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What I would like to see in Matrix 4 (and how I would rewrite Matrix 3)

 

Neotrin

Matrix 4-The Super Matrix---FINALLY!  

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I know that many people loved the story just as it ended in The Matrix Revolutions; but there are also many who wished that it would continue on. I’m one of the latter. I saw a whole new level where it could go. So, with much persistence I wrote this a new episode called Matrix 4-The Super Matrix.

The story paints a picture of what might have happened before The Matrix and after The Matrix Revolutions; sort of a prequel/sequel, I guess, and a bit of a mind bender, if I do say so myself. The full-length screenplay can be downloaded from thesupermatrix.com...

For those of you who've read my previous story, Matrix Rememory (at matrixrememory.com...), yes...many of the ideas have carried over and its mysteries are revealed, but this is not a direct continuation from that story. Instead, Matrix 4-The Super Matrix picks up directly where Matrix Revolutions ended. Hopefully, it has the potential to be made into a fourth movie, the gods (i.e. The Wachowski Brothers) willing.

If you read it, come back here and let me know what you think. Thanks and happy reading. PD Wood

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analyze this....  

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I'm telling you seriously, The Matrix Trilogy is one of the greatest things that ever been created. However, with all of it's power and wisdom, The Trilogy relies on an infinite number of philosophies, religious concepts, historical questions, scientific ideas, and of course lots of movie genres. Basically, every movie that deals with at least one of these ideas can be considered as a parallel or complementary to The Trilogy. Therefore, my idea for continuing
The Matrix Trilogy is based on combining it's plot with plots of parallel/similar
films. The idea is to create something that will be even more advanced then The Trilogy as we know it. If you look on the plots of all of the Trilogy's movies, you realize that things started to happen much before the machines rebelled against humanity and created the first matrix. There is a whole history about what brought the human race to it's defeat (what makes an idea for thinking about an option of a pre-matrix movie or set of movies). Moreover, even after Revolutions things are very far from being done. I propose that the human race will initiate it's struggle against the machines and the human rebellions will be on a larger scale (with more and more people that will free themselves from the matrix). Finally, and after another century of war, humans will finally beat the machines and a new path should be established. The awakened human race should merge and explore the empty universe (or universes) that surround it. Of course, more and more things can happen (wars with other human or alien civilizations from the gulf of space).

The Potential Universe Starts!
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Matrix after the Trilogy  

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Ro-man,

Have you formulated these comments based on having read my screenplay? Or are you just musing about the Matrix Trilogy in general? Either way, many good points.

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So far so good. I'm reading your script and I find it really vivid and interesting. I promise to return with more replies.

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Reading Matrix 4  

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Ro-man,

I'm glad you're liking it so far. I look forward to your additional comments with great anticipation.

PD Wood

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Matrix 4-The Super Matrix:Now In True Screenplay Format  

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Hi all,

For anyone who's interested, I've just posted a version of Matrix 4-The Super Matrix that is now in "official screenplay format". I made this new version because so many people complained that the screenplay wasn't following the guidelines of the screenwriter's industry. Enough of you were put off to the point of not reading it because of the formatting. Couldn't have that!

So here it is. You can download it from thesupermatrix.com... The old version is still on my site, too, for those of you who prefer it.

For those who didn't read the earlier thread, Matrix 4-The Super Matrix is a completely new extension of the Matrix Trilogy and a bit of a mind bender, if I do say so myself. The story paints a picture of what might have happened before The Matrix and after The Matrix Revolutions; sort of a prequel/sequel, I guess.

And, as always, please come back here and let me know what you think of it. I need the feedback.

Thanks, PD Wood

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The story has been layed out.  

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There is already a backround of what happened before Neo, or The Matrix. Also, the story has been continuing ever seince the end of the movies... And here is also no doubt of more to come.

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Completely different turn  

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Aztersik,

Yes, it's true; there is already a background of what happens before Neo and the Matrix...and also plenty going on after the end of the movies. But...if you read my story, I think you'll see how it is a completely different turn to the whole Trilogy.

And if you read it, I'll be glad to talk to you about whether you think it works or not.

