Merv the perv dangling in the air!

interesting....

Mobil, please post more.

I will continue on the story in the coming week.

It will be an interesting conversation between Neo and Mero. Unveiling stuff about Mero and the Matrix.

OMG that sounds really cool

Hey this sounds more like a Matrix tv series than a fourth part of matrix.
By the way, this story is really cool.

Go on Neo... I came here by casuality and I got sticked here because of your awasome version of matrix.

bye,
hypno, from Argentina

BTW there is a hoax sinopsis of a fourth sequel of matrix, written by a spanish guy, but it is really, really interesting too.
If someone is interested, just tell me.

greetz,
hypno

I'm interested. hit me