Thanks, PD Wood

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Neotrin wrote:

Aztersik,

Yes, it's true; there is already a background of what happens before Neo and the Matrix...and also plenty going on after the end of the movies. But...if you read my story, I think you'll see how it is a completely different turn to the whole Trilogy.

And if you read it, I'll be glad to talk to you about whether you think it works or not.

Thanks, PD Wood


I'm glad you understand. Sorry about interfering like that, it sure be your own right as a fan to do what you must to honor the trilogy. I'm looking foward to this Smile

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No Interference  

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No interference taken. I hope it stands up to your standards of where the story should go.

I look forward to your comments.

PD Wood

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Also, check your pm's Neotrin... If theres any room at all, would be nice to see maybe a cameo appearance from him or someone working for him. Smile

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Its me...., me me me !  

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The play scenario keeps on surprising more and more. I think that there is enough material to make a new Matrix Trilogy.
Really, everything is getting really cool.

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Ro-man,

Glad you like it so much. Let's hope the Wachowski brothers are listening!

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Wow !  

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I think that there is enough material in this play to make more then one movie. It is nearly endless. I'm curious where you got the ideas for all the twists and plot. From what I understood so far, there might be some influences from the various theories of Matrix Explained.
By the way, do you majoring in writing ?

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Ro-man,

Appreciate all the nice words.

There is definitely a lot going on in the story. The twists came to me almost in a flash but the story line and plot development took forever to finalize. I had to do lots of rewriting; it's amazing were rewriting will take you!

Believe it or not, I purposely avoided reading Matrix stories and ideas while I was writing all this stuff; too much chance of absorbing it subliminally and having it come out later.

And, no, I don't major in writing. But I do love to write.

Thanks for the feedback. Glad you enjoyed the story.

PD Wood

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well....  

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Do you plan to write more stuff ?
By the way, did the Wachowski brothers returned to you ?
Do you know any other cool members in these Matrix forums?

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and more....  

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I have some ideas of naming the fourth movie of matrix:

"The Super Matrix - The Chronicles of Neo"

"The Matrix Revelations"

"Beyond The Matrix"

"The Matrix Universe - The Chronicles of Zion"



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I have some ideas of naming the fourth movie of matrix:

"The Super Matrix - The Chronicles of Neo"

"The Matrix Revelations"

"Beyond The Matrix"

"The Matrix Universe - The Chronicles of Zion"



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Matrix 4 Names  

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Ro-man,

I plan to write more screenplays...but only ones that are completely original.

No word from the Wachoswki brothers yet; keep your fingers tied in a knot.

I like "The Matrix Revelations", and "Beyond The Matrix"; not so sure about the other two. I actually already own the domain, matrixrevelations.com, just in case.

Thanks, PD Wood

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another point ....  

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So, and back to the plot of the play, there is something that now is easier to understand. There are several important scenes that are linked to what I was reading in the play. The first scene is from the first Matrix movie, when Agent
Smith (an agent back then) was interrogating Morpheus (evolution and new historical perspective). The other two scenes are from Matrix Reloaded, when Persephone had the conversation with Neo, Trinity, and Morpheus (clues from the past and some emotional connection) and the very well known conversation between Neo and The Architect (which was a good hint about "something big that is going on here...."). Of course, and finally, one of the major themes of Matrix Revolutions - Neo's affinity to the Source and to the machines (we need the machines, but why do they really need us?).

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Yes, there are some very key connections to the parts you are talking about...but, you must remember that, ultimately, the separation is complete from the point of view of my story. Neo's affinity to the Source is the only connection...but that doesn't happen decisively until he is awakened there.

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From your point of view, what is the main point of The Matrix Trilogy movies?
Whatthe

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Definitely, you can interpret The Matrix Trilogy from two major different perspectives. The first perspective is the affinity of Neo to the source. The second perspective is the relationship between the parameters of humanity, technology and the future of earth.

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Hello ?  

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Are you still here ?

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hmmmm....  

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Where did you got the idea about making the Source a biological/biochemical structure ?

By the way, do study biology?

Ahem, you stole my candies

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